高考英语作文高分词句

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第1篇:高考英语作文高分词句

高考高分英语作文写作技巧

摘 要:根据高考英语评分标准第五档的要求“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”。因此高考作文想获得高分,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在使用较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一,缺乏生气的文章,哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分,相反“有些错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高档(21~25分)。因此如何在高考英语作文拿高分,以下根据本人多年教学经验,给考生几点建议.

关键词:较多的词汇;丰富的句式;恰当的连接词

一、应用较多的词汇

应用了较多的词汇是指词汇使用的多样性、高级词汇的使用,词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。

1.词汇的多样性

同一个意思若使用不同的词汇表达,就使文章显得多样了。这样就不仅摆脱了千篇一律的窘境,也会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如:

I want to improve my English. -> I desire/intend to improve my English..

So → therefore, because of this, in this way, for this reason

2.高级词汇的使用

高级词汇指的是大纲中有但课本中出现的频率不高而实际中经常用到,或大纲中没有列入或没有实际要求,但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇(包括短语),比如make sense, cope with, make a difference, be buried in, 等, 都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生如能恰当地运用此类词汇,定会给文章增色不少。如:

Your efforts will be very important.→ Your efforts will make a great difference.

3.短语优先

单词的合理运用是优秀作文的基本要素;而恰当地使用短语,清楚、连贯地传递信息更能增添句子的文采,显示出作者的实力。如:

Suddenly I had a good idea.→ Suddenly I came up with a good idea./ All of a sudden a good idea occurred to me.

二、丰富的句式

考纲提及的“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。不少考生通篇文章都是简单句,或是同一句型,使得文章呆板单调,缺乏生气和活力,如有个学生写的下面这篇文章中的其中一段:

……First, you should be calm when you are speaking, otherwise you may make some mistakes and the mistake could make you lose confidence. Second, you should find some video of speech. It will improve your speaking skills. Third, you should often go to the playground and practice your speech.

……

而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩,生动、自然、流畅。丰富的句式包括各种从句、非谓语动词、感叹句、倒装句、强调句、复合结构、虚拟等语法结构。句式的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而能增加文章的文采。

1.长短句变换:简单句、并列句和复合句交替使用

短句简单明了、精简扼要;长句描述动作、表明主旨,一气呵成;长短句各有所长;在写作时应根据需要,交替使用简单句、并列句和复合句,已达到“长短错落有致,句式丰富多样”的效果,给阅卷老师以新鲜感。

If you work hard, you’ll make great progress.

→ Work hard, and you’ll make great progress.

2.并列句与简单句之间的相互转换

Li hua wants to become a college student, so she studies hard.

→Li hua studies hard so as to become a college student.

3.从句的使用

从句的正确合理运用可以使松散的表达更加紧密的联系起来,更好地表达作者的意图。例如定语从句的使用:

I’d love to make a friend. He is good at English and wants to learn Chinese.→ I’d love to make a friend who is good at English and wants to learn Chinese .

4.分词结构不能少

在所有高级语法中,使用独立主格结构和分词结构也是高分作文的妙招之一。而非谓语动词短语则可以使复合句变简单句,产生简洁明快,节构紧凑、表意灵巧的效果。例如状语从句与非谓语动词结构的转化:

After he had done his homework, he began to play computer games.

→ Having done his homework, he began to play computer games.

但如何能做到从句与分词之间的转化呢?学会了下面的口诀,改成独立主格或分词结构,马上就成为文章的亮点。

口诀:一去(去连词),二看(看主语),三改(改分词)。

例如: When he saw those pictures, he couldn’t help thinking of those days in the countryside.

→ Seeing those pictures, he couldn’t help thinking of those days in the countryside.

5.陈述不如倒装妙

倒装是一种最简单易行的使文章增加亮点的方法。只要掌握好以下的倒装句,足以应对高考书面表达。

(1)副词so,nor/nerther放在句首,表示前句的情况也适合另一人或事物。运用此倒装,可以避免句子的重复使用。

The boy is fond of music and so are his two sisters.

(2)以地点状语开头,使用完全倒装。尤其是在表达地点的句子时,如“一个建筑物位于什么位置,或什么地方有什么东西”都可以应用完全倒装。例如:

In the center of our school lies the teaching building.

(3)“only+状语”放在句首,主句使用部分倒装;例如:

Only by working hard can we reach our goal

(4)主动不如被动巧。考生在写作中很少使用被动语态,一是受中式思维的影响,二是怕出错。其实一篇文章中如果有一两句为被动语态,就会呈现句型的变化,使整个文章句型更丰富。

例如:很多学生在表达“离开教室时请务必关锁门窗”时,用“Make sure that you shut all the windows and doors before leaving the classroom.”, 如果写成“Make sure that all the windows and doors are shut before leaving the classroom. ”效果会更好。

三、恰当的连接词

恰当的连接词在英语作文中对篇章的衔接及连贯起着重要的作用,即使文章结构严谨、自然流畅、富有节奏,。但是有些考生没有采用连接词,结果文句松散,上下文七零八乱,应该避免。

总之,高考的书面表达重在积累和设计,设计出让阅卷老师看了眼前一亮的句子,写出有分词、强调、倒装、修辞的句子,使整篇文章词汇的多样性及句型丰富,并能有效地使用链接成分使文章连贯,方能在高考作文中拿高分。

作者:莫志娟

第2篇:高考英语作文高分

英语作文模板

第一类:观点对比

模板一:

The topic about … is becoming more and more popular in our school recently. There are two sides of opinion about it.

Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(Some students say … is their favorite.) they think that… (理由一).What’s more, …(理由二)。 Moreover, … (理由三)

However, others believe … is a better choice for three reasons. (然而,其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择,有三个方面的理由) to begin with, … (理由一)。 Next, 。。 In addition, …

From my point of view, the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that…(或者用:As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that…(依我来看,我坚决支持这种观点… that引导同位语从句)

模板二:

There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)。 But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people think that 观点一 。 In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一 .Furthermore, in the second place, 原因

二 。 So it goes without saying that 观点一 。

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二 。 In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一 。 On the other hand, 原因二 。 Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二 。

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二 。 It is not only because , but also because 。 The more , the more 。

第二类:好处与坏处的对比

模板一:

In recent years, …… has been popular. There are many advantages in…… First, …… Second, …… Third, ……

However, there’re some disadvantages. ……(之一)。 Besides, ……(之二)。 Also, ……(之三)

In my opinion, it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看,的确是好处多于坏处) I think…… One big advantage of … is that…。 / One obvious advantage of … is …。 / Finally, …

While it is true that … has many advantages, andit is also important to realize that…。(虽然某事确实有许多好处,但是意识到…也很重要。

第三类:问题与建议

(第一段 提出问题)In recent days, we have to face a problem that……近来,我们面临这样一个问题,就是(that同从)。

(第二段:解决办法:)With the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it. By doing ……, we can……What’s the most important is that……

(第三段:结论:)In a word, it is clear / obvious that…… Only when……can we ……。

第四类:要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法

模板:1.有一些人认为… 2.另一些人认为… 3.我的看法…

The topic of ①____________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②____________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③(理由二)。 Moreover, ④_____________(理由三)。

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_________(支持B的理由一)。 Secondly (besides),⑥______________(理由二)。 Thirdly (finally),⑦_____________(理由三)。

From my point of view, I think ⑧__________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨__________(原因)。 As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice 。

第五类:给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①____________(观点一)。 For example, they think ②___________(举例说明).And it will bring them ③_______________(为他们带来的好处)。

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④__________(我不同意该看法的理由一)。 For another thing, ⑤____________(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion, I agree to the thought that ⑥__________(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

第六类:解决方法题型

模板:要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:1。 问题现状;2。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。

In recent days, we have to face a problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _________(说明A的现状).Second, ___________(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _____________(解决方法一)。 For another thing ____________(解决方法二)。 Finally, ______________(解决方法三)。

Personally, I believe that ____________(我的解决方法)。 Consequently, I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________(带来的好处) 明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1。说明事物现状;2。 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3。你对现状(或前景)的看法。

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First _________(A的优点之一)。 Besides ___________(A的优点之二)。

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _______________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,_______________(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to _______________(我的看法).

From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (对前景的预测).)

第3篇:高考英语作文高分(带)

高考英语作文高分模板(带范文)

-------提纲式作文

常见的提纲作文有两种:一种是中文提纲,另一种是英文提纲。 提纲类书面表达不是将写作要点简单地逐条翻译,而是根据情景的发展,按照一定的顺序组织安排好写作材料,然后用比较通顺的语言表达出这些内容要点。

第一步:认真审题,明确文体形式,确定文章主题; 第二步:围绕主题,选择材料。根据提纲,构思文章内容; 第三步:按照一定的顺序开始写作(提出问题——找原因,给论据——提出措施,进行总结),注意内容的连贯性以及逻辑性。 模板:

Nowadays, there are more and more (问题). It is estimated that (举例). Why have there been so many (问题)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that (原因一).Besides, (原因二). The third reason is (原因三). To sum up, the main cause is due to (总结). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (建议一). On the other hand, (建议二). All these measures will Certainly (结论). 模板范文

Nowadays, there are more and more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap. It is estimated that 75% of parents often complain their children’s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned. Why have there been so many misunderstandings between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often rises between them. Besides, due to having little in common to talk about, they are not willing to sit face to face. The third reason is with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both of them can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas. To sum up, the main cause is due to lack of communication and understanding each other. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,children should respect their parents. On the other hand, parents also should show solicitude for their children. All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap. 【译文】

如今,在孩子与父母之间的误会越来越多,这被叫做代沟。据估计,有75%的父母经常抱怨他们孩子不合理的行为,而孩子们经常认为父母太落伍。

为什么在父母和孩子之间会出现这么多的误会?原因可能如下: 首先是两代人的成长年代不同,因此产生分歧。另外,由于几乎没有共同话题可以谈论,

他们不愿意面对面地坐下来交流。第三个原因是现代生活的节奏越来越快,双方没有空闲 时间来交换看法。总之,主要原因是彼此之间缺乏沟通和理解。 到了做些什么来解决这个问题的时候了。一方面,孩子应该尊重父母。另一方面,父母也

应该给予孩子关怀。通过这些措施一定会将代沟消除。 对立观点型 答题模板

There is no consensus of opinions among people about_______ (问题). Some people are for the view that (观点一). While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that _______ 观点二). As far as I am concerned, thelatter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, _______ (论据一). Furthermore, _______ 论据二). Among all ofthe supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, _______ (论据三). A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that_______ (观点). 模板范文

There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people shouldlive with their parents. Some people are for the view that they prefer to live with their parents. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that they need independent life. As far asI am concerned, the latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are

obvious. First of all, we should make a living by ourselves and live independently. Furthermore, we can seek greater freedom and get a place of our own, in which wecan do whatever we want. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, we have enough chances to face the society by ourselves, no matter whatkind of experience we will have. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that living alone is necessary. 译文:关于年轻人是否应该与父母一起生活的观点,人们没有达成一致。有些人持更喜欢与父母一起生活的观点。然而还有一些人持有相反的观点,坚定认为他们需要独立的生活。就我而言,后者的观点从多种意义上来说更可取一些。理由很明显。首先,我们应该独立谋生,独自生活。另外,我们可以获取更大的自由并拥有我们自己的 空间,做自己想做的事情。在所有的支持论据中,有一个是最有力的。那就是我们可以有足够的机会来独自面对社会,不管我们会拥有什么样的经历。根据以上所述很自然得出结论,那就是独立生活是有必要的。

第4篇:高考专项高考英语作文高分奥秘

高考英语作文高分奥秘:这样的作文备受青睐

高考英语作文试题旨在考查中学生运用所学到的英语语言知识和技能来表达思想,进行书面交际的能力,写出内容丰富,语言正确,表达流畅,略有变化的小作文。

然而,真正要写好一篇作文,在高考中取得令人满意的高分也不是一件轻而易举的事情,非得下一番苦功不可。笔者在阅卷中发现能获取高分的作文主要在于:

一、紧扣主题突出重点

动笔之前,针对提示的文字或图片必须先认真审题,组织内容,构思提纲,理顺思路,切忌偏题,离题,东拉西扯,不得要领,一定要避免累赘繁琐,条理不清,重点不突出的失误。

二、表达正确文字流畅

强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组、佳句确保文章简洁通顺,切忌使用随便从文曲星或词典上找来的冷僻单词,特别强调的是必须避免使用不规范的中文式表达,受欢迎的作文是用词用句实实在在,朴实无华,清晰流畅的文章。

三、结构规范时态无误

准确判断时态,语态的应用,不能交叉混杂,这部分则能充分反映学生的思维判断能力,分辨清楚正确的时态、语态将为作文润色不少。

四、单词、标点无误

注意单词拼写、标点符号,避免细节上的失误。错拼和自造单词均会对成绩造成不良影响。

作文成绩在高考中起着至关重要的作用。另外,高考作文要求字数为120个以上,笔者认为控制在150字左右为妥,若字数太少会给人一种考生水平低下,草草了事的感觉,而且也无法表达清楚较深层次的思想。

第5篇:教你写出高分2017高考英语作文

2017高考的脚步越来越近,对英语作文的话题也已提上日程。根据往年高考经验,高考英语作文话题一般会与当年的社会热点、民生有关。正所谓:凡事预则立,不预则废,高考英语满分作文往往也充满了套路!接下来小编就带您看看高考状元作文是如何诞生的 这样的高分套路,你会吗? 一般而言段首句这样写:

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people asto ____.Some people suggest that ____.

2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______.It’s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today, ____, which havebrought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____Second,____.What makes things worse is that______. 4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。 Nowadays,it is commonto ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______. 5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and______ is not an exception,it has both advantages anddisadvantages. 6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a bigproblem ______ which is becoming more and more serious. 8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has become a hottopic among people,especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 ______ has been playing anincreasingly important role in our day-to-day life.ithas brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well 10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢? According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 中间段落句

1.相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。 On the contrary,there are some people in favorof ___.At the same time,they say____.

2.但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。 But I don’t think it is a very good way tosolve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___. 3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是…… ______is necessary and important to ourcountry’s development and construction.First,______.What’s more, _____.Most important of all,______. 4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。 There are several measuresfor us to adopt.First, we can______. 5.面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面, Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective measures to______.For one thing, ______For another,______. 6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 It is high time that something was done about it.For example,_____.In addition._____.All these measures will certainly______.

7.为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于…… Why______? The firstreason is that ______.The second reason is _____.The third is ______.For allthis, the main cause of ______due to ______. 8.然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides,______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. 9.尽管如此,我相信……更有利。 Nonetheless, I believe that ______is moreadvantageous 10.完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下: I fully agree with thestatement that ______ because______. 结尾句

1.至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with thelatter opinion to some extent.I think that ____.

2.总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problemof ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

3.但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)…… But ______and ______havetheir own advantages.For example, _____, while_____.Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______. 4.就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believethat_____.Consequently, I’m confident that a brightfuture is awaiting us because______.

5.随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development ofsociety, ______.So it’s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willingto contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6.至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能…… For my part, I think itreasonable to_____.Only in this way can you _____.

7.对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……;第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是…… In my opinion, I think itnecessary to____.The reasons are as follows.First _____.Second ______.Last but not least,______.

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。 It is difficult to saywhether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situationof______.However, from a personal point of view find ______.

9.综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论…… From what has been discussed above, we mayreasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是…… If we can not take usefulmeans, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come outunexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分: Let metell you something about the activity.

I’mglad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re comingto China for a visit.

I’mwriting to thank you for your help during my stay in America. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that… 结尾部分: Bestwishes.

I’mlooking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. I’dappreciate it if you could reply earlier.

第6篇:高考英语作文七步高分技巧

作者:河南省安阳市 马国民

(一)仔细审题理思路

看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务。在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等。只有进行了充分地审题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务。

(二)精心布局谋好篇

在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等。有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间。其实不然,这一环节实际上是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的基础。

(三)搭好框架信心足

如果不是因为时间问题,考生应该在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰。

(四)扩展提纲连成文

紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写。写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性,在文中应该涵盖给出的三方面要点。而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言规范,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至120之间。应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级的词汇、短语或者句式。

(五)过渡词语文紧凑

在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或者句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,上下连贯,行文紧凑。例如:

表示递进过渡——again, also, worse still, obviously, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, similarly, after a while, at the same time, in addition, meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what’s more等

表示转折让步——unfortunately, though/ although, anyway, but, however, otherwise, still, yet, after all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand, in any case, whatever等

表示困果关系——therefore, so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result等

表示举例示范——for example, in other words, for instance, that is, that is to say等

表示总结概括——in summary, to sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, in a word, all in all, in conclusion, as has been noted, on the whole等

(六)卷面整洁悦人目

英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响。干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少。这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生。因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写规范,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已。

(七)耐心复查把好关

作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最后一道关。这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节。在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等。对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改。

第7篇:【支招】如何提升高考英语作文档次,拿高分

高考圈-让你的大学对得起高三

【支招】如何提升高考英语作文档次,拿高分? 高考英语作文一般满分25分,如果作文达到19分,意味着已经把好些考生抛在后面了,那如何拿到高分呢? 一. 首先看一下高考阅卷老师如何评分

拿到你的作文,批卷老师大概读一下,会在心中确立一个等级,一等是21分到25分,二等是16分到20分,三等是11分到15分......最要命的是,一旦老师心中确立了你的等级,就不愿意再更改了!也就是说,接下来细看你作文写得好坏,也只是在相应等级内变动了!

所以说,老师的一念之间,作文就会拉开等次!

这就要我们想尽一切办法给老师留下一等文的第一印象!这样,作文的分数,一般只是在相应等级内变动了。 二. 如何提升作文档次

1.简单的改用一些单词也会有意向不到的效果:

用extraordinary代替very:十个人九个用very而你用extraordinary,那你不就与众不同了吗?用significant代替important

用as a consequence代替as a result 用therefore代替so,举个例子,I got up early,therefore i was late.写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形象词。

简单的替换一下,水平立刻显现出不一样了

2.善用连接词把短句改长句

如,一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子,这里面however是没有实际意义的,就是表转折,但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊!短句子成长句了!

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关高考圈-让你的大学对得起高三

系。比如说:I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Not only the furcoat is soft,but it is also warm.

3. 巧妙修改句式

举个例子,我不光唱歌,而且跳舞怎么说?i not onle sing ,but also dance,改动一下,not only do i sing,but also dance.倒装句!

I think that...... 宾语从句,老师批10张卷子看到8张里面有I think that不烦吗?如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法:I have a thought that......别看只改动了一点,同位语从句!

同样I hear that谁都会用,不过同样谁都会用最好不要用!厉害一些的人会用:It is reported that......

牛人会用There is a piece of news that 同样的意思,但明显比I hear that要帅!

还有一种用并列巨额代替定语从句,不仅可以用来凑字数,还很醋。举个例子,我喜欢玩篮球,然后篮球有很多种特点,就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来:I love basketball,which is......,which is......,which is.......

还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧,其实记住个例子就行了,穿着比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini,变成a girls wearing a bikini就行了,这就是后置定语,很简单吧

最终的目的都是为了让作文与众不用,让阅卷老师眼前一亮! 三.高考英语作文写作时的注意事项 1.减少误拼

高考答题时,尽量别出现单词拼写错误,要是比较长的单词拼错了还好说,那种最简单的单词千万不要拼错!扣的不是一分的问题,有可能影响到等级。 2.注意卷面清爽,不要涂涂改改

保持卷面整洁干净,切勿涂涂改改,给阅卷老师一个良好的第一影响!

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