应用文改错

应用文改错（共4篇）

应用文改错 篇1

一、据提示，找出请假条中的两处毛病，并写出修改意见。

张老师：您好！

今日我因身体不舒服，故请假一天，望老师批准。

2012年5月20日

请假人：李明

二、读下面的表扬信，按要求回答问题。

表扬信

光明中学校领导您好：

贵校初三（1）班高远同学助人为乐，非常值得表扬。

我的孩子方旭就读于贵校初三（1）班，一个月前因患急性肺炎住进了医院。这期间他耽误了不少功课，我们焦急万分。正在这时，高远同学主动来到我们家，热心为方旭补课。整整二十天，每天晚上都是如此，直到帮助方旭补上落下的功课。在高远同学面临中考的关键时刻，牺牲自己的宝贵时间来帮助同学。这种助人为乐的精神让我们全家非常感动。我们除再次向他表示感谢之外，还要求你们当领导的在全校给予表扬！

此致

敬礼！

方旭的家长

方明杰李丹敬上

2012年4月29日

1、这封表扬信在格式上有处错误，请指出。

2、有语病的是第几句？应如何改？

3、正文中语言有一处不得体，请指出。应如何改？

三、按要求修改下面一封信（片断）

敬爱的爷爷：

您好！近来身体好吗？我们已有几个月未见面了，我常常惦念着您。有时思念心切，我恨不得一下子很快飞到您的身旁，向您汇报我近来的情况，倾诉对您的思念之情。爷爷，通过您多年对我的谆谆教导，使我各方面都有了很大的进步。目前，我各科成绩都很好，请勿挂念。我即将毕业，不久就要填报升学志愿，我准备报考师范学校。您同意吗？请您来信谈谈意见。

此致敬礼

孙××敬上

××年×月×日

1、这封信格式有两处错误，请指出。

2、正文中有两个病句，请改正。

四、下面是家长会通知，试从格式、内容等方面找出6处不当的地方，并提出修改办法。

通知

家长同志：

兹定于2003年5月20日下午在我校召开初三年级家长会议，传达今年全省中考改革的要求，同时汇报我们初三学生德智体美全面发展的情况及存在的问题。届时请务必到会参加。

此致

敬礼

×××中学

2012年5月15日

五、下面这封感谢信有五处错误，请指出并改正。

××剧团负责同志：

为帮助我校举办艺术节排练节目，你们及时给我们派来了××，××两位老师，协助我们编排歌舞，演唱。他们工作认真，耐心指导，亲自示范。在二位老师的帮助下，经过全校广大师生的努力，大家的水平得到了很大提高，排练出了很多精彩的节目，使我校艺

术节获得了很大成功。

现在两位老师回去了，谨代表贵校全体师生向二位老师及你们表示衷心感谢，并希望今后继续得到你们的难得的支援。

此致

敬礼

××二中总务处（公章）

××年××月××日

六、下面一则应用文从内容到格式有五处毛病，请指出来。

通知

亲爱的同学们：

为活跃我校课余生活，校团委决定组织一次歌咏比赛活动，请各班文娱委员于明日下午开会，讨论比赛有关事宜。

2012年4月18日

七、根据下面内容代写的一份通知，有五处错误，请改在后面。

1.会议内容：筹备为希望工程献爱心活动。

2.出席对象：学生会干部，各班班长。

3.会议地点：政教处办公室。

4.开会时间：5月14日下午5时

通知：

今天下午，在政教处办公室召开学生会干部或各班班长会议，筹备为希望工程献爱心活动，希准时参加。

此致

敬礼！

政教处

应用文改错 篇2

1.Selling newspapers not only makes some money but also give us some working experience during the summer vacation.2.To deliver newspapers are a tiring job.3.It is he who study very hard.4.The rest of the trees was cut down.5.The day we have been looking forward to having come at last.6.The number of the guests invited to the party are 100.7.The wounded in the earthquake was sent to the hospital.8.Tom, as well as his children, are to visit Beijing this summer.9.Either of the sides of the street are lined with the tall trees.10.Here “you” are used as a noun.【答案与解析】

1.give改为gives。makes和gives为平行结构，作并列谓语。

2.are改为is。不定式、动名词、主语从句作主语要看作为一个整体，动词用单数形式。3.study改为studies。强调主语时，谓语动词应保持变强调句以前的状态。4.was改为were。rest指的是可数名词的复数形式，谓语动词用复数形式。5.having改为has。主句的主语是The day，后面缺少谓语动词。6.are改为is。the number of 表示“„„数目”。谓语动词用单数形式。7.was改为were。the wounded表示“伤员们”时，是复数概念。

8.are改为is。主语为Tom。as well as结构重心在前一个名词，谓语动词与前一个名词保持一致。

9.are改为is。either后面的动词用单数形式。10.are改为is。you用作专有名词，看作单数。

短文改错专项训练·非谓语动词类错误

1.A lot of money has been spent to buy the book.2.You will have to pay the cost of send a postcard.3.What he did was puzzled.4.I will spend a week reading and prepare for the examination.5.Charles and Linda do all of these things as well as climbed buildings.6.Yesterday I had my bad tooth pulling out.7.I heard her singing a song which moved me to tears.8.I made a terrible mistake.I regretted not to take your advice.9.When we reached the top of the mountain, we stopped having a rest before we went down the mountain.10.There’ll be a good film tonight, remember seeing it on time!11.The game was over, she went home.12.When speaking, you must make yourself hear.13.She pretended not seeing me when I came in.14.Abraham Lincoln was considered being one of the greatest of all American presidents.15.Following by the officers, the general inspected the army.16.There is something wrong with my computer, and it needs repaired.17.Don’t burn the falling leaves on the ground.18.Losing in thought, he almost ran into a car in front of him.19.I enjoy to listen to the classic music.20.Judge by what he wears, he is a farmer.【答案与解析】 1.to buy改为buying。

2.send改为sending。介词of后要求用动名词作宾语。

3.puzzled改为puzzling。puzzling表示“令人疑惑不解的”意思。4.prepare改为preparing。preparing和前面的 reading是并列结构。5.climbed改为climbing。as well as是介词短语，后面接动名词或名词。6.pulling改为pulled。have the tooth pulled out表示“请人拔牙”的意思。

7.singing改为sing。从后面可以看出来，“我”听完了整首歌曲，强调动作的全过程，用不定式作宾补。

8.to take改为taking。用动名词表示对已发生过的事情的后悔。9.having改为to have。stop的目的是have a rest。10.seeing改为to see。还未看电影。11.was改为being。独立主格结构。12.hear改为heard。make oneself heard意为“使别人听到自己的话”。13.seeing改为to see。pretend后面要求接不定式作宾语。14.being改为to be。consider后用不定式作宾补。15.following改为followed。过去分词表被动。

16.repaired 改为repairing。动名词主动形式，表被动意义。17.falling改为fallen。过去分词作定语，强调动作的完成。18.losing改为lost。be lost in thought 表示“陷入深思”。19.to listen改为listening。enjoy后面用动名词作宾语。20.Judge改为Judging。Judging by„为一固定说法。

短文改错专项训练·语态与语气类错误

A.语态错误

1.He insisted on sending to work in Tibet.2.In some countries, tea is serving with milk and sugar.3.This film will is shown this evening.4.Many trees have planted every year.5.The piece of cloth is felt smoth.【答案与解析】

1.sending 改为being sent。动名词用被动形式。2.serving 改为served。3.is 改为be。4.have 改为 are。

5.Is felt改为feels。不用被动语态。

B.语气错误

1.It is high time you leave for Shanghai.2.She suggests that her brother not goes to college.3.The judge insisted that the spy was put in prison.4.How I wish I am as strong as you.5.It is necessary that the patient is sent to hospital right away.6.If he hadn’t been caught in the storm yesterday, he will not be ill now.7.If I am you, I would give him a good beating.【答案与解析】

1.leave改为left。It is time后面的从句动词要用虚拟语气。谓语动词用过去式。2.goes改为go。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句用虚拟语气。谓语动词用原形。3.was改为be。宾语从句要用虚拟语气。

4.am改为were。wish后面的宾语从句需用虚拟语气。5.第二个is改为be。主语从句要用虚拟语气。6.will 改为would。此处要用虚拟语气。

7.am 改为were。这是一个与现在情况相反的一个假设，要用虚拟语气。

短文改错专项训练·时态类错误

1.He said that he will see you off at the airport the next day.2.When he will come back，I’ll let you know.3.He said that he has had the bike for two years.4.I work on a farm in North China in the 1970s.5.A new bridge was being built in our city at present.6.I finished my homework before I left school.7.I feel regretful now that I don’t study hard when I was in my high school.8.If I am you, I would do it.9.She buys a bike yesterday.10.I come here in two days.11.I don’t think we met before.12.He taught here for six years since he came to this town.13.My sister said that she would call me but I didn’t hear from her so far.14.I am tired because I had been working all day.15.Look!Here the bus coming.16.I meet him in other time.17.By this time tomorrow we have finished the work.18.Sometimes I will get up at eight in the morning.19.We have to cancel the match if it will rain tomorrow.20.I didn’t see my best friend for nearly two years.【答案与解析】

1.will改为would。宾语从句要用过去将来时态。

2.will come改为comes。时间状语从句用一般现在时表将来。3.has改为had。宾语从句需用过去完成时。4.work改为worked。此句要用一般过去时态。

5.was 改为is。从at present可知，此句用现在进行时。

6.finish前加had。离开学校是过去时态，在此之前完成就应用过去完成时。7.don’t改为didn’t。定语从句表示的是过去时态。此句要用一般过去时。8.am改为were。此句为虚拟语气，要用过去时。9.buys改为bought。从yesterday可知，要用一般过去时。

10.come改为will come。从in the two days可知，谓语动词要用一般将来时。11.met前加have。Before是表示过去，应用现在完成时态。

12.taught改为has taught。表示过去已经开始持续到现在，而且还可能继续下去的动作或状态，应用现在完成时态来表示。

13.didn’t改为haven’t。so far 迄今为止，用于现在完成时态。

14.had改为have。从am 可看出是现在时，其句中给出all day，应用现在完成进行时态。

15.coming改为comes。Here, there放在句首构成倒装时，其时态只用于一般现在时或一般过去时。

16.meet改为met。in other times从前，所以谓语动词要用一般过去时态。17.have 前加shall。强调在将来某时刻为止时完成是某动作，应用将来完成时态。18.去掉will。Sometimes有时，暗示句子要用一般现在时。

19.will rain改为rains。If引导的条件状语从句，要用一般现在时表将来。20.didn’t saw 改为haven’t seen。For nearly two years 暗示谓语动词要用现在完成时。

短文改错专项训练·介词类错误

1.His father has been ill on bed for two years.2.During the summer vacation, he worked in the farm.3.He is very fond of football and he is in the school football team.4.I have made rapid progress under the help of my teacher.5.Don’t read under the strong light.6.The killer ran away to the direction of Beijing.7.He lives on No.124.Wuyi Road.8.He is very angry to his son for his failing in the exam.9.He hit me on the face.10.He is strict to me in my work.11.The bottle is filled of the gas.12.London stands to the Thames.13.His mother took pride of his great achievements.14.There are two windows on the wall.15.On the way home, I found I had lost the key of the door.16.We are trying to find the answer of the problem.17.You are required to write your story with your own words.18.With what language did she make the speech? 19.He is the cleverest in all the students.20.At a clear night, he went out in search of the gold.21.He had an English party at Christmas Eve.22.Women should be equal with men.23.He is blind on both his eyes.24.Uncle Tom is famous as his skill in cooking.25.He will come back after five weeks.26.He said that he had met us many years ago.27.He is the tallest between the four of us.28.I called on my uncle’s last night.29.It is very clever for a dog to save its owner.30.You should be beware of dangers.【答案与解析】

1.on改为in。in bed为固定用法，表示“卧床休息”。2.in 改为on。

3.in 改为on。on the team为固定用法。4.under 改为with。with the help of表示“在„„的帮助下”。5.under改为in。“在„„光线下”正确表示方法为in„ light。6.to改为in。in the direction of„表示“朝„„方向”之意。7.on改为at。

8.to改为with。表示“对某人生气”应用be angry with sb.。9.on改为in。

10.to改为with。be strict with sb.表示“对某人要求严格”； be strict in sth.表示“对某事要求严格”。

11.of改为with。注意这两个词组的介词搭配be full of，be filled with。12.to改为on。表示“在河的边沿”，用on。

13.of改为in。注意两个词组的介词搭配take pride in，be proud of 14.on改为in。

15.of改为to。the key to the door 为固定搭配。16.of改为to。the answer to the problem为固定搭配。17.with改为in。18.With改为In。

19.in改为of。表比较的对象用of。表比较地点范围用in，如：in my class, in China 20.At改为On。On指具体所指的一天晚上。21.at改为on。注意比较：at Christmas

22.with改为to。Be equal to（相等的、均等的）为固定搭配。23.on改为in。表示眼睛瞎了要用介词in/of。

24.as改为for。be famous for表示“因某事出名”, be famous as表示“因某种身份出名”。

25.after改为in。表“将来一段时间之后”，用in。

26.ago改为before。ago以现在为起点，如：five days ago。而 before以过去某个时间为起点，如：before liberation

27.between改为among。between只能指“两者之间”。28.on改为at。my uncle’s是“我叔叔家”的意思。

29.for改为of。如果形容词表示不定式逻辑主语的品质，性格的话，用of。30.to 改为of。Be beware of„(当心„)为固定搭配。

短文改错专项训练·连词类错误

1.It didn’t matter that I would win the match or not.2.That he is looking for is a dictionary.3.Many people can quickly get help from a doctor since they are ill.4.If you can pass the test is up to you.5.If we will hold the party in the open air depends on the weather.6.I live in Beijing, where has a long history.7.We still don’t know if or not they have arrived at Shanghai by plane.8.It is the tallest tower which can be seen far away.9.The person about who we just talked is my maths teacher.10.Yesterday we were having our dinner while the telephone rang.11.But, there are still some countries where people have not enough to feed on.12.It is said, he has left for Germany.13.I doubt that he is a spy.14.I don’t doubt whether you have told the truth.15.He has no money and he has much knowledge.【答案与解析】 1.that 改为whether。

2.That 改为What。主语从句缺少宾语，应用what引导。3.since 改为when或if。因为后面是一个条件或时间状语从句。4.If 改为Whether。主语从句不能用If引导。5.If改为Whether。主语从句要用whether引导。6.where 改为which。定语从句缺少主语。7.if 改为whether。whether or not为固定用法。

8.which 改为that。定语从句的先行词tower被最高级tallest修饰。9.who 改为whom。介词后关系代词指人时只能用whom。

10.while 改为when。when作并列连词，表示“这时候”，不能用while代替。11.But改为However。注意后面的逗号。此处只能用连接副词，不能用连词。12.It改为As。这是一个由as引导的定语从句。不要与It is said that„主语从句混淆了。

13.that 改为 whether。如动词doubt为肯定式，后面的宾语从句用 whether引导。14.whether 改为 that。如 动词doubt为否定式，后面的宾语从句用 that引导。15.and改为but。表转折关系。

短文改错专项训练·代词类错误

1.The Greens tried his best to help me.2.I won’t forget the gift you sent I on my birthday.3.His parents went to New York last year, and none of them wrote letters to him.4.Would you like any coffee?

5.There is hardly nothing worth listening to in his talk.6.He made the least mistakes in the English examination.7.The dog is always loyal to it’s owner.8.— Is anyone here? — Yes, all are here.9.My glasses are missing, and I am looking for it.10.If you keep still, you can sit at every end of the boat.【答案与解析】

1.his改为their。the Greens指的是“格林一家”，代词应用their。2.I 改为me。人称代词me作宾语, 要用宾格。3.none改为neither。parents是“父母二人”。4.any 改为some。表示邀请时，疑问句需用 some。

5.nothing 改为 anything。因为 hardly是“几乎不”的意思，已有否定含义。6.least 改为fewest。mistake为可数名词。7.it’s 改为its。代词“它的”正确形式是：its。

8.anyone 改为 everyone。Is everyone here? 表示“所有的人都到了吗？”，而Is anyone here? 则表示“是否有人来了？”，意义是不一样的。

9.it 改为 them。glasses是复数意义名词，用 them或they代替。

高一英语单句改错 篇3

单句改错 I.冠词

1.I have visited many cities since the September 2006.2.I came here by the plane and I had a lovely journey.3.Tom was elected the monitor of our class.4.What good time we had last night!5.What pity it is that you won’t be back before I leave!6.The Americans landed on moon in 1969.7.I had intended to go to the party but I had a unexpected visitor.8.India has the population of more than one billion 9.He was a last to leave the building.10.She devoted her life to helping a poor.名词

11.He is the boy we talked about him.2 As we all know it, smoking is very harmful.3 I worried about it whether I hurt his feelings.4 They need two another people to complete this work.5 There is another thing you must remember.6 How far is from your company to the place where you live? 7 Some parents thought useless for girls to go to school.8 There seems to be nothing seems impossible for him in the world.9 I hate when my mother asks me to eat eggs.10 Meeting my uncle after all these years was an unforgettable moment, I will always treasure.11 On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of others information.12 He bought a chocolate cake, and put them in a secret place.13 As a child born in a poor village, I know anything outside it.14 I apologized and controlled me at my best till they dinner started.连词 Now that you have finished your homework, and you can watch TV.2 I wonder that whether he has decided to go abroad.3 Follow your doctor’s advice, and or your cough will get better.4 Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet.5 Regarded as the best in the class, so she was praised at the meeting.6 My English teacher always made good preparations for the lessons, she tried her best to make her classes lively.7 I had no sooner closed the door the telephone rang.8 It began to rain, they had to stop the match.9 What he noticed was one of the windows facing north was open.10 Everybody could see what happened and Tom was frightened.形容词副词 1 I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.2 The doctor said there was nothing seriously with her.3 I write to my mother every week, most on Sundays.4 the sooner you give up smoking, the good it will be.5 It is surprised to find all the money gone.6 Zaire is the second large producer of diamonds.7 Well, how could I afford so an expensive car? 8 His teachers think very high of him.9 It is also possibly for readers to borrow books from college libraries even if they are not students.10 You always gave me specially attention and inspired me.11 Hearing the news that he failed in the exam, he felt very sadly.12 He has to work if he wants to live comfortable.13 When he was young, he read a lot, and late he became a famous writer of his day.14 This is a most beautiful park.I have never seen a best one before.15 Her sweet voice sounds very beautifully.主谓一致 Hurry up.We must get there before the sun set.2 Mathematics are the science of numbers.3 The number of people who travel by plane in China are larger than ever before.4 Many a ship have been damaged in the storm.5 Those who comes to school by bike don’t keep your umbrellas open while riding.6 Such people as he is to be punished.7 One of the books is written in Chinese, and the rest is in English.8 Each boy and each girl want to serve the people in the future.9 Five minutes are enough to do this exercise.10 Neither you nor I are fit for the work.11 Mr Green, together with his wife and children, have come to China.12 There are a lake and some hills around it.13 Every means have been tried, but we still can’t bring the fire under control.14 What he said at the meeting were very important to us.15 He is the only one of my friends who are working hard.时态和语态 When he was young, he usually goes climbing.2 You do say that you would lend me some money yesterday.3 Hardly had the doctor gone to bed when there is a knock on the door.4 My watch got break, while I was playing basketball.5 I’m interested in English, so I spoke it better than the others do.6 It is already 10 years since he becomes a lawyer.7 The teacher told us that China was in the east of Asia.8 Tom told me that he has just been asked what he was doing during the holidays.9 The first railway in the world was designing in the last century.10 It has been rained for the past few weeks.11 Beg your pardon, but I don’t quite catch what you said.12 If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can to by bus.13 Where have you been all this time? The train was about to leave.14 Hello, this is Mr Green’s office.We were calling to remind you of you 4:15 appointment tomorrow afternoon.15 I rush over without delay, jumped onto the water and swam towards him.非谓语动词 While wait for the bus, he became lost in thought.2 Secretary wanting must be able to type, use a computer and speak a foreign language.3 My father enjoys listen to the Huangmei Opera.4 He stood up to make himself see and was soon found by his friends.5 There were terrible noises followed the sudden burst of light.6 Jack insisted on being sending where he was most needed.7 Heard the alarm, people ran out of the building.8 They saw a penniless young man wandered on the pavement.9 She tried to make herself understand in English.10 Never lost faith in himself, the scientist was determined to carry on with the research, no matter what others said.情态动词和虚拟语气 He feels as if he is floating on a cloud.2 The law says that drivers can’t drive after drinking.3 He will recover soon.You can’t worry about him.4 You can be tired—you’ve been working for four hours.5 Our suggestion is that you are the first to go.6 The poor little boy could never able to see or hear again.7 A few years ago I might afford to bring my wife to this place for dinner.8 Why can he do it that way? 9 I felt very lonely when I traveled in Chengdu alone.I must have taken my family.10 We may not thank you too much for what you’ve done for us.11 You mustn’t do the exercise if you don’t want to.12 He mustn’t have been to Beijing before because he knows nothing about it.13 You can’t return the dictionary now.You can keep it till next week if you like.14 Dare you to tell your parents about your school records? 15 She told him he ought not do it.名词性从句 Do you know how do they want to show love? 2 What I have been admitted into the Beijing University excited me.3 Whatever he needs is your understanding.4 The reason why they were always poor was which they paid little attention to education.5 I don’t know if or not Tom has passed the examination.6 it depends on if we have much money.7 I’m sure if he can pass the exam.8 The news which a serious earthquake happened in her hometown make her upset.9 The meeting’s decision is all workers should work two more hours every day.10 We can’t decided if to take up tennis or football.定语从句 I remember the time as my grandmother was telling stories to me.2 Child although he was, he looked quite calm in that difficult situation.3 When I was on the stage the next day, I was so nervous as I shook like a leaf.4 I’m sure it won’t be long until we find out the truth.5 We will finish the work on time, however difficulties we meet.6 Tom told me that he was shopping yesterday morning, he met one of his old friends.7 Watch carefully and do anything as if your teacher does in the lab.8 Thus you make the same mistake again, I’ll punish you.9 I have been surprised each time when my son has come home from school with a message saying his teacher wants to see me.10 Since we have finished the work, so we went home early.短文改错

短文改错教案 篇4

⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting

errors.(2)Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly.2.Emotion Aim: Stimulate students’ interests in learning English.Teaching Important Points: ⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting errors.(2)Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly.Teaching Difficult Points: ⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting errors.(2)Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly.Teaching Methods: Individual, pair work to make every student act in class.Teaching Aids: the multimedia

Teaching Procedures: Step1.Greetings : Step2.Presentation Show the following verse about error correction to the students.动词形，名次数，还有注意形和副； 非谓语，细辨别，习惯用法要记住； 句子成分多分析，逻辑错误需关注； 冠词连词常光顾。