英语作文高分词组(精选8篇)
有很多词组在雅思作文中是大家经常用到的,但是有一些并不适合出现在雅思作文中。如果大家想要自己的雅思写作拿到高分,就要注意在作文中避免使用不恰当的词组。南通沃尔得国际英语老师为大家整理了16个雅思写作高分避免使用的词组。
1.a lot of/lots of
这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了。可以用A considerable number of代替。
2.Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides
说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了。
3.Recently
这个词不好。按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间。可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替。
4.There is survey……
老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了。
5.And, because, but
这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替。
6.不能用vivid 来形容world,vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的。
7.No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly
这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适。其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度。
8.in a word
很多人会用它来做conclusion。鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢。
9.Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2-but it is ok for describing a process in task 1
10.Nowadays
理由和3差不多,这个词用在文章里显得太普通了,老师的原话是it does not mean very
much
11.It is a well known fact… 最好不要用, 有的考官会扣分。
12.advantages and disadvantages 换成merits and drawback 和pros and cons
13.In my opinion, I dis/agree with this
这是多余的表达.When stating your opinion you follow with a fact 相信大家都能看懂,,就不翻译了。
14.IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写, 例如I’m 在考场上别犯懒,平时最好也别写缩写,多多注意,养成习惯。
15.very不能用来形容delicious, lovely, fantastic, wonderful, amazing, gorgeous and huge.16.human being MS这个词指的是动物+植物,以后可以用man kind代替。
一、要点全面, 构思合理
建议学生在动笔写作前, 认真看清题目, 包括提示, 全面了解写作的要求, 要理清写作思路。确定是用什么体裁来写, 全文的框架和结构是什么等等。这样就要有个brainstorm的过程。做这些的前提就是, 让学生在第一时间内用红笔把作文应当包括的要点勾画出来, 这样做主要是防止要点遗漏。因为许多学生在写作最初还记得要点, 写到中间或最后就会完全脱离题目, 从而导致要点不全。在高考中作文要点不全会针对遗漏情况酌情扣分。所以, 不能忽略这个很简单的环节。其次, 构思合理, 就是指在合乎情理、合乎规范、力所能及的前提下添加一些要点中没有提及的信息。紧扣主题适当发挥, 需要生活阅历和思维能力作为后盾, 否则, 就可能成为不切实际的空话、不合逻辑的胡话。所以, 高分作文第一步显得格外重要。
二、审清要点, 分清层次
根据题目, 确定文章中心, 列出表达要点, 理顺思路, 分清层次和表达逻辑关系。其实英语作文的提高除了平时多写, 多积累以外, 拿到题目后解读和审题也很重要, 只有审题准确, 才能打好优秀作文的基础。英语作文的审题走三步, 人称、时态和结构。根据题目要点, 仔细斟酌分析, 深入到题目当中, 把这三个审题的关键点把握好, 这样才能为作文打好基础。高考作文常见的人称是一二人称, 时态是现在时, 而结构通常是三段论, 对于常见的点要把握好, 以备考试当中用到。
三、打草稿
这是写作的第一步, 但也是必需的步骤。打草稿最多三分钟, 草稿应该是作文的大概行文结构, 并非是一篇完整的作文。这个环节需要做的就是把要点先用简单的英语表达出来, 做到人称时态和结构的正确。许多学生存在两个误区, 一个就是打了草稿, 就把作文从草稿本上直接抄到试卷上, 没有任何的补充和修改。另外一个误区就是有的学生觉得打草稿就是浪费时间, 直接在试卷上无所顾忌地去写, 结果句不成句, 文不成文, 而且书写更是让人无法辨别, 这样的作文能拿到高分吗?
四、添加修改润色
高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚, 把意思表达完整, 而是要给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。如何让英语句子靓起来呢?
我觉得通过对低级句型的改造, 可以迅速达到这一目的。可以用到强调句, 将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句, 还可以用倒装句和with引导的伴随结构, 巧妙地使用非谓语动词, 可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。恰到好处的被动句, 适合应用于较简短的句子, 这样显得语言简洁生动, 宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。感叹句, 通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛, 凡是“I feel...”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。高级定语从句:若定语从句中的动词带有介词, 只需将介词移至先行词后等等。这是好作文产生的必备环节, 通过添加信息, 可以采用一些语法句式或者固定句式将句子写得更加有层次性, 通过添加固定短语和过渡语, 使文章行文连贯流畅, 更加符合英语写作的习惯。
对于修改, 一定要避免基本和常见错误, 比如拼写错误, 标点符号不清楚, 断句不明, 主谓不一致, 句子层次不清楚, 或语义不符合文章语境等等问题。就润色而言, 需要注意写出的文章符合英语语境和表达法, 切记不要出现汉语式英语, 表达明确, 简洁明了, 不要过于繁琐。
五、抄写
如果卷面凌乱, 字迹潦草, 书写过小、过密, 字母连写严重, 标点不清, 教师首先会觉得该考生不认真。在高强度阅卷过程中, 没有谁愿意逐字辨认写作内容, 况且, 评分标准中规定书写不清以致影响判卷的, 评卷教师有权降档处理 (扣5—6分左右) 。经过上一环接, 此时就可以把作文很整齐地誊写到试卷上了, 一定要注意到书写整齐美观, 这样再加上上一环节的添加修改润色, 相信学生的作文一定会很精彩。
另外, 对于作文中的常见句型和表达, 也要有意识进行积累, 不积跬步, 无以至千里;不积小流, 无以成江海。
高考作文常用句式:
1.What is known to all is that...众所周知的是
As is known to all, ...
It is known to all that...
2.The reason why...is that...原因是
3.On no account/Under no circumstances can we...决不
4.What impresses me most is that...让我印象最深刻的是
5.It’s generally acknowledged that...普遍认为
6.There is an old saying going like this…俗话说
7.It can be said with certainty that…确切的说
8.When it comes to sth, some people think....However, others believe...当说到……人们认为
9.It is commonplace to do sth.……很普遍
10.It is more advisable to do.……更可取。
11.From my point of view, it would be bet-ter if...我认为, ……会更好
12.From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusionthat...综上所述, 我们会合理的得出这样的结论……
13.be doing/be on the point of doing...when当做……的时候, 突然
14.I’ll appreciate it if...如果……我会不胜感激
15.I didn’t realize its importance until I...直到……我才意识到他的重要性
16.No matter how+adj it is, we can...无论多……我都能
17.So useful is it that we had better...如此的有用, 以至于我们最好
18.Should/were it rain/to rain, we would...如果下雨, 我们会 (if省略, should, were提前)
19.With sth/sb doing/done/to do, we should…
20.独立主格结构
Time permits, and we will go out.
If Time permits, we will go out.
均可转化为:
Time permitting, we will...
常用短语:
1.be faced with new opportunities and challenges.面临新的挑战和机遇
2.arouse wide public concern引起广泛关注
3.be supported by sound reasons有充分利用支持
4.be no exception也不列外
5.the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages利大于弊
6.broaden one’s horison开阔视野
7.take many factors into accout考略到诸多因素
8.make joint efforts做出共同努力
9.lay a solid foundation for打下坚实的基础
10.meet the needs of满足需求
11.attach great importance to重视
12.give rise to引起
be conductive to对……有益
13.be of use/value有用或价值
14.long to do渴望做
15.have a great effect/influence on对……有重大影响
16.do one’s utmost/best to do尽力做
17.spare no effort to do不遗余力做
18.manage to do设法
equip sb with (e.g.equip ourselves with knowledge) 用…武装
19.be beneficial to sb对某人有益
20.appeal for sb to do呼吁某人做某事appeal to doing呼吁做
21.do all/everything one can to do尽力做
22.have no choice but to do别无选择只能做……
23.would like to do/feel like doing想做……
24.do good to/do harm to对……有益或有害
过渡语
1.owing to/due to/thanks to/because of因为
2.now that既然
3.to begin with/at the first place/most of all首先
4.moreover/furthermore/what’s more.what’s better/worse.另外
5.Meanwhile/at the meantime.同时
6.Last but not least最后但也很重要的是
7.As for me./From my point of view./from where I stand就某人而言
8.As a matter of fact实际上
9.Nevertheless, however, in contrast然而
10.Hence, therefore, thus.因此
11.for one thing...for another/also首先……其次
12.on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
13.generally speaking一般地说
14.in other words换句话说
15..in particular/particularly特别地
[要求多样化的语言表达]
高考书面表达的评分标准中的“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇”针对的是语言表达要多样化。
1. 词汇的使用
这里所说的“词汇”,可以从“高级词汇的使用”“同义词的使用”和“短语的使用”等三方面去理解。
(1)使用高级词汇
“评分标准”第五档要求中提到,“词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较高级词汇所致”。这里说的“高级词汇”,一般指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求,但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇。需要说明的是,所谓高级词汇并不是所用单词越难越长越好,其特点应该是与众不同。常言道,见微知著,若能适当运用高级词汇,会给评判者留下更加深刻印象。如:
Qualified overseas students are welcome in China.
It will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents.
(2)使用同义词
英语中有些词汇使用频率非常高,如receive,advice,important,easy,good等词,这类词因同学们相当熟悉,在表达时往往会优先使用。但这些出现频率太高的词很容易令同学们的文章陷入“千人一面”的困境中,无法给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。因此,如果能够使用它们相应的同义词,避开这种重复现象,就可以做到“别具一格”,给人以清新的感觉。如:
高频句:We must do something good for our country.
同义句:We must make a contribution to our country. (用make a contribution to来代替do something good for)
(3)使用短语
与上相似的情况还有使用短语来代替简单词汇。例如:
高频句:He decided to start early the next morning.
短语句:He decided to make an early start the next morning.
高频句:We enjoyed talking about our experience after a long separation.
短语句:We enjoyed having a talk about our experience after a long separation.
2. 较复杂语言结构的使用
固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、从句和非谓语动词结构等都属于较复杂的“语法结构”。这些结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,以增加文章的节奏和韵律美,从而较好地反映写作者的语言运用能力。
高频句:We’ll meet at the bus station and go there by bike early in the morning.
改后句:Early in the morning we’ll meet at the bus station and go there by bike.
高频句:The old lady couldn’t help crying when she heard that her son died in the accident.
改后句:Hearing that her son died in the accident, the old lady couldn’t help crying.
高频句:We can do something good for our country only in this way.
改后句:Only in this way can we do something good for our country.
高频句:If we do so, our parents will be happy and proud of us.
改后句:If so, we’ll make our parents happy and proud of us.
[要求得体的语言表达]
“评分标准”要求考生注意“语言的得体性”,就是要求在表达时要根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等因素来选择使用恰当的英语表达形式。
1. 得体性对体裁和题材的要求
不同体裁和题材的文章有不同的用语要求。比如“书面通知”就不宜用“I will tell you a piece of good news.”或“May I have your attention, please?”等口语化的句子,这些句子只有用在“口头通知”中才得体。
2. 得体性对准确性的要求
准确性是指要求写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,但是不少考生由于受汉语思维习惯的影响,在写作时自觉不自觉地产生不规范的表达。要做到准确、地道地表达文章,首先必须要掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中文式英语,在实践中不断总结中英表达差异,养成用英语思维写作的习惯。看以下句子:
Heart flower angry open. 心花怒放。
Please call my hand machine. 请给我打手机。
You parents very miss you. 你的父母非常想念你。
很明显,这些句子是在用英文套用中文。如何避免中文式英语,建议同学们多读多背,在精读中汲取营养,对于好的句子最好背诵下来,适时用于写作训练中。
[语篇要连贯]
高考书面表达“评分标准”指出,书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”,并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”。这里说的连贯性,就是指通过连接词(包括并列连词、从属连词和连接性副词)、非谓语动词短语等语法成分,使两个或多个意义相互关联的事情或观点在同一个句子内得以表达,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。从而使整个段落或篇章浑然一体,连贯流畅。
关联词就是连贯语篇常用的手段之一。大家应熟记当然不能仅仅是and, then, but等词,还可以用其它来表示“启、承、转、合”的语篇连接词来丰富表达层次。因为好的关联词的恰当使用无疑能使全文过渡自然,令读者对后续的句子产生心理的期待和准备,增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。当然,过渡词也不可滥用,否则就有画蛇添足之嫌。
总之,写好书面表达非一日之功,同学们只有在平时的学习中加强训练,同时掌握必要的解题方法,才能取得好的成绩。
1.应邀赴宴
be invited to dinner 2.向四面八方
in all directions 3.做出新的发现
make a new discovery 4.正在讨论中
under discussion 5.洗盘子
wash dishes 在远方,在远处
in the distance 7.对…冷淡
be distant towards sb.8.对…有益
do good to 9.做坏事,犯罪
do wrong 10.挨门挨户
from door to door 11.隔壁的 next door 12.下楼
go downstairs 13.到市区去
go downtown 缓慢前进,拖延 drag one’s feet 15.催人泪下
draw tears from sb.16.渴望做某事
dream of doing sth.17.在墙上钻孔
drill a hole in the wall 18.赶走
drive off 19.使某人发狂
drive sb.mad 20.挣钱
earn/make money 21.谋生
earn one’s living 22.究竟
on earth 别着急,别紧张,放松些
take it easy 对…有很大影响
have a great effect on 25.努力做某事
make efforts to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
encourage sb.to do sth.量入而出;使收支相抵 make ends meet 28.美满的结局
a happy ending 说英语的国家 English-speaking countries 30.报名比赛
enter oneself for a contest 31.剧场的入口
the entrance to the theater 32.在除夕
on New Year’s Eve 33.虽然,即使
even if / even though 34.时事
current events 35.参加考试
have / take an examination 进行体格检查
carry out a medical examination 37.考试及格
pass an examination 为…树立榜样 set an example to sb.39.做早操
do morning exercises 40.产生,成立
come into existence/come into being 41.做实验
carry / do / make an experiment 42.做解释,说明
make an explanation
43.做鬼脸,装怪相
make a face/make faces 44.事实上
as a matter of fact 未能…/失败做…… fail to do sth.46.落后,掉队
fall behind
47.对…而熟悉
be familiar with sth.48.因…而闻名
be famous/known for 49.作为…而闻名
be famous/known as 50.摸某人的脉
feel one’s pulse 51.觉得想做…
feel like doing sth.52.伤害某人的感情
hurt one’s feelings 53.春节
the Spring Festival 54.发高烧
have a high fever 55.科学领域
the field of science 56.五十多岁时
in one’s fifties 57.关键人物
a key figure 58.填写表格
fill in the form 59.刹那间
in a flash
60.一场大洪水
a big / great flood 61.扫地
sweep the floor 62.在三层
on the third floor 三层楼的建筑
a building of three stories/a three-stories building 64.正在开花
be in flowers 65.放(风筝等)
fly a kite 66.糊里糊涂
in a fog
67.欺骗,愚弄某人
make a fool of sb.68.在山脚下
at the foot of the mountain 69.空军
the air force 70.靠武力,强行
by force
71.用很大力气
with great force 72.对外贸易
foreign trade
73.养成好/坏习惯
form a good/bad habit 74.碰碰运气
try one’s fortune 75.每四个一组(一批);四个四个地 in fours 76.常客
a frequent visitor 77.新手
a fresh hand
78.同…交朋友
make friends with
79.那时起 /从现在起
from then on/from now on 80.不时地,时常
from time to time
81.不劳而不获。
No pains, no gains.82.做游戏
play games 83.代沟
generation gap 84.开始认真(做某事)
get down to sth.85.陷入麻烦
get into trouble
86.有音乐天分
have a gift for music 87.用尽,耗尽,筋疲力尽 give out/be worn out 激动人心的演讲
an inspiring speech
129.急需帮助
in great/instant need of help 88.朝…看了一眼
take a glance at 89.向人瞪眼,怒目而视
glare at 90.(灯,火)熄灭
go out 91.复习功课
go over the lesson 92.进了一个球
score a goal 93.犯语法错误
make mistakes in grammar 94.懂某人的意思
grasp one’s meaning 95.勿踏草地
keep off the grass 96.养成…的习惯
get into the habit of 97.用手
by hand 98.分发
hand out 99.一方面…另一方面…
on the one hand…on the other hand 100.少量的a handful of 101.过幸福生活
live a happy life 102.损害,伤害
do harm to 103.一个好收成a good harvest 104.保持镇静
keep one’s head/keep calm 105.身体好
in good health 106.记住某事
learn / know sth.by heart 107.紧握某物
keep a tight hold on sth.108.握住;抓住
catch / take / get hold of 109.趾高气扬
hold one’s head high 110.暑假
the summer holidays 111.休假
on holiday 112.为(向)… 表示敬意;为了纪念… in honour of 113.对某人抱很大希望
have high hope for sb.114.怀着…的希望
in the hope of doing sth.115.住院
be in hospital 116.大约一小时
an hour or so 117.挨饿
go hungry 118.打猎
go hunting 119.匆匆忙忙
in a hurry 120.不知道
have no idea 121.但愿,要是…就好了
if only 122.给某人留下好印象
make a good impression on sb.123.慢慢前进
inch one’s way forward 124.患难之交才是真朋友。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.125.告诉某人某事
inform sb of sth 126.坚持要做
insist on doing 127.视察工厂
inspect a factory
130.打断谈话
interrupt a conversation 131.介绍信
a letter of introduction 132.收到请帖
receive an invitation 133.邀请信
a letter of invitation 134.讲笑话
tell a joke
135.和某人开玩笑
play a joke with sb.136.旅行
make a journey(to)137.使某人高兴的是
to one’s joy 138.不可以貌取人。
Don’t judge a man by his looks.139.初中/高中
a junior/senior high school 140.正在那时
just then 与…保持联系 keep in touch with 使…不进入… keep out of 成功的秘诀 the key to success 踢门 kick the door
踢掉鞋子 kick off one’s shoes 跪下 go down / fall on one’s knees 敲门 knock at the door 最迟,至迟 at the latest 迟早 sooner or later
哈哈大笑起来 burst into laughter 违(守)法 break / obey the law 制定一条法律 make a law
摆设餐具(准备吃饭)lay the table 过着简朴的生活 lead a simple life 忽略,遗漏 leave out
听关于…的讲座 attend a lecture on 给某人一个教训 teach sb.a lesson 从…在中吸取教训 take a lesson from 惊讶地叫了一声 let out a cry of surprise 透漏消息 let out the news 大写字母 a capital letter
仰卧 / 俯卧 lie on one’s back / stomach 复活,苏醒过来 come back to life 交通信号灯 traffic lights
列一张购物清单 make a shopping list 谋生,度日 make a living
丧生,死;牺牲 lose one’s life 泄气;灰心 lose heart 失音 lose one’s voice 输一场 lose a game
祝你好运。Wish you good luck.洗衣机 a washing machine
欣喜若狂 be mad with joy 邮寄包裹 send the parcel by mail 赚钱 make money 交朋友 make friends 取得进步 make progress 利用 make use of 编造故事 make up a story 弥补某人的过失
make up for one’s mistake 有礼貌 have good manners 商标 a trade mark 满分 full marks 观看一场篮球比赛
watch a basketball match 进行比赛 have a match 祝你成功。May you success.五一节 May Day 通过这种方式 by this means 用…方法,依靠 by means of 决不 by no means 按…尺寸做
all in all 总的说来
and so on 等等
as a matter of fact =in fact 其实,实际上
at present 目前现在date back to 追溯到
for the future 从今以后,在今后
from now on 今后,从现在起
in short 总之,总而言之
in a word 简言之、一句话、总之
in the end 最后,终于
most important of all 最重要的是
about all 首先
for one thing,for another thing 首先…,再者… first of all, next then, lastly 首先,然后,最后
firstly,secondly,thirdly…finally 第一,第二,第三…最后 in addition 另外
in addition to 除…之外
according to 根据
as far as I am concerned 据我所知
generally spesking 一般说来
what’s more 更多的是
therefore 因此,从而
furthermore =moreover再者
otherwise 另外
in my opinion 我认为,我的意见是
not only …but also不但…而且…
in spite of 不管
for example 例如… different from 与……不同
as a result(of)结果
in order to do 为了
There is no doubt that 毫无疑问
It is well known that 大家都知道
to tell the true 说实话
however 然而
therefore 因此
since then 自从那时起
as soon as 一……就……
thanks to 多得,幸亏
英语作文常用句型:
1.表示原因
1)The reason for this is that…
2)The reason for this is obvious.3.There are three reasons for this.2.表示好处
1)It does us a lot of good.2)It benefits us quite a lot.3)It has the following advantages.3.表示坏处
1)It is harmful to us.2)It has more disadvantages than advantages.3)It dose us much harm.4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.2)We think it necessary to do sth.3)It plays an important role in our life.5.表示措施
1)We should solve the problems that we are faced with.2)We should try our best to overcome the difficulties.3)We should take some effective measures
6.表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.2)The computer has brought about many changes in education.7.表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...2)No one can deny the fact that...3)This is a case that many people are interested in.8.表示比较
1)I prefer to reading rather than watching TV.2)Compared with A,B..9.表示数量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...2)The population in this city has now increased(decreased)to 800,000.10.表示看法
一、高考英语作文常用高级句型词汇
1.首先, 第一: initially, to begin with, to start with;
2.其次, 第二, 第三, 第四……: furthermore, moreover, in addition, besides
3.最后: finally;last but not least:(提及最后的人或事物时说)最后但同样重要的4.现在(目前), XXXX现象是不可避免且难以否认的Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that ……At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that …..例句: Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that computer is playing a significant role in our daily lives
At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that advertisement has been flooding into our daily lives
5.随着社会(科技)的发展,人们开始注意到XXXX的重要性
Along with the advance of the society(science and technology), people are attaching much importance to ……
例句: Along with the advance of the society, people are attaching more and more importance to the interview in the job-hunting
6.最近, XXXXX现象引起了人们的广泛关注
Recently, the phenomenon that …… has aroused wide public concern
例句: Recently, the phenomenon that CPI keeps increasing has aroused wide public concern
7.一部分人认为……., 而另一部分人认为……
Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that….8.就我个人而言(老实说), 我全力支持前者(后者
eg.As for me, I am in high favor of the former(latter).Personally, I side with the former(latter)
Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it1
is the former(latter)that I approve of
9.我认为(在我看来,就我看来,我的观点是, 我想….)
I am convinced that….As far as I am concerned, …..From my point of view, …..From where I stand, ……
11.因此, 基于以上讨论, 我们很容易得出……的结论
Based on the discussion above, it is easy for us to draw the conclusion that…..12.作文中一些可用来替换常用词汇的高级词汇
important—significant;good—stunning/ fabulous/ sensational;way—approach/ method
use—adopt;understand/know—figure… out;but—nevertheless;so—consequently/ therefore
because of—due to;like to do/want to do— be willing to do;finish—accomplish;
13.According to the statistics provided by..., it can be seen that...14.There is good/sufficient evidence to show that...15.No one can ignore/overlook the fact that...二、用于文章结尾的句型:
1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...2)It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...3)There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but...might be helpful/beneficial.4)No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of..., but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of...might be the first step on the right way.5)There is little doubt/denying that...6)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of...require immediate attention.7)In conclusion,...8)Personally, I prefer to...9)In short,...should learn to...;Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.10)As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that...三、常用谚语(在议论文中):
1)As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.2)As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health.On the other hand, if you dont deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health.So we should look at the matter from two sides.3)As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way.”(有志者事竟成)
4)As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”(观其交友,知其为人)
5)As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”.(没有苦,就没有甜)
四、辩论中常用的句型:
1)There is no doubt that...2)It is obvious/clear that...3)As is known to all,...4)(It’s)no wonder...(难怪)He didn’t work hard and no wonder he lost his job.5)It goes without saying that...(不用说,不成问题,很自然……)
一、注重积累, 夯实基础
现在, 我省的高中阶段学生, 无论城乡, 生活都比较单一, 基本上是从家到学校的两点一线, 或者全日制住宿。社会接触少, 亲身体验少、生活经验少;因此, 如何引导他们在日常生活中积累素材, 使自己的作文言之有物是关键之一, 但也成为难点所在。针对这种情况, 我们应该在平时的英语课堂上加强引导, 让他们有意识地关心身边的人和事, 并去分析这些人和事背后的真相, 做到“情感体验, 远离淡漠”。除了要对学生进行有针对性的写作指导外、关注生活外, 还应鼓励学生广泛阅读, 在阅读练习中, 丰富词汇、培养语感、提高阅读速度、扩大词汇量, 在潜移默化中将这些日常积累和阅读所习得的名言警句实际运用到自己的日常写作中。因此应鼓励学生选择适合于自己的读物。日积月累, 定能提高。在阅读优秀作品时, 要做有心人, 把文章中的精彩词句和段落记录下来, 反复斟酌和阅读, 并努力把别人写得好的句子灵活地变成自己的表达, 为自己所用。说到底, 语言表达的学习过程就是平常不断积累的过程、不断模仿的过程、不断实践提高的过程。写作的过程就是将平时积累出的精彩语句灵活运用, 所谓, 学以致用, 就是这个意思。
二、限时训练, 巧用技巧
因为高考作文时间限定在25分钟, 所以平时训练时, 要注意时间的控制, 严格规定学生在既定时间内完成。这一步是关键, 也是学生的难关。可能在开始时不太适应, 一段时间之后就习惯。随着学生写作能力增强, 时间相应缩短, 决不能养成拖拉的坏习惯。其次是写作技巧指导, 要让学生明确写作概念和写作目的, 需要注重并掌握要领, 文章的开头很重要, 若能用一些特殊的结构或技巧就能给批阅老师留下好印象, 从而有利于文章的整体得分。在写作训练过程中, 要注重掌握下列技巧: (1) 学会通过分句和合句, 来增强句子的连贯性和表现力。不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的结构出现, 可以把状语置于句首, 或用分词等多重表达句型。 (2) 在整篇文章中, 避免句式单一, 灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语介词短语等。 (3) 避免重复使用同一单词或词组, 确定文章的表述人称和基本时态, 注意主谓一致原则。 (4) 学会使用过渡词, 避免生搬硬套。
三、坚持写作实践, 注重学生互评
“罗马不是一天建成的”, 英文表达能力必须通过长期的、大量的反复的、有意识的实践才能获得真正提高。如果实践不够, 即使学生完全掌握了课堂上所学的语言知识, 也懂得了一定的写作技巧, 表达时也会出现前后语病连连, 不符逻辑的现象。“纸上得来终觉浅, 绝知此事要躬行”是英文表达提高中有效的方法。在大量实践的基础上, 注重写作的自主性, 即让学生进行作文互评, 这是一个很能提高学生语感的实践活动, 教师在写作教学中, 如果能够灵活运用, 将对写作效果起到事半功倍的作用。另外, 学生英语基础不扎实是作文部分得不到高分的主要原因, 要得高分, 必须先从基础抓起, 加强基础语法与句型的训练, 打好坚实的语言基础。一方面使学生对写作知识有足够的掌握, 为他们打下扎实的技巧基础。另一方面让学生在互评作文的过程中, 对写作及其修改或有更深入的认识, 不断加强作文写作水平。学生在互评过程中, 在乐于找错误、挑毛病的过程中, 也会去留意自己的表达方式。因而, 长期的互评训练在减轻教师工作负担的同时, 又有助于提高学生的实际表达能力。
总之, “冰冻三尺, 非一日之寒”。英语写作能力的提高并非是一蹴而就的。如果从高一开始, 我们在英语课堂上就对上述三个写作实践环节进行有意识的关注, 并且能应用到课堂中去, 通过三年的坚持, 就一定会取得非常好的效果。
摘要:笔者已从事高中英语教学10多年, 结合高考作文历年来的教学体验, 以及新课程高考作文新标准, 学生高考英语作文分数的提高还是有法可循的。一、注重积累, 夯实基础;二、限时训练, 注重技巧;三、坚持写作实践, 注重学生互评。
关键词:高考作文新课程实践写作
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1. 经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2. 人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长 the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of peoples living standard
3. 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4. 面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5. 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6. 社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7. 引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8. 不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9. 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11. 完全不同的观点
a totally different argument
12. 一些人…而另外一些人… Some people… while others…
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14. 就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…
15. 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16. 双方的论点 argument on both sides
17. 发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…
18. 对…必不可少 be indispensable to…
19. 正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
20. …也不例外… be no exception
21. 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…
22. 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。
23. 导致,引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24. 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25. 责任感/成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界 widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision
28. 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29. 经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30. 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32. 做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33. 对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…
34. 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
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