体育专业英文求职信写作(共11篇)
I take the liberty to write you in the hope that you might need someone to fill in for you. I feel that I am qualified as an Fitness coach
I am currently a student at college,I have over a month more to complete before I graduate. My major is Sports Department.
I have an excellent sports achievements. If you want to look at these information will be sent to you later
I have previously served as the Amateur Sports coaches, but also qualified nutritionist, but I am hoping to find a more responsible job opportunities.
I am now 22 years old, honest, a better physique.If you need someone with my qualifications, please let me know.
thank you very much for your kind attention.
1 英文求职信的特点
在当今竞争激烈的社会里,一个工作职位往往有众多的竞争者,英文求职信具有获得面试机会和工作机会双重交际目的,这些决定了英文求职信具有独特的交际特性,即独有的内在宏观结构和语言风格特点[3]。Bhatia[4]把英文求职信的内在宏观结构概括为7个语步:1)介绍候选身份;2)确定任职凭证;3)激励对方接受申请;4)提及附寄有关材料;5)采用施压策略;6)索求回音;7)礼貌收尾。这7个语步是由求职信这种体裁的交际目的和功能决定的,它们构成了求职信这种特定语篇体裁的认知结构,撰写地道的求职信必须遵照这种模式。英文求职信的交际目的也决定了它的语言风格特点是平实、简洁;在句子结构上,多用长句。平实的语言风格是英文求职信的一个重要特点。简洁是英文求职信的另一个重要语言风格特点。招聘者往往要面对几十封甚至是成百封的求职信,面对如此多的求职信,招聘者分配给每一封求职信的时间是有限的,往往只有30秒的时间浏览[5]。如果求职信过长,招聘者没有时间浏览完毕,使应聘者失去机会。
在一篇结构完整、内容丰富、语言简洁的求职信中,既要尽可能的展示自己,又要避免冗长,如何做好信息之间的衔接就成为一篇求职信成功与否的关键,下面就从词汇衔接的角度分析其在求职信语篇中的应用。
2 词汇衔接手段在英文求职信中的运用
2.1 频率统计
从张迪和李海燕[6]合著的《实用英语教你写求职信及简历》中选择了十篇例文,对这十篇英文求职信中词汇衔接手段应用的频率进行了统计,如表1;图1为词汇复现和词汇搭配在每篇求职信中出现的频数直方图。
(横坐标:求职信1-10;纵坐标:出现次数)
从以上的统计表和直方图中可以看出词汇衔接手段在英文求职信中出现的频率比较高,词汇衔接手段是如和对文章整体的衔接和连贯起到很大的作用的,下面将通过列举实例进一步分析。
2.2 复现的运用研究
复现表示衔接纽带一端出现一个项目后,其另一端由同一个项目的重复、同义词、上义词或泛指词占据的现象。具体到词汇项目上可以是同一个项目的重复、同义词、上义词、反义词等。
2.2.1 词汇重复
词汇重复在语篇中起着非常重要的作用:一方面,从交际角度来分析,人们所传递的不可能句句是新信息,重复是必然的,同时保证交际的不间断性和连贯性;另一方面,从修辞角度来分析,需要借助重复来突出某个或某些重要信息,从而引起听者或读者的注意。胡壮麟[7]指出“词汇衔接中最直接的方式是具有同样语义同一形式的词汇在同一语篇中反复出现”。这种重复虽然简单却在语义上能达到连接上下文和凸现主题的作用。
如:在letter(1)应聘英语口语教师的求职信中,重复使用了“teacher”和“teaching”各四次,用来描述自己的教学经历及应聘该教师职位的愿望,起到了突出强调主题的作用。再如:letter(2)应聘人事主管的求职信,“personnel”一词被重复了六次,letter(5)中“account”出现了五次,不仅起到连贯全篇的作用,而且可以突出主题。这种简单的重复虽然有一定的作用,但过多的使用会使文章不够生动缺乏活力。使用同义词或近义词就可避免这一现象。
2.2.2 同义词或近义词
同义性和近同义性是指具有相同或相近意义的不同词项在语篇中的接应关系,不管这个词是指人、物、过程或性质[7]。通过使用同义词、近义词,可以在语义上重复和补充上文的内容,使得语段中的不同成分彼此相联,这样既能使语篇在意义的传达上连贯,又能避免单调划一,提高用词的多样性,为语篇的风格增色。
最典型的例子是如何表述“工作”或者“职务”,如果全篇只重复使用“job”一词,会让读者感觉你的词汇量太少,文章不够灵活,应该避免这种现象,可以将所应聘的“job”具体名称写出来,如“English teacher”、“personnel director”等;也可以仅用“it”来指代;还可以将“job”替换成“position”、“work”、“vacancy”、“career”、“staff member”、“employment”、“employee”、“opportunity”等。
在letter(5)中,第一段第一句话“Learning from Xiaomei Li,one of you staff member,which you are seeking several provisional English interpreters for the oncoming export commodities fair,I should like to apply for such a job.”提到了即将到来的出口商品交易会时,用到了“oncoming”一词表示“即将来临的”,在文末“During your forthcoming spring fair,I happen to have no class.So I will be available to work for two week,the period of which is suitable for you fair.”再次提到了即将来临的交易会时,改用“forthcoming”即表达了同样的意思,又表现出运用词汇的多样性。
2.2.3 上义词
词汇的上下义关系是一种内包含的关系,如郁金香和玫瑰花都包含与花这个概念中,狮子和大象包含与哺乳动物(或者动物)中。因此内包含是一种上下级的关系。上级的术语被称为上义词,下级的术语称为下义词[8]。上下义词在语篇中出现通常有两种情形;一种是上义词先于下义词出现,这时下义词会对相应的上义词起进一步说明的衔接作用。一种是下义词先出现,这时后出现的下义词会起到归类或概括的衔接作用。如例文(3):
Dear Sir:
Now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person.This person must fit very specific criteria.Usually,after all is said and done,the corporation wants a business person who can manage,create and communicate.……
如上例所示,第一段中划直线的部分在它们的上义词“specific criteria”之后出现,具有解释说明的作用。一般来说,前一种情况比较常用,先呈现出上义词,然后再对其具体内容做解释说明,条理清晰,符合一般人的语言习惯。如:例文(4)中…In addition,my personality equips me with the quality of conscientiousness,initiative,responsibility and cooperation….上义词“quality”呈现之后,马上对其所指的具体品质用了几个下义词来说明;再如:例文(5)…The courses I have taken in International Trade include International Marketing,Negotiation Techniques,International Business Law,the Study of Etiquette,Psychology,English for Foreign Trade,English Interpretation,etc….这句中对所修的“courses”作了列举,在写求职信时,尤其是对那些没有工作经验的应届毕业生来说,为了让读信人了解你的专业技能,列举一些课程是必要的,但要注意所列举的课程要和专业紧密相关。
2.2.4 概括词
概括词(General Words)指的是能够起到泛指作用的一小类相对固定的名词,例如在英语中我们用people,person,man等指代人,用thing,stuff指代事物,用place指代地点,用task指代工作等等。当一个具体名词再次出现的时候人们往往将概括词和the结合使用,构成同指照应以避免重复。
如:例文(1)中,“I heard from a friend of mine that you have a vacancy for college oral English teacher.I would like to offer my services to the job.”句中泛指词“the job”指代上句中出现的“college oral English teacher”;例文(3)中,“Now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person.The person must fit very specific criteria.”第二句中的概括词“the person”指代上句中提到的“the right type of creative person”;例文(6)中“On looking over today's Inner Mongolia Daily my attention is attracted by your advertisement for an accountant.Now as I am desirous of obtaining such position,I should like to apply for the same.”首先提到了广告中招聘的职位是“an accountant”,然后写信人写到他很想得到这样的“po-sition”,最后一句明确了写信的目的是为了申请会计一职,此时用了“the same”来指代,此句中的概括词用的恰到好处,即没有与前文重复,又起到了连贯的作用。概括词虽然能起到避免重复的作用,但概括词要通过上下文来体现其意义,所以单独使用会起不到衔接的作用。
2.3 词汇搭配的应用研究
词的搭配关系主要是指词与词之间的横组合关系,即什么词经常与什么词搭配使用[9]。下面从选择限制和共现两个角度来探讨。
2.3.1 词汇搭配的选择限制
词汇搭配的选择限制取决于两点:一是语法规则,二是词汇的语义特征[9]。在写英文求职信时,遵循语法规则和词汇的一般用法尤为重要,因为其准确与否体现了写信人的语言功底及运用英语语言的能力,为了给读信人一个好的第一印象,要特别注意词汇的选择限制。
如:在表达“所附的简历”时,应该用“enclosed resume”,这两个词的搭配是固定的,要想准确地道地表达,就一定要注意词组的固定搭配,不要仅凭词典的含义就随意搭配。如:“安排一次会面”中的“安排”一词最好的选择是“arrange”,即“arrange a meeting”;再如:“在您方便的时候”正确的表达是“at your convenience”应用介词“at”。在表达“工作经历”时,一般“work experience”比较常见,而“job experience”就不太常用,这种现象可能是由于长期对两种词汇的选择使用,导致了用前一种词汇的人比用后一种的要多,最终形成了“work experience”的固定搭配。
2.3.2 词汇共现
共现即组合搭配,也是词汇衔接的重要手段之一,但这里的搭配与传统意义上的搭配有着明显的区别。胡壮麟在《语篇的衔接与连贯》一书中关于“组合搭配”时指出:“…我们不能从分开的角度看词项的关系,因为许多词项并非名词。而是动词,形容词和副词,难以放在一起分类。但这些词项倾向于在同一语境中出现,具有语篇衔接力。”也就是说,根据系统功能语言学的观点,在一定的语篇中,特定的语域(field of discourse)决定了一定词项的出现,从而排除掉其他一些毫不相关或不大可能出现的词项。
比如hunting一词在某一描述英国贵族的文章中,会让读者联想到quarry(猎物)hound(猎犬),或者shooting和fishing;而在另一篇有关人类学的语篇中,则会让人联想到gathering,agricultural和pastoral(乡村的)等词;如果hunting出现在一篇有关求职的文章中,人们则会联想到job,resume(简历)等词。
在求职信这样的文章中,出现频率较高的词如“apply,experience,education,work,career,staff,professional,application,recommendation,ability,personality,interview,position,opportunity,corporation,resume,etc.”都与“求职”这一概念有着密切关系。从整体上说,它们具有很强的语篇衔接功能。如果整个语篇围绕“tour,historical place,by plane,beautiful,take photos,etc”这些词项来构建“application”这一主题的话,将落得个“文不对题”的下场。
3 结束语
通过讨论词汇衔接手段运用在英文求职信中所表现出来的一些特点,分析出运用词汇衔接可以对文章的连贯起到很大的作用。尽管在Halliday和Hasan的Cohesion in English一书中词汇衔接手段的篇幅不超过二十页,但是词汇衔接的重要性在书中被明显地强调了[10]。词汇衔接与语法衔接相比,出现频率更高,在语篇流畅建构中起主导作用,所以在撰写英文求职信时,为了保证全文连贯流畅,特别要注重词汇衔接手段的应用,这将对完成一篇成功的求职信有很大的帮助。
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尊敬的校领导:
您好!
本人将于xxxx年毕业于xxxx大学体育学院,我将要告别学生时代,走向光荣而神圣的教师生涯。十六年的求学,使我深深体会到了作为一名人民教师的神圣职责,也由衷地感受到每一位老师犹如人梯,为成就攀登者而牺牲自己:犹如露珠,滋润着吐艳的花果。现在,我马上就要从一名受教者,到一名施教者,这是一直梦寐以求的愿望。因此,我将以满腔的热情、百倍的信心投入到我热爱的教育事业中去。
做一名人民教师,是我一直追求的夙愿,能考入大学,可以说已经迈开了我人生理想的第一步,也是一个良好的开始。“良好的开端是成功的一半”,因此,我倍加珍惜大学的四年时光,认真学习,刻苦训练,并且各课成绩优异,每年都获得二等或三等奖学金,被学校评为“为学校体育事业做出突出贡献”称号。
同时兼任体育学院院队、中长跑队队长,配合教练担任起院田径队中长跑的训练任务,从专项业务能力方面自己得到了充分发挥。自己不但专项突出,从第二专选及爱好方面发展自己的一技之长,如:大众健身操。武术、排球、乒乓球、唱歌等,力求做到一专多能。而且通过教育实习证明自己有较强的组织能力,教学能力,力求教学方面新疑有效,且在实习中取得了优异成绩。
为了更加适应社会的需要,我坚持学习英语及计算机,就是靠这一点一滴的积累我逐渐的充实自己、完善自己。
在学习上我是如此同样在思想上,我积极进取,平时高标准严格要求自己,坚持马列主义毛泽东思想,并采取先进的思维方式,客观地看待问题,学习运用辩证唯物主义分析解决问题。现在已被院里发展为中共预备党员。
在生活上,我非常注重人际交往。因此我常常参加一些校院组织的公益活动及劳动当中,从中培养自己的交往能力,平时注意团结同学,乐于助人,往往以帮助他们摆脱困难为自己的快乐。也正因为如此,我的生活充满阳光,充满乐趣。
现在,我就要进入社会,此时的我,可谓踌躇满志。想实现自己的人生价值,体现教师的风采;又想报效祖国,回报教师的思情。我相信,经过四年的学习锻炼,我已具备了走上教师岗位的条件,同时,我认为:江河不厌小溪,才有其滚滚波涛;高山不厌其碎石,方有其巍峨雄伟。”因此,我坚信,贵校定会任贤唯举,慧眼识才,我希望贵校能给我加入你们队伍的机会,我知道虽然我的讲台很窄,但我的足迹将遍步四方,我可以用青春和知识为己插上博空万里的翅膀,必尽我绵薄之力,为贵校作出贡献。
此致
敬礼
自荐人:XXX
xx年xx月
英文求职信范文写作开头
dear sir,i have seen your advertisement in the jobspower.com for an accountant, and should be grateful if you would consider a short account of my character and capabilities.for the last two years i have been employed as a junior accountant by a firm of import and export merchants where the wide field of work to be covered has given me a good all-round knowledge of accounts.to supplement my practical knowledge, i have taken an evening course in the hong kong polytechnics.i feel that you could safely entrust a set of books to my care.you will find enclosed a testimonial from the head professor of hong kong polytechnics who has kindly offered to provide you with any further details you may require.i trust that you will consider this application favourably and i wish to assure you that i should make every effort to be worthy of the confidence you may place in me.yours faithfully
(b)改写后: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Kenmore 69781. You can reach me between nine and five o‘clock during the day. 可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是K-69781,我从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。
5.太过自信的句子: I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430. 我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四时(星期二例外)打731430号电话通知我。
6.较具体有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (042) 4398. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be Kent House, Bretton Woods, New Hampshire. 可否惠予面谈?我住处电话为43981号。六月三十日以前我都在上址,七月二日以后,我的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。
应征函的语气
应征函要发挥最大的效果,语气必须肯定、自信、有创意而不过份夸张,如能事先洞察雇主的喜好,或其他人格特性,根据物以类聚的原理,应征函若能配合雇主的特性,求职的人一定可以比其他人占上风,获得面谈的.机会,
比较下列各句语气上有何不同:
1.I think that I should probably make a good bookkeeper for you. 我想我可能成为贵公司的好簿记号。
2.I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping position. 我想信我的经验和推荐人可以告诉您,我能够符合贵公司簿记员一职的特定需要。
3.I recently completed a course in filing at the Crosby School of Business. I am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在克洛斯比商业补习班读完一门档案处理的课程,我自信不仅可以设置一套档案人类系统符合您的要求,而且可以有效地操作。
4.I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the Crosby School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信在克洛斯比商业实习班修完一门课后,我能够替贵公司设置并且操作一套档案分类系统。
Gentlemen,
I wish to apply for the position of clerk in your hotel, which is advertised in JobsPower.com.
I am to graduate this June from City Commercial College, having completed the three-year commercial course. During my summer vacation I was employed in the accounting department of Nan Yang Chemical Company.
The persons whose names are given below may be referred to for statement about my character and ability.
Mr.H.D.Chang, principal, City Commerical College
Mr.Mary C.Chan, Assistant Auditor, Nan Yang Chemical Company.
Mr.B.Y.Liu,Professor of English, City Commercial College.
I shall appreciate a reply from you in regard to my application.
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April 6,
P.O.Box 3
XX University
Beijing,China 100000
Dear Sir /Madame,
Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10Student Daily interested me because the position that you de- scribed sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
According to the advertisement,your position requires a good university degree,Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows NT 4.0and Linux System.I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements.I will be graduating from XX University this year with a MSC.My studies have included courses in computer control and management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual and SQL Server.
During my education,I have grasped the principles of my major subject area and gained practical skills.Not only have I passed CET - 6,but more importantly I can communicate fluently in English.My ability to write and speak English is a good standard.
I would welcome an opportunity to attend you for an interview.
Enclosed is my resume and if there is any additional information you require,please contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Dear leaders:
Hello!
I xxx, graduated from the University of xx. I have very good ability to learn and willing to learn, innovate, and constantly strive for excellence; as a participant, I have an honest and credible character, full of team spirit; as a leader, I am able to work with, and decisive style, good interpersonal communication and coordination capacity. Have a strong endurance, willpower and the quality of tradition of hard work, serious and responsible work, positive and aggressive personality persistent optimism, the courage to face the difficulties and challenges.
I am about to embark on work, earnestly in your organization need to be able to find the cause of the fulcrum of unlimited power, and my enthusiasm and passion for your organization will also bring the value should be, I believe your efforts to choose and I will create a win-win for us the results!
Sincerely hope that you can provide me with a platform to display their talent and hope that I am joined to bring you excellent value!
Sincerely,
hello! first of all, to you my most sincere greetings! thank you for reading my cover letter.
xx i am a law faculty of law, university of fresh graduates in XX. ranking in the school year a comprehensive evaluation of the first x (the professional a total of xx), the major courses of jurisprudence, constitutional law, civil law, criminal law, administrative law, civil law, the code of criminal procedure, the administrative procedure law, economic law, commercial law, economic law , intellectual property law, international law, private international law, such as international economic law. xx first academic year scholarships by the school; xx school year was a second-class scholarship, and in XX to xx hours through the national judicial examination. solid expertise, have the necessary professionalism. at the same time, a good standard of english through the cet-4 (xx hours), cet-6 (xx points). with computer skills, computer access to the national level, national computer 2 (vf) certificate. putonghua level of a-level test.
i can maintain a good working state and a strong sense of responsibility. with the spirit of learning, hard work hard. optimistic, cheerful personality, positive, helpful, good communication with the spirit of cooperation. i sincerely hope that your company can become a member in order to play a long, hand in hand with my colleagues for the development of your company on its own dedication!
i wish work!
sincerely,
salute!
这篇体育训练员的英文求职信模板的关键词是求职信,体育训练员,
Dear Sir,In reference to your advertisement in the newspaper of for a playground director,I believe that I have the qualifications to fit your position.I hold a degree in physical Education from the University of South Dakota.Along with my physical education courses, I also selected many courses in psychology and child managedirector in several suburban areas surrounding the university.In the summer of 1983, I was an assistant in charge of organized sports for younger boys in Walton, south Dakota.The year after that, I was placed in charge of a large summer program for under privileged children in the large city of Millon, South Dakota.My supervisor during this time was William Johnson.He has consented to act as a reference for me.My additional experience includes working as a City park Recreation Director in Rockford, South Dakota for the years of 1985 to the present time.In this position I am responsible for the programs in all the city park, including all organized recreation and night-time sports.If you feel that I am suited for the job that you have in mind.please inform me of the time convenient for an interview.I hope to hear from you in the near future.
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