高考英语作文写作练习（精选8篇）
一.教学内容：
话题写作练习
A 人物介绍
参考篇目：Unit 1.Hawking.Einstein
注意：1.表格变为段落
2．按时间顺序
3．根据逻辑关系加上连接词
常用短语和词汇：
be bornwhen he/she was ……years old /at the age of
laterbegin tograduate from
spend time doingdiscover
评价：be considered to be / be regarded as
be rewarded……contribute
devoted oneself to sth.根据以下素材写一篇介绍爱因斯坦的短文
Date of birth: March 14th, 1879Place of birth: Germany
Childhood: curious, slowing in learning
Education background:
1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion
1896 : graduated from high school
1900 : become a maths teacher
1905 : receive a doctor’s degree
Achievement:develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915
prove light is bent when passing the sun
won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922
Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century
Albert Einstein
Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany.When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning.In 1886, he began to study in Munich.He studied mathematics as well as religion.In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17.Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher.In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree.By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world.He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun.Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922.Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.Some people say that he was a genius.But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work.B.说明文
参考篇目：Unit2.News Media 不同观点对比。阐述自己观点。
常用短语和词汇：
对比：while, but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,类比：as well, besides, also, too,表达观点：I think, in my opinion, it seems to me……
1.适当增加与要点有关的语句加以说明；
2.主要陈述自己观点，对对方观点要提及并加以驳斥；
3.在结尾处重申自己的观点
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你们班上在讨论城市里博物馆的作用。根据以下内容，写一篇120字左右的短文，陈述你自己的观点。开头已给出。
Side A
1.Museums can help understand what happened in the past
2.Museums can educate people
3.Museums are centers for research.4.Museums can attract tourists to the city
Side B
1.Museums use up a great sum of money
2.Museums are usually in old buildings, so they need protection
Most cities have at least one museum, but how important are museums to people living in the 21st century?
Some people think that museums use up the money which could be spent on other things.Besides, museums are usually in old buildings, so they often need protection.In my opinion, museums can help people understand what happened in the past.If we have a better understanding of the past, we may improve our life in the future.Museums play an important role in educating people and they are centers for research.Also, museums are very important for tourism.They attract a lot of tourists to the city each year.To sum up, it seems to me that museums are an important part of our life.They are worth visiting and protecting.C.Safety Rules
参考篇目：Unit8 First Aid
Useful expressions:
You should always…Please don’t ….You ought to …
You should not….You must….Never…..Make sure that ….You must never….Always remember to ….*********
Use the lists of dos and don’ts below to write a passage about safety rules in the chemistry lab.Dos
•wash your hands before & after the experiment
•keep the air fresh
•put on gloves when doing experiments
•be careful with fire and dangerous chemicals
Don’ts
•taste chemicals
•eat anything
•touch anything without teacher’s permission
•run about in the lab
An emergency may happen every day.But if we are careful and follow some safety rules, some can be avoided.Let’s take chemistry lab as an example.First of all, you should wash your hands before and after the experiment.And you should keep the air in the lab fresh.You’d better put on the gloves when doing the experiment.Be careful with fire and dangerous medicine.Never taste chemicals or eat anything in the lab.Always remember not to touch anything without teacher’s permission.You shouldn’t run about in the lab.Only in this way can you keep yourself safe in the lab.D.记叙文
参考篇目：Unit 7 Living with disease / Diagnosed with Cancer
时间、地点、人物、事件、因果关系交待清。
时态：过去时
表示时间的短语：one day, while, when, then, a moment later, as soon as…
因果关系：so, as, as a result……
图示提示要先审图，记要点，列出所需词汇和短语。
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根据以下图示（图略），以Naughty Tommy为题，写一篇短文，描述在公园里所发生的事。
Tommy was a naughty boy.One day he saw a girl playing happily under a tree.He decided to play a trick on her.So he picked up a stone and hid himself behind the tree.Then he threw the stone at the girl.Hit on the back, the girl began to cry.Tommy was very happy and went away with a smile.A moment later, he saw a dog sleeping on a bench.He picked up a stone again
and hit the dog.The dog woke up and jumped at him.Tommy was so frightened that
he ran away as fast as he could.E.过程描写
Useful expressions:
While…..as soon as be about to do….when….just as…. suddenly / all of a suddenly
happen to do…/ It happened that…
Tips:
How to write a process paragraph?
1.审题: 文字，图表
2.文体
3.人称
4.时态
5.内容要点
a)时间
b)地点
c)人物
d)事件经过
6.所需词汇及句型：
Practical writing:
NMET 2000
假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。
注意：1 目击者应该准确报告事实；词数100左右；结尾已为你写好。
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_____________________________________________________________________After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Possible version:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.Suddenly the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two
minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.学生习作
（A）
At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual.I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t.Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady.After that I went over to check out the old man.（B）
It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000.I was walking along the southern side of Park Road.I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road.There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road.What happened next really surprised me.A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a right turn and knocked the old man down.It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react.Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in time to see the plate number of the yellow car.It was AC864.F.地点描写
参考篇目：Unit 5 The British Isles
Useful expressions:
be located in / lie in / be situated in
in the west of, to the west of
off the east coast of
cover an area of …… square kilometers
be made up of / consist of
be separated from
be surrounded by
has a population of
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Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers
History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction
in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire,took away treasures, ruins,new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s,Yuanmingyuan Park
Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing.It covers an area of
3.5 square kilometers.It was built during the Qing Dynasty.After 150 years of construction, it
became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world.However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire.Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins.It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected.Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s.The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday.文章的检查
时态，词形，人称，数，逻辑关系
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000.1._________
I was walking along Park Road towards to the east2.________
when a old man came out of the park on the other3.________
side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4.________
Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road.5.________
The next moment the car hit a man while he6.________
was acrossing the road.He fell with a cry.The7.________
car not stop but drove off at great speed heading8.________
west.I notice the driver was a young woman,9.________
the plate number was AC 864.About two minutes10._______
later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to
一、认真审题, 拟定提纲, 写出各段主题句, 丰富文章内容及设亮点。
1.认真审题。拿到题目后, 首先要认真审题, 看题目的要求是什么, 要点是什么, 以及特殊要求是什么。确定文章的时态及文体, 是议论文还是记叙文? 对分几段写有无要求? 认真审清题目的文字或图片, 构思提纲, 切忌偏题、离题, 东拉西扯, 一定要避免条理不清、重点不突出的失误。把握全部要点, 理清脉络, 既不能无中生有, 又不要漏掉要点。为了避免写作时遗漏要点, 最好用笔把信息划下来, 以免出错。根据汉语提示简化文章要点, 将要点短语化、短语句子化。
2.列出文章框架, 写下提纲。对一篇书面表达来说, 理清文章结构和框架, 写出各段主题句是很重要的。一定要先确定文章的结构, 注意合理布局, 即整篇文章分几段, 每段写什么, 涵盖哪些知识点。一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段, 每段的主题句非常重要, 是段落内容的高度概括。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。将段落主题置于段落的开头, 可使文章结构更清晰, 让读者对文章内容一目了然, 再根据需要将句子归为各段。
3.连句成篇。遣词造句时, 要注意语法正确、选词恰当、长短句结合;组句成篇时, 要注意巧妙过渡、行文流畅、衔接连贯, 恰当地使用连接词。部分学生在行文过程中, 喜欢将句子任意堆砌, 这主要是因为他们不会灵活运用衔接词。
4.认真修改。写完后要快速阅读一遍文章 , 检查单词拼写、语法和标点是否正确。没有把握的词和句子一定不能用, 不要把不会的词空一格出来。此外, 一定要保持卷面整齐美观, 高考“书面表达”的质量, 既反映在表达内容上, 又反映在书形式上。
二、必须掌握一定的写作技巧。
在用词方面, 考生应尽量学会地道的英语表达, 适度运用一些高级词汇, 并运用一些较复杂的语法结构, 如各种从句、强调句、倒装句、非谓语动词等。全文句式要富于变化, 长短句结合。注意文章的连贯性, 准确使用承上启下的过渡词, 使全文结构紧凑。
表示顺序的:first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not theleast, first and most important等;
表示时间的:in the past, now, at present, in the future, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, lately, as soon as, afterwards, now, after a while等;
表示转折的:however, while, onthecontrary, atthesametime, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately等;
表示递进的:besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, in addition, furthermore, moreover, as well as等;
表示并列时的:and, as well as, also, both ... and, neither ...Nor, either ... or等;
表示原因的:as a result, owing to, due to, because of, therefore, thanks to, because, as, since, for等;
表示让步的:although, after all, in spite of, despite, even if, even though, though等;
表示举例的:for example, for instance, such as, take ... forexample等;
表示结果的:asaresult, thus, hence, so, therefore, consequently, as a consequence等;
表示归纳总结的:finally, in a word, in the end, in conclusion, in short, in general, to sum up, to conclude等;
表示对比的:on one hand, on the other hand, while等;
表示解释的:in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, thatis, namely等;
表示程度的:first of all, above all, again and again等。
三、几种常见的英语句式结构。
1.主语+不及物动词, 如:He arrived at six last night.
2.主语+及物动词+宾语 , 如 :I bought a good English Chinese Dictionary yesterday.
3.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语, 如:Please tell mea story now.
4.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语, 如:I found it impossible to work with him.
5.主语+系动词+表语, 如:He is a Chinese boy.The grass turnsgreen in spring.
另外, There be ...句型, 表示存在某种事物, 如:There is apicture on the wall.
四、写文章时常用句子。
1.引出话题。 Recently, the problem of ... has aroused people’s concern.最近, ……问题已引起人们的关注。
It is commonly believed that ...人们一般认为……
With the development of science and technology, more andmore people believe that ... 随着科技的发展, 越来越多的人认为……
2.引出不同观点。People’s views on ... vary from person toperson. Some hold that ... However, others believe that ...人们……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……
People may have different opinions about ...人们对……可能会有不同的见解。
Different people hold different attitudes toward sth.不同的人态度各不相同。
3.论证的句子。From my point of view, I can’t agree with theidea that ...在我看来, 我无法完全同意这一观点……
In my opinion, it is adj. to do ... than to do ... 在我个人看来, 做……比做……更……
4.解决办法。 There are some suggestions for solving ...这 是如何处理某事的一些建议
The best way to solve the troubles is ...解决这些事的最好办法是……
5.批判错误观点。
As far as sth.is concerned ...就某事而言……
It was obvious that ...很显然……
There is no evidence to suggest that ...没有证据表明……
6.给出原因。 There are three reasons for this./The reasons forthis are as follows.
Why did ...? For one thing ..., for another ...为什么会……?一个原因是……
另一个原因是……
I quite agree with it that ... The reasons are as follows.我十分赞同……其原因如下:
7.表示优缺点。There are some advantages/disadvantages.
It is beneficial to us./It is of great benefit to us./It does us a lotof good.
It has more disadvantages than advantages.
It will do much harm to us./ It is harmful to us.
8.表示重要、必要。It is important (necessary, difficult, possible) for sb.to do sth.
Sth.plays an important role in our daily life.
9.表示措施。We should take some effective measures/try ourbest to do sth.
10.表示变化。Some great changes have taken place in the pastfive years in some place.
11.提出建议。It is high time that ...该是我们……的时候了。Only in this way can we ...只有这样, 我们才能……
12.预示后果。No doubt, unless we take some effective measures, it is very likely that ...
毫无疑问, 除非我们采取有效措施, 要不然可能会……
13.结尾。Therefore, we’d better draw the conclusion that ...因此, 我们最好得出这样的结论……
半开放式作文是近年来英语学科书面表达的一个趋势和要求,也是高考英语书面表达的一种常见题型。所谓“半开放”是指试题给出部分要点,考生自己再增加一些要点。这样的作文可以分为两大部分：试题给出的材料和自己增加的材料。在写给出材料时一定注意不要遗漏要点,更不要曲解试题的意思。在写自己增加部分时也不可以随意发挥,要吃透命题人的意思。例如：关于中学生是否可以把手机带进教室,我们最好不赞成带手机进教室,因为命题人一般是大学或中学的老师,他们是不会赞成学生带手机进教室的。
二、 高考英语半开放式作文的写作技巧
下面以2009年某市高三年级第二次调研测试书面表达题为例,谈谈高考英语半开放式作文的写作方法。
【经典例题】
最近教育部就高中取消文理分科的可能性和可操作性,广泛征集意见。消息一经传出,立即成为人们热议的话题。社会各方对此存在严重分歧。请你给China Daily写一篇文章,阐述分歧,并发表自己的观点(至少两点)。
要求：
（1) 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
（2) 词数：150字左右。短文开头已写好,不计入词数。
参考词汇：
①文理分科：divide students into science and arts
②文科生：liberal art students
③理科生：science students
The Ministry of Education has been collecting opinions on the possibility and feasibility of ending the separation of science and arts in high schools. But opinions are different.
写作步骤：
1. 谋篇布局,拟定框架
本文可分四段写：
第一段：导入话题。(试卷上已给出。)
第二段：专家的观点，即支持文理分科及其理由。
第三段：学生和家长的观点。
第四段：你自己的观点。
2. 写作格式
这篇作文属于“支持与反对观点陈述类”,可套用以下格式：
Most experts hold the view that…
However, many students and parents have just the opposite opinion…
In my opinion…
3. 统筹时态、人称
时态：整篇文章用一般现在时,个别地方可能会用到一般将来时。
人称：陈述专家或学生及家长的看法时,用第三人称： Most experts,many students and parents, they…发表自己的观点时,用第一人称I。
It never will rain roses. When we want to have more roses we must plant trees. (G. Eliot )
4. 推敲要点表达方法
（1) 取消文理分科有利于学生的全面发展。
取消文理分科:the ending of the division of science and art；
全面发展：allround development/development in an allaround way/integrated development。
如果你不知道“全面发展”怎样表达,你可以将上句婉转写成：文理分科影响学生的综合素质，即affect the overall quality of students。
（2) 导致……的缺乏：lead to/result in sb.’s lacking…
（3) 不关心社会学科： not care about social science, such as…
（4) 将加重学生学习负担:put more pressure and burdens on students。
（5) 分科尊重学生个体差异。这句话可分解成:每个学生都有自己的长处和弱点, 分科是尊重学生的意愿，即
have one’s own advantages/strengths and weaknesses, show respect for one’s opinion/interest。
5. 难点
半开放式作文难就难在自己的观点上。会写的就能得到另外两个要点的分；不会写的或观点不恰当的,就可能失分。因此,发表自己的观点非常重要。
对于文理分科,你可以说：过早分科不利于学生未来的发展；如果现行的考试制度不改革, 就没有必要谈论这个问题。最后要求教育部对此事要慎重考虑。
6. 要点提炼
要点1：专家赞成取消文理分科。
Most experts support to end the separation of science and arts．
Most experts are in favor of ending the division of science and arts．
要点2：取消文理分科有利于学生全面发展。
The ending of the separation of science and arts contributes to students’ overall development．
The ending of the division of subjects helps students develop in an allaround way.
The ending of the division of subjects is good for students’ integrated development.
要点3：分科会导致部分文科学生理科知识缺乏,部分理科学生不关心社会学科。
The division/separation of subjects leads to some arts students’ lacking science knowledge while science students don’t care about social science．
The division/separation of subjects results in some arts students’ lack of science knowledge and science students’ not caring about social subjects, such as history and politics.
要点4：家长和学生反对取消分科。
Many parents and students oppose the ending of the separation/division of subjects．
Many parents and students are against the ending of the division of subjects.
时间是一只永远在飞翔的鸟。（罗伯逊）
要点5:取消文理分科将加重学生学习负担。
The ending of the separation of subjects will put more pressure and burdens on students．
The ending of the separation of subjects will add more pressure and burdens to students．
The ending of the separation of subjects will increase students’ pressure and burdens．
要点6：分科尊重学生个体差异。
The division of subjects means showing respect for students’ interest.
自己观点1：Dividing subjects too early is not good for students’ future development．
自己观点2：The Ministry of Education had better take a careful attitude toward this problem．
连句成文：
Most experts are in favor of ending the separation of science and arts. For one reason, the ending of the division of subjects contributes to students’ development in an allaround way. For another, dividing subjects will lead to arts students’ lacking science knowledge while some science students won’t care about social subjects, such as history and politics.
However, some parents and students have the opposite opinion. They think the ending of the division of subjects will add more pressure and burdens to students. Dividing subjects means showing respect for students’ interest as each student has his or her own strengths and weaknesses.
In my opinion, dividing subjects too early is not good for students’ future development. I hope the Ministry of Education had better take a careful attitude toward this problem．
三、 模拟训练
1. 假如你们班在“珍爱生命,拒闯红灯”的教育活动中,召开了一次主题班会。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
(1) 内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯；
(2) 参考词汇：行人passerby;乱穿马路jaywalk；
(3) 词数：150。
2. 某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”,现向全球征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I Want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份,根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
(1) 可适当展开,以使行文连贯;
(2) 词数：150。
3.
作为一名中学生, 和老师建立良好的师生关系是必要的。 请你围绕这个话题,根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。
(1) 建立良好的师生关系的必要性。
(2) 你认为良好的师生关系应该是怎样的？
(3) 如何才能建立这种关系？
注意：
(1) 可适当展开,以使行文连贯；
(2) 词数150左右。
【参考答案】
模拟训练1
Recently our class held a class meeting with the theme of “ Love Life, Refuse Jaywalking”. We discussed the problem of passersby crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some passersby don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently. Jaywalking blocks traffic, which prevents cars from running smoothly. Besides, it easily leads to accidents to happen and does harm to passersby and the drivers themselves.
It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with this situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jaywalking, the passersby are criticized and educated so that they will realize the dangers of doing so, or they are warned and fined on the spot. In my opinion, jaywalkers should be reported to their companies and exposed to the public. In a word, as for obeying traffic rules and refusing jaywalking, we must start from ourselves.
如果你年轻时不学会思考，那就永远不会。（爱迪生）
模拟训练2
There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible.
First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the troubles to bring me up. Second, I want to smile at my teachers. They help me with my lessons. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to my friends. They always encourage me whenever I feel down. Next, I will smile at life. Since life is hard, why don’t we face it with a smile？ Finally, I will greet myself every morning with a smile, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.
模拟训练3
As a middle school student, it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers, for teachers are always concerned about us students in study and life. We students can always seek support and advice from them．
In my opinion, an ideal relationship between teachers and students should be filled with love, care, understanding and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely．
一、假如你是一位在杭工作的美籍专家，名叫George，家住湖畔花园。几天前，你在家具展销会上，购置了一套家具。现在，你给报社写信，反映下列问题，希望公布于众，并帮助解决。
1三天前，家具送到家。
2几件家具的颜色和尺寸与所定的不一样。
3橱柜的一条腿短了。
4要求退货，遭到拒绝。
5打电话给厂长，他不同意。
注意：1 短文必须包括以上提示的所有内容，可适当增加细节，使文章意思连贯。次数：100左右
Hupan Garden
Dear editor,I’d like to tell you something about the trouble I’m facing in buying furniture.The other day, I ordered a set of furniture exhibition.Three days ago, it was sent to my home.But I found the colour and the sizes of some pieces were not what I had ordered.What’s more, one leg of the cupboard was broken.So I asked them to take back the furniture and give me back the money, but they refused.I telephoned the director of the factory, and he also refused.I hope you will print my letter in the newspaper and helped me solve the problem.Best wishes.Sincerely yours
George
二、请根据下述情况写一篇80-120词的英语新闻广播稿，准备在你校广播站拨出。
1时间：昨天下午放学后。
2地点：回家路上。
3人物：高一（2）班田力和段凯。
4事件：边骑车边谈笑。后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好玩。公交车遇红灯停下。两人来不及刹车，摔倒在地，一人左臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。
5警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。
Two students from Senior One had a traffic accident on the way home yesterday.Tian Li and Duan Kai are two boy students from Class 2, Senior One.Yesterday after school, they went home by bike together, talking and laughing.Just then, a bus was passing by.They started running after it, considering that fun and exciting.All of a sudden, the traffic lights turned red and the bus stopped.They found it too late to stop their bikes and both of them fell to the ground.One had his left arm broken and the other was badly hurt in the leg.It’s really a good lesson to all of us.We have to obey traffic rules and mustn’t play in the street.We can never be too careful.三、你学习英语有什么好方法吗？你是怎样学英语的？请用4-5句话写出来。
Learning English is fun if you are interested in doing it.There are different ways to learn English but I think the most important ways are: learning the words and expressions by heart first, listening and speaking and reading books and magazines and
writing are also necessary.I do all these every day, which is very important.If you keep practicing every day, you will be better and better in English.四、日前，钱江晚报和浙江大学等单位共同举办了以“大学生职业观”为题的论坛，记者就此进行了采访。请你以记者的名义，根据下列要点用英语写一篇120词左右的新闻报道。
题目：The Job Outlook of Graduates Changes生词：网页webpage 少数 mibority
论坛forum
一）学生观点：
1大多数想找一份薪金丰厚的好工作。
2部分持观望态度，等待良机。
3少数想自己做事情，如网页设计等。
二）专家提醒：不应坐等，应尽快找份工作，理由如下：积累经验 2 养活自己
The Job Outlook of Graduates Changes
A forum was held sponsored by Zhejiang University and Qianjiang Evening Newspaper recently.As we can see, university graduates start a new round of job hunting.For most of them, to find a good job with satisfactory pay is their biggest dream while the minority want to be
self-employed, such as by doing webpage designing.However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs.They are just waiting.They advise those students to find a job as early as they can.Only by doing this, will they be able to support the mselves and get working experience, which will help them to find a better position in future.五、假如你是一家电脑商店的营业员，有一个顾客想买一台电脑，但不知道买台式机还是买手提电脑，你向她介绍这两种电脑各自的优缺点。台式机：在台式机上看电影、听音乐效果好，容易保养，价格便宜等。手提电脑：体积小，重量轻，携带方便，占地方少，对人体危害少，但价格昂贵。
要求：100词左右，可适当增加细节。Both a desktop and a laptop have their own advantages and disadvantages.In general, people feel more comfortable working with a desktop when listening to music or seeing a film, and a desktop is much cheaper than laptop.While a laptop is much smaller, lighter than a desktop, therefore it saves a lot of space.What’s more, you can take a laptop everywhere out on business.But the most important thing is that a laptop won’t do harm to your health, especially to your eyes.However, it will cost you more.六、假如你叫王平，你在美国读书时认识了Mark Baker。他对中国的教育很感兴趣，希望有一天能到中国来教书。现在你得知首都师范大学需要一名外籍教师，请你依照下表所给信息，给首师大负责此项工作的刘先生写一风推荐信，介绍Mark Baker的情况。（120词左右）
Name:MarkBaker Sex:male Nationality:US Birthplace:New York Date of birth: April,1968
Health: Excellent
Work: Teacher in Washington University Degree:Doctor of history
Second language: Chinese
Education:
1974-1986 Julliard Primary School;
Sidwell Friends Secondary School
1986-1992 History, Columbia University
Dear Mr Liu,I have a friend named Mark Baker, who is now teaching history in Washington University.He was born in New York in April, 1968.He began his study in Julliard Primary School in 1974 and graduated from Sidwell Friends Secondary School in 1986.Then he entered Columbia University, where he studied for more than six good experience in teaching and his health is in good condition.He has always dreamt of coming to China to teach students.He would be most grateful if you would give him the chance.Looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours,Wang Ping
七、针对许多学生沉湎于电子游戏房，学生周刊发出了“No More Video Games ”的倡议。你作为该刊编委之一，执笔这份倡议。倡议必须包括以下内容：1.青少年在电子游戏房花费太多的金钱和精力。2.电子游戏房里灯光昏暗, 空气浑浊, 声音嘈杂, 有害眼、耳和身心健康。3.青少年应从事有益活动, 如看书、锻炼、听音乐会、参观博物馆等。4.电子游戏房有害, 别去电子游戏房。注意： 词数：100左右
参考词汇：电子游戏房 video arcade
Teenagers are spending too much time and energy on video arcades these days.Video games should be done away with.They are nothing but a waste of time, money and energy.Video games are bad for our eyes, ears and minds.In video arcades the lights are often dim.The air there is dirty and the games are noisy.In addition, a lot of money is spent on these games.Teenagers should be doing valuable things like reading, doing physical exercise and going to the concerts and the museums.Therefore video arcades are harmful to us.Let’s keep away from video arcades.八、中国作为世界上第三个国家成功地发射了载人航天飞船，这是我国历史上依次伟大的成功。浙江某重点中学就此事组织学生进行了一次讨论。你是该校的一名学生杨威，中国日报社21世纪报高中版特邀你将讨论情况写信告诉编辑部。请你根据下表提供的信息，给编辑部写一封信，客观地介绍讨论。参考词汇:通讯卫星communication satellite 载
人航天飞船 manned sapceship 注意：次数100-120之间。开头、结尾已写好，请写要求部分。
大多数同学认为 更多的机会探索太空 更容易向太空发射通讯卫星有效利用太空资源 体现我国的快速发展部分同学认为 投资太大 危险性大。如果操作失灵，宇航员就会有生命危险，营救工作困难 产生更多的太空垃圾 运用于军事可能影响世界和平
Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you the discussion that has been held in our school about the advantages and disadvantages of sending up the manned spaceship into space …
Most students believe launching the manned spaceship is not only a good chance to do better research in outer space but also communication satellites can be more easily put up into space and send us more information we need.Especially we can make use of space resources and, most important, it shows how rapidly our country has developed.On the other hand, some other students think that sending up a manned spaceship is too expensive as well as dangerous.If something goes wrong, it is difficult to help and rescue the spaceman who may lose his life.Besides, more and more space rubbish will be produced and how to deal with the rubbish is still a big problem to human beings.What’s more, when it is used by the army, it will be a threat to the world.On the whole, in my opinion, these so-called disadvantages can be solved soon and we should be proud of our nation’s space achievements.L Yours truly l Yang Wei
九、按要求写一篇日记，包含以下内容：
5月1日，星期六，晴。在车上看见一位老人给一位抱婴孩的妇女让座。看到这一切，你想到老师的教育。你感到羞愧，连忙站起来让座给老人。你将牢记这件事，决心做一个文明礼貌的中学生。要求：语句连贯。词数100左右。May 1,Saturday Sunny In the morning I went to the bookstore by bus.There were a lot of people on the bus.The bus stopped, and a woman with a baby in her arms got on.All the seats were taken.Just then an old man stood up and gave his seat to the woman.When I saw this, I thought of what the teachers taught me.I felt ashamed.So I immediately got up and asked the old man to sit in my seat.I will never forget that.It is good manners to give a seat to others.I will try to be a student with good manners.十、假设你是李越，你的美国朋友Max来信说，他将在七月处来浙江作一次短期的旅游，先请你推荐两个地方。根据下表提供的信息，请你给他回一封信。参考词汇： 推荐 recommend(v.)注意：词数100左右
Dear Max,I’m so glad to learn that you are coming to Zhejiang at the beginning of July.I’d like to recommend the following two towns.Town A is where you can find many Chinese traditional gardens by its plenty of lakes and rivers, and it is also where a great many famous people were born.Town B is mountainous with lots of caves and you can enjoy yourself with so many natural scenic spots and local special products.A 4-day-or-so tour of Town A may cost you 700 RMB yuan while a 2-and-a-half-day tour of Town B may ask for 500 RMB yuan.Please let me know soon if you want to visit these two kinds of places.T Yours,Li Yue
十一、有则广告说：“ 三个月学会英语，无效退款！” 请以此为出发点写一片短文，谈谈学英语并非如此轻而易举。并简单写出一两点关于学好英语的建议。注意：1 题目自拟 2 词数100左右An ad says, “Learn English in three months, or your money back!” Of course, it never happens quite like that.As we know, no language is easy to learn, including one’s mother tongue.English, as a language, has its own difficult points to learn.For example, there are so many idioms in English.Another example is the spelling.Learners have to spend a lot of time learning them by heart.And they must put practice into the first place.The more practice, the more benefit.So English learners are required to speak more and read more.English becomes easy only in practice.In a word, in order to learn English well, learners have a lot of things to do.十二、请你以We need a better class of teacher为题，续写以下一段文字。
内容包括：
1.提出问题：传统的好老师是否能成为 今天的好教师呢？ 2.今天的教育应该是对人的全面的培养，而不是只能考出好成绩。3.生活在信息时代，教育的最大挑战是 对学生能力的培养。4.有四中教师能胜任这种挑战，他们善于叙述、解释、演绎和激励
随着信息技术的不断发展，传统的靠读报获取信息的方式逐渐被看电视、上网所取代。对此你们学校开展了题为“Views
on Newspapers” 的社会调查。请你根据下表中的提示给中学生英语报投稿，客观介绍调查情况，并简单陈述你的看法。45%的人喜欢读报 55%的人不喜欢读报
1．不受时间限制，方便2．阅读使人思考，有利于智力的提高3．可以随个人兴趣获取信息 1．没有声像，不够生动2．信息传递速度相对较慢
Dear editor,Recently students of our school have made a survey of “Views on Newspapers”.The people whom we interviewed have two different opinions.45% of the people enjoy reading newspapers.First of all, as a convenient source of information, reading newspapers is not limited by time.Secondly, reading also makes people think, which helps develop people’s intelligence.Moreover, people can select and read whatever section they are interested in.However, 55% of the people don’t turn to newspapers to get information.They hold the idea that newspapers are not very attractive because they lack the sound and video that make other sources of information more exciting to look at than newspapers.What’s more, readers receive information from newspapers later than from the Internet and TV.In my opinion, people can make use of whatever means to gather information, so long as it’s convenient for them.Yours,Li Hua
你们学校的外教让你们用英语写一篇题为“参加课外辅导班或请家教值得吗？”的文章。
请你用以下两种观点的任意一种写出一段100—120词的短文。
观点一：花钱请家教或去各种辅导班是值得的。请说明原因。
观点二：花钱请家教或去各种辅导班是不值得的。请说明原因。
Possible versions:
（一）In my opinion, it is not worthwhile to spend all the money in order to be better educated.We belong to the 21st century.With the development of society.Only those who have a good education are more likely to get good jobs.So the more we learn now, the more chances we will have in the future.Of course we will receive a better pay.So you can see how important it is for you to receive good education now.（二）
Though there are more than 40 or even 50 students in a class, in most cases.Teachers cannot take care of all the students in the class, but it is certainly a waste of money for many students to attend spare time classes or even go to the tutors to make up for this because you have to depend on yourself.It is very helpful for you listen attentively in class and go over your lessons in time after school.In one word, spending extra money on education is certainly not as rewarding as you expect.各档次的给分范围和要求
1．五档（很好）：（21~25分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
——覆盖所有内容要点。
——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。——有效地使用了语词间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
2．四档（好）：（16—20分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
——语法或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要因尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致。
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作写作目的。
3．三档（适当）：（11—15分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
——虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
——应用简单的语词间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的目的。
4．二档（较差）：（6—10分）
未恰当完成试题规定任务。
——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
——语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
5．一档（差）：（1—5分）
未完成试题规定任务。
——明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
——语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
a. In the museum there are a lot of interesting things to look at.
b. I am looking forward to seeing you.
分析：a句中己有谓语动词there are，用来修饰things，此句缺的是后置定语。b句look forward to是一个固定短语，后面要接动名词。c句要用现在分词作定语，跟所修饰的名词之间是主谓关系，表示动作正在进行，因此用“sleeping”，相当于 “the child who is sleeping"。
连词的错误
连词主要有两类，即并列连词和从属连词，考查点主要是并列连词(分递进式、转折式、选择式和因果式四种)之间的误用(主要是but与so/and之间的误用)，从属连词之间的误用以及并列连词与从属连词之间的误用等。
例如：
a. He had little to eat and a large house to live in.
b. He had no sooner arrived when he fell ill.
c. If you go this way, and you will soon see the hospital.
正确的句子：
a. He had little to eat but a large house to live in.
b. He had no sooner arrived than he fell ill.
c.1f you go this way，you will soon see the hospital.
名词的错误
名词主要考查单数名词变复数名词，这主要是受东西方文化差异的影响，英语中除了不可数名词和单数名词用单数外，可数名词要用复数形式。另外还有一些特殊形式。
例如：
a. What a beautiful weather we are having today!
b. Please give my best regard to your parents.
c. I have got good marks in all my subject.
正确的句子：
a. What beautiful weather we are having today!
b. Please give my best regards to your parents.
No one can degrade us except ourselves; that if we are worthy, no influence can defeat us. (B.T.Washington, American educator)除了我们自己以外，没有人能贬低我们。如果我们坚强，就没有什么不良影响能够打败我们。
为了大家能更多的得到写作部分的25分，我们特精选了以下范文，希望同学们务必研读背诵!(尤其注意：文中划线部分为该体裁的套话;黑体部分为写作中的经典表达。)
May you succeed in the coming college entrance examination.
一、与报社等讨论稿(带手机利弊)
Dear Editor:
[引出话题] I’m a senior three student. I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.
[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.
Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.
[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、看对照表格写调查报告(孩子出国利弊)
[调查内容] A survey is taken onpublic opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.
[调查结果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future
However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.
[解决措施]The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. (句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)
三、读柱状图表写调查报告 [注意句式变换]
Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.
The most striking contrast isin teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15 percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching, the second choice for girlsisto be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.
四、写信(过去/现在对比)
Dear editor,
I’m a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father.
He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.
However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father
Could you help me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.
一、句式优美, 给枯燥的语法插上隐形的翅膀
纵观近年来优秀的高考作文, 无一不是具有优美的句式结构, 通过优美的句式, 让原本生硬的表达变得丰满起来。不少学生之所以写不出优美的句式来, 困扰也就在这里, 由于没有熟练的语法知识, 有的考生在写作的时候, 光是表达出意思, 写出一篇干巴巴的流水账, 毫无精彩之处, 而优美的句式能够给枯燥的语法插上隐形的翅膀。
比如在作文的开头部分, 可以运用非谓语动词来使得行文更有文采、句式更为优美。比如要表达出一个人对机会的渴求、信念、期待的时候, 一般人会表达成:“I will do it better, if you give me a second chance.”但是如果使用非谓语动词, 能够使枯燥的表述具有亮点, 这一句话可以重新转换为:“Given a second chance, I will do it better.”所以说, 学生在写作的时候, 可以尽量多运用自己的发散思维, 比如多运用非谓语动词使得句式更加多样化, 可以多使用倒装句式使得行文看起来更加高级。
二、层次分明, 融入高级的词汇和复杂的句式
笔者在教学中发现, 有的学生为了表达的简便, 仅仅使用一些较为简单的词汇, 这些简单的词汇没有内涵, 也很容易使整个作文平淡如水、毫无生气。所以, 笔者主张在作文教学中, 要教会学生在写作中融入高级的词汇和复杂的句式, 运用高级词汇和复杂句式有助于行文更加流畅, 表达更加自如。如果仅仅采用一些简单的词汇来表达, 很容易让阅读者看了觉得没有文采, 也呈现不出文章的层次感和思路来。
比如学生在表达“我的爱好”的时候, 不少学生会表述成很简单的句子, 如:“I like reading.”这样的表达就显得很生硬, 毫无生气, 那么通过稍微复杂一点的句式就可以表述为:“Reading is one of my favorite hobbies, when I have free time at the weekend...”通过这样的传达, 就让行文更加流畅, 也不容易使学生在写作过程中担心无话可说。比如同样要表达“有价值的、有意义的”, 一般的学生会立刻想到“helpful”, 但是“helpful”是初中阶段就学习的单词, 如果用到高考英语作文中就显得过于浅显, 学生在写作的时候可以使用更加高级的词汇来表达, 比如换成“beneficial”, 比如学生表达:“Reading in the morning is helpful.”可以改为:“Reading in the morning is beneficial.”由此可见, 复杂句式和高级词汇的融入能让行文更加流畅、层次更加分明。
三、首尾照应, 过渡词汇呈现让作文有血有肉
作文贵在有逻辑性, 贵在结构严谨。有的考生基于篇幅的限制, 还没有写完整就突然戛然而止, 或者有的考生写作的时候缺乏逻辑性, 东写一句、西凑一句, 毫无逻辑可言, 从整体上来看, 这样零散的文章很容易给考官留下较差的印象。所以, 笔者建议学生在写作过程中一定要有完整的框架结构, 逻辑上严密、自然、顺畅, 首尾照应、行文完整。
除此之外, 学生还可以使用一些过渡性的词汇, 来使得行文在逻辑上更加紧凑、严密, 比如学生写作时通过讲述道理或者介绍事件的时候, 可以通过firstly, to begin with, in addition...词汇来表达, 以凸显出层次感来。学生在表达目的的时候, 也可以使用类似so as to, so that...来传达。
四、亮点呈现, 名言警句运用让作文更有文采
一篇优秀的习作, 应该要有亮点的呈现, 对高考书面表达知识点的考查, 也是对学生平日阅读积累的考查。在阅读积累的过程中, 学生如果能够记得一些名言警句, 恰当地运用到写作之中, 能够为全文增添文采, 有一些名言警句还非常具有说服力, 阐述了一定的哲学道理, 可谓行文中的亮点, 也可以通过这些名言警句的运用, 做到以理服人, 让作文以质取胜。
比如学生在传达“自我激励”的时候, 用“Keep on going never give up.”“Believe in yourself.”“I can because I think I can.”通过类似的名言警句, 为行文增添了不少文采, 而且一般来说, 这些名言警句是学生耳熟能详、倒背如流的, 所以在具体运用这些名言警句的时候, 句法、词汇等方面不容易出现错误, 这些精彩句子的运用, 为行文增加了不少亮点, 也成为近年来考生抓分的“利器”。
任务一：打电话请假
魏华因摔伤需住院治疗，无法上学，他妈妈正在给老师电话……
T：Now，Wei Hua is badly hurt.He has to be in hospital for two weeks.Hismother is calling Mr.Li…
四人一组讨论，以对话形式，说清楚请假的理由(选一组作为示例)。用投影仪呈现：
(L-Mr.Li W-Wei Hua's mother)
L：Hello.this is Mr Li.Who's calling please?
W：Hello，this is Wei Hua's mother.
L：What's your trouble?
W：During yesterday's basketball final，Wei Hua hurt his leg badly.He has tostay in hospital at least for two weeks.He asks you for leave.
L：I'm sorry to hear that.
W：It doesn't matter.I can look after him well.
L：Tell Wei Hua not to worry.The teachers and students will help him to catchup with the others.We will go and see him.
W：Thank you，Mr.Li.
L：That's all right.Goodbye!
W：Goodbye!
任务二：写信
魏华休息期间收到许多同学的来信，从信中了解到：
T：More than a week later，Wei Hua heard from his friend Zhang Jun.Zhang Juntold him that they won the basketball final.The day before yesterday，an American girlcalled July came to their class.They decided to hold a party for her this weekend.Theyhope Wei Hua can come to the party.If you are Wei Hua，how would you feel whenyou heard the news? Please discuss it in groups and write a letter to Zhang Jun.
A Letter
18 Nanjing Road
Huaihai 3 10004
October 23th.2007
Dear Zhang Jun，
Thank you for your letter.I miss all of you very much.I wish to come to the partyand see you all soon.But I…
Yours，
WeiHua.
任务三：写日记
两个多星期后，魏华返校，他把这次的经历写成了日记。
T：More than two weeks later.Wei Hua went back to school.He wanted to write adiary about this experience.
通过小组交流，各组的日记各具特色，同学们写得都很好。
A Diary
Tuesday November 1st，2007 Sunny
I return to school today，I'm very happy to see my teachers and
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