必背英语作文(共7篇)
We will gather at theschool gate at seven in the morning.
2、我们7:30出发。
We will set off at7:30.
3、我们将乘公共汽车去。
We will go there bybus.
4、在那儿的饭店吃午饭。
Lunch will be servedin the restaurant there.
5、我们将参观那儿的工厂和学校。
We will visit thefactories and schools there.
6、然后,我们将和当地的农民聊天。
After that, we willchat with the farmers there.
7、一个小时后,我们去钓鱼。
An hour later, wewill go fishing.
8、旅行的费用由学生自己承担。
The cost of the tripwill be paid by the students themselves.
9、我们下午5点才能回到学校。
We won’t return toour school until 5:00 p.m.
10、我将全程陪同。
2015年曲靖市中考英语书面表达题目如下:
提示:亲爱的同学们,在你的生活或学习中一定会有一些好的做法和想法,你可能希望与他人分享,或倡议他人与你一同去做。请结合你的经验、爱好以及社会关注的一些问题,把题目“Let’s____”补充完整,然后用英语写一篇短文。例如,你可以写Let’s make a banana milk shake/keep healthy/get on well with parents/save water等等。
要求:1.抄写并补全所给题目,短文词数不少于60。
2. 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范,卷面整洁。
3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上,若在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
抄袭试题中阅读部分的,抄袭部分不给分。
这个半命题作文开放、灵活,贴近考生的学习生活,很好地体现了外语教学“工具性”和“人文性”相统一的原则,体现了素质教育的理念。因为“Let’s+动词原型”的句型,是新人教版初中英语七年级上册的重点内容之一,如,Let’s play basketball.Let’s go home等,而且在七年级上册的前四个单元,学生一直都在学习be动词的用法,结合“Let’s+动词原形”这一句型,思路开阔的考生可以把题目补充为Let’s be a happy/polite/outgoing/sunny person等。试卷中还提示考生可以写Let’s make a banana milk shake,新人教版初中英语八年级上册Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake?的Section A部分专门介绍了香蕉奶昔的制作方法,教师在上课时一般都会结合教材详细地讲解,有的教师甚至还亲自带着食物搅拌器,按照课本上提示的步骤,当堂演示,或者要求学生根据课堂上所学的方法,回家制作香蕉奶昔,和家人一起品尝。即便学生记不住做奶昔的过程,他们也可以以“Let’s make fruit salad./Let’s make popcorn./Let’s make Russian soup”等为题进行写作。
二、阅卷中发现的问题
2015年曲靖市中考英语作文的命题,与教材联系紧密,许多教师还要求学生背诵过类似的范文。结合初中三年所学的知识,学生可写的话题比较多,如,环保、交友、拯救濒危动物、向身边的人致谢、做志愿者等。但在阅卷的过程中,笔者发现,紧扣教材写这类话题的学生较少,对于行文的重点“如何做”,很多学生东拉西扯,缺乏逻辑性。曲靖市接近7万多份考卷,其中内容精彩、立意新颖、表达流畅、无语法错误和拼写错误的优秀作文较少,满分作文仅有4篇,大部分高分作文集中在12~13.5分之间。学生在写作中主要存在以下几个问题:
1. 书写极其不规范
卷面不够美观,许多考生书写太随意,有的考生笔迹太轻,导致电脑根本无法清晰地扫描他的文章,阅卷老师也无法辨认其字迹;有的考生字迹潦草,试卷上出现了大量不规范的连写形式;有的考生答题时甚至超出了答题卡的密封线,这主要是由于他们平时没有养成写作文前先打草(腹)稿的习惯,写作文时更是随心所欲,缺乏计划性,导致文章前半部分单词的间距过大,后半部分又过于拥挤,整个卷面看上去不太美观。曲靖市的英语作文答题线共有13行,标题居中位于第一行,剩余12行为正文部分,只要考生事先认真打草稿或腹稿,前松后紧的现象是可以避免的。
2. 审题不清,文不达意
很多学生对题意的理解不够深刻,命题新颖、见解独到的文章较少。多数学生思维打不开,补充作文题目时只局限于试卷中所列出的几个范例,即Let’s keep healthy./Let’s save water./Let’s get on well with parents,导致所写作文千篇一律,缺乏亮点。“Let’s+动词原型”的句型,还有相当一部分考生没有掌握,以致试卷中“Let’s doing sth./Let’s water./Let’s environment./Let’s to do sth.”等带有语法错误的标题层出不穷。有些考生所写内容文不对题,标题是Let’s help others,内容却是如何进行环保等,令人啼笑皆非。
3. 作文层次不清楚
部分考生作文层次不清,从头到尾只有一段。中考作文最好写成“三段式”,第一段开篇点题,第二段分述,第三段总述。按“总—分—总”的结构组织文章,可以使文章脉络清晰,结构严谨,并且具有层次感。
4. 中式英语较多,语言表达不地道
很大一部分学生由于受汉语思维方式或文化的影响,加之对英语简单句的五种基本句型不够熟悉,创造出不符合英语表达习惯的中式英语。例如,“好好学习,天天向上”这个句子,很多学生这样表达:good good study,day day up;“我每天走路上学”,有的学生表达为:I every day on foot go to school;“我每天都吃健康的食物”,有的学生表达为:I am every day eat health food.
5. 抄袭试卷语句
试卷作文部分明确规定:“抄袭试题中阅读部分的,抄袭部分不给分。”所以,部分考生就从选择题,填空题中挑选一部分来抄写,而且书写规范,字迹工整,如果阅卷老师不认真阅读,甚至有可能被误判为二档作文。
三、教学建议
中考场上,学生在完成书面表达时出现的种种问题,不仅是学生学习上的问题,也是教师教学上的问题,值得我们好好反思。笔者根据多年的教学经验和参与中考阅卷的一些体会,谈一谈作文教学的一些方法,希望能对广大一线教育工作者有所帮助。
1. 狠抓英语书写的基本功
从学生入学后的第一节英语课开始,教师就要重点培养学生良好的英语书写习惯。在教授字母的时候,教师要在黑板上画出四线三格,然后再按照英语字母正确的书写方式进行示范,引导学生观察不同字母在四线三格中的位置。在学生掌握了26个字母规范的书写格式后,教师再向学生示范如何规范地书写单词,进而过渡到如何规范地书写句子。一开始,学生往往会忽视字母的大小写问题,常常会在句首用小写,而句中又冷不丁“冒”出个大写字母,而且句末经常不加标点符号。针对这些问题,教师可以让学生边念口诀边书写,如,句首大,句中小,句末要用号等。在学生学习英语的入门阶段,教师批改作业时,要根据学生的书写情况分类评价。对书写工整的同学,不仅作业要加分,而且还要将优秀作业在同学间传阅。对于书写较差的同学,除了鼓励督促之外,教师还要利用课余时间私下对其进行当面辅导。在初一年级,班上可以经常举办英语书写比赛,并把获奖的优秀作品张贴在橱窗中进行展览。试想,如果教师从入门阶段就注重培养学生良好的书写习惯,那么,三年下来,学生的书写一定会比较规范。也许有的教师会担心,这样做可能会影响上课的进度,但是,“磨刀不误砍柴工”,学生一旦养成了认真书写的好习惯,在以后的教学中,教师在指导学生书写方面花的时间相对就会少很多。
2. 整体规划写作训练
新教材对学生写作能力的培养进行了整体规划,各个年级的训练方法、写作内容和要求各不相同。从训练学生组词成句开始,逐步扩展到运用简单句的五种基本句型写简单句,之后再写并列句,最后过渡到写简单的段落,循序渐进地培养学生的写作能力。随着学生语言水平的逐步提高,教材为学生提供了各种有效的写作“支架”,逐步训练学生写出更多丰富多彩的句子,创作出更为完整的作文。到了初三阶段,学生已经基本熟悉写作的程序,不仅掌握了一些写作技能,而且还积累了一些与生活中常见话题相关的单词、句子,此时,他们已经具备了一定的写作能力。所以,九年级的写作部分不再提供仿写的范文,而是采用“两步走”策略。第一步提出与写作任务相关的话题供学生思考、讨论,并列出要点;第二步则根据具体的写作任务提供写作的建议、文章的框架结构、可使用的句型等。根据新教材的编排特点,从初一年级入门开始,教师就要有意识地让学生学会根据单元的话题进行仿写。在写之前,教师要带领学生梳理本单元的重点句型,并适当地让学生记忆课文中的一些优美的句子,在此基础上,再让学生把文章写在草稿纸上,自己反复修改或者同桌互相修改,课后再把作文规范地写在家庭作业本上。经过课堂上教师的讲解和梳理,学生的初步写作,同桌的交叉批改,学生课后在写作时就感觉轻松多了。这在一定程度上,大大减轻了学生写作时的心理压力,让他们不再对英语的写作产生畏惧感。如果教师教学每个单元时,都能持之以恒地采用这种教学方法,那么,不但让学生进一步巩固了本单元所学内容,养成了打草稿(或者腹稿)和认真检查的好习惯,而且还让学生综合运用语言的能力得到了提升。
3. 认真批阅习作,并着力培养学生的发散性思维能力
每次作文训练,教师都应认真批改每个学生的作文。如果每次写作训练前,教师都能按照上述方法在课堂上引导学生写作,并组织学生打草稿,自评加互评,那么,学生作文中的错误就不会太多,这在一定程度上也减轻了教师批阅作文的负担,教师只要留意学生的书写是否规范、单词拼写是否正确、能否正确使用重要的句型结构。对一些优美的文章和经典的句子,教师应归类整理后,统一印发给学生学习。同时,教师还应指导学生背诵一些优秀的范文。当然,在背的过程中,教师要进行合理的指导,切忌死记硬背,要引导学生对所背的内容进行拓展发散,做到举一反三,灵活运用。例如,2014年曲靖市中考英语的作文题目是How I Relax Myself,复习时,笔者除了让学生背诵该篇作文的优秀范文外,还引导他们训练类似话题的写作,如,How I study English/How I deal with my problems/How I become a good learner/a happy person/an outgoing person等,通过对同类结构的话题作文进行不断地拓展,学生的发散性思维能力得到了很大的提高。在以后的考试中,遇到类似的题目,学生不仅能灵活运用,而且思维敏捷,所写作文不落俗套,给人新颖的美感。
2015年曲靖市中考英语作文中也涌现出一些优秀的文章,题目抢眼,立意新颖,联系实际,充满了积极向上的正能量。这些优秀作文主要具有以下特点:
(1)题目抢眼。如,有的学生的作文题目为:Let’s learn to be a happy person./Let’s go to the old people’s home./Let’s learn to smile./Let’s face ourproblemsbravely./Let’sthankthepeople around us./Let’s enjoy reading./Let’s help others等。由于大部分学生写的都是诸如Let’s keep healthy之类老生常谈的话题,所以,评卷老师在批阅到标题新颖的文章时,往往会耳目一新。
(2)行文流畅,内容充实。这些优秀作文书写规范,卷面整洁,行文流畅;而且由于考生的英语基本功扎实,全卷基本没有语法错误和拼写错误,不仅能准确使用丰富的词汇和句型结构,有的甚至还能引用一些格言和名句。
(3)层次分明。这些优秀作文大都采用三段论的结构书写,层次较清楚,逻辑很严密,有一气呵成的流畅感觉。
1、致辞:
Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words.In your speech, you should:
1、进行自我介绍,2、详细介绍大会内容,3、结束语。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am the president of Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference.First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation.Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates.Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you.If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time.Thank you for your attention.2、求职信/求学信:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a position of a company.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1、申请职位,2、简要介绍自己的情况,3、期待回信。Dear Sir or Madam,I am senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University.I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it.First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member.Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered me.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
四级英语作文 十大必背范文
3、邀请信:
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually:
1、邀请参加晚会,2、说明举办晚会的原因,3、将安排哪些活动。Dear Wangcai,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr.Old Fish’s wedding ceremony with Ms.Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m.on April 1, 2007.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
4、个人简历:
Directions: Write of resume of yourself of no less than 120 words.In it, you should:
1、说明姓名、地址、联系方式、求职目标,2、教育背景、工作经历、资历,3、所获奖励、特长,以及个人资料。
RESUME Li Ming P.O.Box 237, Beijing University 5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871 Tel: 62768888 Email: liming@163.com
Career Objective: A position with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financing Educational Background: Sept 2003 to Beijing University July 2007 Major in International Business Management Main courses include English,computer,Business Management, Accounting, International Commercial Law Work Experience: July 2006 to Bank of China June 2007 Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of Marketing Draft business correspondence Schedule deputy manager’s appointments Qualifications: University graduation certificate and
bachelor degree to be conferred upon graduation(2007)College English Test Band 4 June 2005 Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing University 2005& 2006 Special Skills: Familiarity with Microsoft Word, Excel Ability to work independently Outstanding Organizational skills Experience: President of Student Union 2003-present Personal Data: Date of Birth: Sep.17, 1984 Gender: Female Marital Status: Unmarried
5、告示:
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information:
1、比赛目的、时间、地点,2、参赛者的要求,3、裁判和奖励的细节。
You should write about 120 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese Speaking Contest
December 22, 2007
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(29 December)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five profes sors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
6、就业:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学生难找工作,2、原因很多,3、解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not.Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various.On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market.On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need.Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed.They should go to small cities and country.There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge.In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.四级英语作文 十大必背范文
7、考试:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩,2、考生可能带来的副作用,3、我对考试的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject.Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching.Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques.No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations.In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits.As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development.If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
8、读后感:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我最喜爱的小说,2、该小说的内容,3、我为什么喜爱。
My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne.The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr.Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days.It gives us a vivid description of the many dif From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life.We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.9、难忘的人:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我生活中最难忘的人是,2、为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀,3、结论。
In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs. Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.10、论说文框架:
Owing to the speedy economic development, the number of people who…has considerably increased/declined.It is universally acknowledged that … plays a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of….With the reform and opening-up in recent decades,people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of ….If we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures.To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to ….In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that … is essential to us.Only in this way can we reverse this disturbing trend illustrated above
Can Money Buy Happiness
Nowadays, a lot of people in society think the more money they have the more happiness they will obtain. As a result they will try their best to get money, even without considering the law.
But in my view, the greatest happiness lies in one’s satisfaction with one’s surroundings. So long as we can look at things with a happy heart, we can be happy. It has nothing to do with a mount of money we have. Therefore, people shouldn’t pay too much attention money we have. On the contrary (相反地) what they should do is to put their money to good use and try to have an optimistic outlook all the time.
It just likes stroms,stopping our steps and upsetting our life.
In this world we are just biologies as the ants on the floor and the birds in the sky.Due to presencs we are living.We do not what will happen next seconds,included hardship.Once we are trapped in it,we will get lost on our ways.It is very difficult for us to overcome difficulty and go through the dark time.Even we could lost the enthusiasm of life,which will make us be tired of living.However,we love our families ,love our friends.Because of them human still live in the world.
Sometimes we will be caught in the strom,but all is going to be fine in the end.Just hold on ,guys .Your dream will come ture if you do not give up your life.All is well!
书面表达在高考英语试卷中占据着举足轻重的地位。它检查考生驾驭和综合运用所学单词、短语、语法知识的能力, 测试考生清楚自如地用英语进行表达的熟练程度。高考英语书面表达分值在整个考卷中占有极大比重, 作文不过关, 不可能获得高分。近几年的高考书面表达具有贴近生活、注重创新与自主多元三个特色, 这也是本年度英语高考书面表达题命题的三大亮点。
1. 内容切入生活, 形式多种多样
总的来说, 今年的高考书面表达试题大多能够真正地从课本出发, 从英语课堂出发, 从学生生活出发, 并与时代热点紧密贴合, 内容上以校园生活为主, 引导学生关注生活, 给了考生们更大的发挥空间;形式呈现多样化的趋势。这一特点对往年高考的一个最好延续。
2. 突破思维定势, 高举创新旗帜
高考改革在不断深入, 其改革精神在高考试题中体现日益明显, 高考试题对教学的指导意义才更突出。摆脱教材绝对权威的束缚, 突破以往某些方面的思维定势, 学会创造性地思考问题, 已势在必行。今年高考英语试题书面表达的突破创新, 既有内容上的也有形式上的;内容上的突破, 即在材料选取与对材料运用的要求上与往年有所不同;形式上的突破主要指体裁上的突破, 近年来英语作文体裁, 主要分为叙述类、实用文类 (包括书信、卡片、说明、留言、填写表格等类) 、图表类、论证类等, 自主命题以来, 多数省市考查的体裁相对固定。
3. 鼓励个性和创意, 彰显自主和多元
写作是运用语言文字进行表达和交流的重要方式, 是学生认识世界、自我认识, 进行创造性表述的过程。近年来, 英语高考作文命题尽可能减少写作束缚, 尊重学生的需要, 开放思想, 激发学生表达的欲望, 为学生自主写作提供有利的条件和广阔的空间。今年高考作文命题在这方面的表现尤为突出, 题目设置的条件明显放宽, 鼓励学生自由、有个性、有创意地表达, 使作文内容更趋多元化个性化。显然, 这样的命题实际上是让写作主体 (即我) 真正成为作文的主角, 让“我”可以更自主地表达自己的所思所。
二、写作技巧
如何有效提高学生的英语写作水平的关键在于让学生学会一些写作技巧。拿到一篇作文题目要知道写什么、怎样构思、如何润色。
1. 审准题意, 明确要求
目前高考作文以控制性写作为主, 通常会借助图画、图表、表格、文字提示等题材形式呈现, 所涉及到的体裁通常有人物介绍、活动记述、热点议论、观点对比、书信日记等。不管是什么样的题材、体裁, 考生在下笔之前必须认真读题、仔细观察、明确要求。
(1) 确定主题
一篇作文要是没有明确的主题和鲜明的观点, 那就成了无本之木、散沙一盘。要是主题偏差, 那文章就迷失了方向, 自然也就失去了写作的价值和意义。
(2) 确定时态
虽然不同体裁的作文可能用不同的时态进行叙述, 但一篇作文是一个有机整体, 其中大多数句子应统一用一种基础时态。如故事和日记最好用过去时态, 而说理性和评论性作文通常用现在时态, 申请书、通知则多半用将来时态。
(3) 确定人称
有些作文题目明确指出用第几人称。而大多数情况下, 需要考生自己去判断该用哪一个人称。
(4) 确定文体
不同文体开头、结尾有不同的格式要求。并非所有的作文题目都为考生写好了开头、结尾, 所以有必要在平时练习中弄清楚、并记住各种文体的格式。如书信和电子邮件开头应有称呼语、问侯语, 结尾应有祝福词和落款。日记开头应标明日期、星期几、天气情况。口头通知 (Announcement) 在称呼语之后, 一般以“ (May I have your) attention, please”开头, 结尾应说“That’s all.Thank you (for listening) ”, 而书面通知 (Notice) 只需结尾署名落款。
2. 理顺要点, 分清层次
在写任何一篇作文之前, 必须有一个总体的构想和设计, 不仅要知道写什么内容, 还应对如何安排段落和层次做到心中有数。
(1) 明确要点
一般来说, 仅仅写文字提示和图画、图表、表格已明确给出的要点是不够的。考生还必须挖掘出两三个隐含的要点, 尤其是作文的开头 (第一段) 和结尾 (最后一段) 写什么, 需要考生自己开动脑筋去发现要点、组织语言。否则就可能会要点不全、表达不完整。另外, 如果给出了一些相关的参考词汇, 要尽量想办法在作文中用上这些参考词汇。
(2) 增补细节
高考书面表达以半开放式作文居多。题目只会对考生写作的方向和思路作一些提示, 考生必须根据提示语展开联想并补充出具体的写作内容和细节。
(3) 布局段落
高考作文以三段式为宜。第一段的作用是引入话题, 通常两句话即可, 第一句话为引出话题做必要的铺垫, 第二句话开门见山地提出本文话题和观点。事实上, 这两句话的信息都可从作文题干叙述中信手拈来。题目已明确给出的要点可以全部放在第二段叙述。第三段通常要求写出自己的看法、感想、希望等, 考生必须围绕全文中心话题做灵活巧妙的扩展和适度贴切的延伸。
(4) 划分层次
第二段是三段式作文的正文, 也是全文的重心所在。考生可以按时间、空间、重要性、逻辑联系、正反对比等一定的顺序, 合理有序地安排和组织好所有的要点及论据。否则就会有杂乱无章, 层次不明之感。
3. 精打细磨, 提升品质
明确了写作要点, 布局好文章结构之后, 一篇作文就初具雏形了。但考生还应在词汇选择、句式变化、连贯通畅等方面反复推敲、精心润色才能提升作文的档次和品质, 达到相对完美的境界。
(1) 遣词造句, 连句成篇
依据简单句的基本句型, 将各个要点翻译成正确通顺的英语句子, 进而连句成篇。翻译时要尽量用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词汇和短语, 特别注意句子结构的完整性和词语的固定搭配。尤其要确认每个句子都不残缺谓语动词, 时态、语态正确无误。
(2) 摒弃单调, 避免重复
在表达要点时, 要尽量注意语言形式的多样化, 避免单调和重复。与主题相关的词语常常会多次重复出现, 应注意同义词、 (下转第15页) (上接第26页) 近义词和代词的使用;百分数应多用“most”“many”“much”“some”“a few”“a little”“a quarter”“half”“three quarters”“double”“more than”“less than”“almost”“nearly”等词替换或修饰。在有把握的情况下适量使用含定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句的主从复合句, 使文章增色添彩, 提高作文的含金量。
(3) 精心润色, 自然过渡
一篇作文是一个有机整体、句与句之间、段与段之间必然存在其内在的逻辑联系, 所以考生有必要恰当地使用一些过渡性词句, 使自己的作文浑然一体、脉络清晰、层层展开。
三、结语
综上所述, 一篇优秀的高考作文绝不是单词的简单堆积, 句子的无序排列。我们应力求做到结构完整、主题突出、内容翔实、语言无误、表达顺畅、富于变化。当然, 这也绝非一蹴而就的易事, 需要长期的细心琢磨、勤写多练方能功到自然成。
摘要:书面表达在高考英语试卷中占据着举足轻重的地位。它检查考生驾驭和综合运用所学单词、短语、语法知识的能力, 测试考生清楚自如地用英语进行表达的熟练程度。
考研英语作文,你是选择背模板还是提升英语写作自己写?两方面见解相持不下,不过对于英语复习时间不够充足和备考时间不够的同学,模板想必是少不了的。
1.图画作文
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题),which is ______________(进一步的说明)。He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节)。In my opinion,___________(个人阐述)。
This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race)。Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在)。One the one hand,we must _________________(建议一)。It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明)。On the other hand,________________(建议二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。
2.图表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题)。The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点)。This means that as __________,_________________(进一步说明)。
We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一)。After
ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化),the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二)。(数据位置,如In the second column),we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述)。
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论)。The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)。/ It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)
3.利弊型作文
Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_________.For one thing,__________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一)。For another,it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二)。
But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________,among which are ____________(列举缺点)。For instance,it can be __________to _____________(举例说明)。In addition,many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)
When asked to __________,I tend to ____________.This is because I _______________(原因
一)。Furthermore,_______________________(原因二)。Finally,______________(原因三)。
4.展望未来型
The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First,__________________(影响一)。More importantly,________________(影响二)。Hence,I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless,I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)
There are numerous reasons why ____,and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more(比较级)_____,the more(比较级)。In addition,we all aGREe that________________________(第二个原因)
5.告示
You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest
January 19,2008
To improve students‘ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities,the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(26 January)at the Students‘ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.the Students‘ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
6.职业道德
the cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business.In the first drawing,a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods.In the second picture,the administrative office,salesmen,breeding families and forage
shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect.In the first place,since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it,the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society.In the second place,it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage,encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later,but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case.But it is worthwhile.For one thing,to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly,serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied.For another,since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions,drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another.7.投诉信
Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester,as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate‘s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing,his friends are constantly visiting him;for another,he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut,I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will aGREe that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore,I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me,preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
8.网络问题
In recent years,people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture,it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line,either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work‘s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However,it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture.The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people‘s chats.On the one hand,no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication.But on the other hand,a GREat many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions.Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.Accordingly,it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.For one thing,college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news,to study English by registering for web courses,to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music,FLASH,film and pictures.Being veteran on-line shoppers,they frequently purchase books,CDs at much lower prices.For another,once indulged in the fictitious world,people can barely concentrate on real life.Consequently,many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday,skipping many essential classes.After all,Internet is invented to enrich our life,to connect you and me,and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.9.环境问题
the pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe.In the first cartoon,a man is scorching the earth on a chimney.In the second one,a famous ancient Chinese poet,Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory.We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”。
the drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution.There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization,proGREss and development.Unfortunately,as industry develops,so will the number of factories,and the amount of industry pollutants.We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.As a consequence,it is imperative for us to take drastic actions.On the one hand,the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet.On the other hand,there should be an increasingly
loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.10.提纲式议论文
Directions:
A.Title: Air Travel
B.Time limit: 40 minutes
C.Word limit: about 200 words
D.Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.E.Your essay should be based on the information given below.现在许多人愿意乘飞机旅行。随着我国民航事业的迅速发展,全国各大城市兴建了许多现代化的机场。乘飞机旅行有许多长处(方便、快捷、省时、舒适等);但是,空中旅行也有许多不足之处(机票价格贵,有的旅客不适应空中旅行,常常感到身体不适,甚至有人还担心发生空难)。请你简单阐述上述两个方面。最后请你说明你的看法。
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