端午节英语作文带翻译
Dragon Boat Festival is a very grand festival in China. It is to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in the Warring States period. Now Chinese people still continue this custom, even a legal festival.
农历五月初五就是端午节了，家家户户都要包粽子，还有有趣的划龙舟比赛呢!奶奶在家已经煮好了香喷喷的粽子，打开锅盖满屋都飘着粽子的清香，让我闻得口水直流个不停。我迫不及待地剥开粽子叶津津有味的吃了起来，真是回味无穷呀!
The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day of may in the lunar calendar. Every family needs to make zongzi. There are also interesting dragon boat races! Grandma has cooked delicious zongzi at home. When she opened the pot cover, the fragrance of zongzi was floating all over the house, making my mouth water continuously. I cant wait to peel off the zongzi leaf and eat it with relish. Its really memorable!
吃完粽子后，爸爸带我去看划龙舟比赛，这里人山人海，车水马龙的可热闹了!比赛开始了，各个队伍都蓄势待发，随着一阵枪声一条条龙舟飞快地划过水面，犹如一支支箭向前飞去。在场的观众们兴奋喊道着加油加油，在为参赛者加油鼓励，参赛者们听了心里充满了信心使劲地划桨，水花到处飞溅。各条龙舟你追我赶的，最后，落后的一号终于追上了遥遥领先的二号第一个冲过了终点，观众们不禁欢呼起来，到处都是一片欢乐的海洋。啊!这真是我最难忘的一天了。
After eating zongzi, my father took me to watch the dragon boat race. There are lots of people here, and the traffic is very busy! The race started, and every team is ready to go. With a burst of gunfire, each dragon boat flies across the water like an arrow. The audience cheered and shouted, cheering and encouraging for the contestants. The contestants listened with confidence and strove hard to paddle, and the water splashed everywhere. Each dragon boat chased after each other. At last, the laggard No. 1 finally caught up with the far ahead No. 2. The audience couldnt help cheering. There was a sea of joy everywhere. Ah! This is the most unforgettable day for me.
还有许许多多的传统节日也是和端午节一样有趣的，我们要一起保护中国的传统节日。
关键词：高中英语写作训练,书面表达,范文翻译,小组合作
过去, 老师对英语书面表达有所关注, 但指导方法不佳, 时间投入带来的并不是学生高质量的书面表达。相反, 就连基础比较好的学生要写一篇内容较充实、结构较完整、可读性较强的书面表达都存在一定困难。究竟是学生不敢爱书面表达, 还是书面表达爱不起。只要解决这一问题, 就能提高学生的英语书面表达能力。在新课程背景下, 现今的英语教师已都认识到英语书面表达在英语教学中的重要性。在日常英语教学中, 他们对书面表达教学越来越重视。英语书面表达的教学新法不断涌现。我结合日常书面表达教学实践和研究, 旨在探究书面表达教学的有效途径。
一、当前高中书面表达教学简析
1. 当前高中书面表达教学存在的问题
(1) 书面表达布置无的放矢
在日常英语教学过程中, 许多老师虽明白写作的重要性, 但在给学生布置书面表达任务时存在随意性和盲目性———往往拿到什么练习卷就布置什么书面表达, 缺乏系统性, 无的放矢, 事倍功半。
(2) 学生存在消极训练心理
听说读写译各项技能中, 写是高中学生最头疼的一项。所以, 一谈到书面表达, 学生总是表现出排斥和畏惧的心理, 但是为了完成老师布置的任务, 他们又不得不一次次消极地进行训练。反复训练的结果可想而知, 一些学生反而越写越糟。
(3) 书面表达批改后反馈不佳
书面表达批改任务繁重, 许多老师辛辛苦苦地将书面表达批改完, 可是分发下去, 学生只是简单地看看分数和评语, 对于错误不做任何修改就扔到一边。其实, 更多时候学生是不知道怎么修改, 更不用说知道自己到底哪些地方、哪些句子写得好。
(4) 错误“输入强化”
以上教学中存在的所有问题, 在一次次的作文训练中, 会形成错误的强化现象, 与Sharwood Smith提出的“输入强化理论” (1991) 相悖。
“输入强化理论” (Input Enhancement) 的核心是交际活动与改错活动的有机结合。Sharwood Smith指出, 通过“输入强化”, 学习者既可注意在交际过程中忽略的语言现象, 又可使交际过程中的错误输入得到纠正, 提高语言的准确性。然而, 在现实教学中, 许多学生不仅没有改正错误, 习得正确的表达法, 实现“输入强化”, 还使错误在一次又一次训练中强化, 最终出现负面的“输入强化”现象, 错误得到巩固。教师会抱怨学生老是犯同样的错误, 更别指望学生写出优美句子。
2. 当前高中书面表达常见有效的训练法
不同省份的英语书面表达字数要求在120至150个字不等, 似乎仅由十来个句子组成, 而要把这十来个句子写好, 却很有学问。冰冻三尺, 非一日之寒。日常的积累在英语书面表达训练方面有至关重要的作用。写作能力的培养不可能一蹴而就, 我们需要由浅入深、由易到难、由简到繁地进行训练。在英语教师的大家庭里, 所有成员为了学生, 都在积极探索高中书面表达训练的“秘籍”, 渴望我们的弟子能够在师傅这本“武功宝典”指引下练就一身绝世的英语书面表达功夫, 来日闯荡各种英语测试这一“江湖”。
首先, 教材是学生首先接触到的最主要的课程资源, 为学生提供了大量鲜活的语言。课文题材广泛, 体裁多样, 难易程度适中, 适合学生做缩写、仿写、改写、续写及写评论、读后感等练习。这些练习既能使学生巩固已学的课本知识, 加深学生对课文的理解, 又有助于提高学生用英语进行思维和表达的能力。
其次, 美文背诵、句型操练、翻译等方法得到了运用, 发挥了作用。运用这些方法培养出了一大批技艺超群的英语书面表达高手。
3. 范文翻译法出现的背景
根据课标要求, 学生在高中阶段要不断地提高听说读写四项基本技能。整合当前有效的训练方法, 我对书面表达的训练进行了可控制性设计, 目的是让学生在一定的教学目标的指引下进行有效训练。
二、范文翻译法简介
1. 范文的选择
在收集了近十年各省高考书面表达题目及其范文之后, 写出相应的中文版本范文, 按记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文进行分类。针对文体的不同, 将高中英语写作常见的近百个句型分别用在4种文体的35篇范文中进行训练。当然, 选择的范文话题根据课标要求的话题进行整合。
2. 范文翻译实例介绍
某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”, 现对外征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份, 根据提示用英语写一篇短文 (2009年福建高考) 。 (1) 根据思路图适当展开, 使行文连贯; (2) 词数:120左右。
中文范文:
我要微笑
微笑优点很多, 既可以愉悦自己又可以愉悦他人。如果对生活微笑, 生活也会对我们微笑。不论何时何地, 我们要对所有人微笑。
首先, 对父母微笑, 因为他们生我并含辛茹苦把我养大。他们几乎为我安排好了一切。在他们的帮助下, 我取得了巨大的进步。我想微笑地对他们说声“谢谢!”。然后, 我要对自己微笑, 因为只有通过这种方式我才能够笑走麻烦, 过更好的生活。
总之, 让我们笑迎每一天。明天又是崭新的一天。
(1) 翻译前
翻译之前, 我先介绍范文翻译当中会用到的句型供学生使用, 目的在于让学生在翻译中强化句型, 方便今后写作时信手拈来。如下:
句型1:not only...but also...
句型2:only+状语+倒装。
句型3:if等从属连词引导句子的省略。
句型4:would like to do sth.
句型5:without/with+宾语作为条件的句子。
但是并不是简单将句型告之学生。对于每个句型的使用, 利用课堂时间进行事先操练, 提高使用的准确率。
(2) 翻译时
在上交作业之前, 要求小组成员之间用蓝色笔先互改。主要是修改句型、标点和单词拼写的错误。要求批改者签名。互改完后进行二次修改, 然后组长收起上交等待老师批改。
(3) 教师批改
为了解决教师包办而效率低的问题, 对于翻译进行“双改”制。一改老师将学生错误的地方用各种规范的作文批改符号标出。评分并写好评语分给学生进行二改。学生二改要找到互改的那位学生一同修改。之后, 老师利用课后时间进行二改。 (根据不同的学生, 有的进行面批, 有的用录音的方式减少对学生的干扰。) 第二次修改后, 老师与小组成员一起讨论, 进一步修改, 最终形成小组翻译成果。
(4) 成果展示
选出5篇优秀的翻译作品张贴到学习园地。
(5) 后翻译阶段
翻译结束后, 要求小组将成果收集汇总形成“专著”。在积累中成长, 在共同提高中体验学习的快乐。
3. 范文翻译法的辅助提高措施
单一的翻译可能会让学生烦, 特别是基础不好的学生。所以范文翻译还可以采用单句成段法、借用缩写、仿写、改写、续写及写评论、读后感、同声传译法等变换操练。
4. 范文翻译的优缺点
范文翻译法, 能够扎实基础, 稳步提高学生的书面表达能力, 效率高。但是, 由于工作量大、课时要求高, 要求授课教师做好充分的规划并充分调动学生的积极性。
四、结语
范文翻译法还处于研究探索阶段, 但从教学实践的效果来看, 是相当有效的。怎样使该方法成熟并推广, 还有待进一步研究。所谓有心人天不负, 相信在不断深入的过程中能够不断完善该方法。所谓条条大路通罗马, 对于书面表达的教学也没有定法, 关键是一种方法运用好了, 可以让多人受益。
参考文献
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英文版：端午节的由来
the dragon boat festival， also called double fifth festival， is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth moon of the lunar calendar. it is one of the most important chinese festivals，the other two being the autumn moon festival and chinese new year.
the origin of this summer festival centers around a scholarly government official named chu yuan. he was a good and respected man，but because of the misdeeds of jealous rivals he eventually fell into disfavor in the emperor’s court.
unable to regain the respect of the emperor，in his sorrow chu yuan threw himself into the mi low river. because of their admiration for chu yuan， the local people living adjacent to the mi lo river rushed into their boats to search for him while throwing rice into the waters to appease the river dragons.
although they were unable to find chu yuan，their efforts are still commemorated today during the dragon boat festival.
中文翻译
端午节，又称为五五节，因为端午节是在农历的五月五日，是三个重要的中国节庆之一，其他两个分别是中秋节和农历新年。
这个节日的由来是古代中国有一位博学多闻的官吏屈原，他是一位爱民而且又受到尊崇的`官吏，但是由於一位充满嫉妒的官吏陷害，从此在朝廷中被皇帝所冷落。由於无法获得皇帝的重视，屈原在忧郁的情况下投汨罗江自尽。
星期六、星期天妈妈都带我去练舞蹈，每次在路上都能看到漂亮的小草和小树，土地是树宝宝的摇篮，风儿轻轻吹，树宝宝睡着了;小树是花宝宝的摇篮，风儿轻轻吹，花宝宝睡着了;大海是鱼宝宝的摇篮，水儿轻轻流，鱼宝宝睡着了。我希望每天都能看到美丽的小草、小树和小花
On Saturday and Sunday, my mother took me to practice dancing. Every time on the road, I could see beautiful grass and trees. The land is the cradle of the tree baby. The wind blows gently and the tree baby falls asleep. The tree is the cradle of the flower baby. The wind blows gently and the flower baby falls asleep. The sea is the cradle of the fish baby. The water flows gently and the fish baby falls asleep. I hope to see beautiful grass, trees and flowers every day
I want to be a doctor when I see many doctors save their patients. To be a doctor is really great. I think I can be a doctor when I grow up. Then I can help many people out of danger. I will be the happiest girl in the world.
I want to be a reporter when I watch TV every evening. We can get lots of important information from them. They make the world smaller and also make us happy. I would like to be a reporter when I grow up. And I can learn a lot about China and the other countries around the world. I can meet many superstars as well.
I have lots of dreams. I think my dreams can come true one day, because theres an old saying “where there is a will, there is a way.” 2.My Lifestyle Different people have different lifestyles. They do the same things from morning to evening every day. Usually, they write their plans on paper. But sometimes they remember what things they will do in their minds. I also have my own lifestyle. It is wonderful! I get up early on weekdays, and do the school things then. But at the weekend, I never get up early. I sometimes stay in bed until lunchtime. One day, I stayed in bed very late. It was a weekday. The clock rang. It was six thirty. But I didnt hear it. I stayed in bed until seven oclock. I looked at the clock and jumped from the bed to the floor. I was afraid, “Oh, my God, I will be late.” I shouted. So I didnt have breakfast. I put on my shoes and took a taxi to the school. I was in good luck that day. I wasnt late for school. I was pleased that time. I think I should get up earlier on weekdays or I will be late. I believe you get up earlier on weekdays. Best wishes for you.
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I used to hate others to laugh at me, because I thought they were looking down upon me. My friends said that I was too serious and couldn’t be made fun of. When I go out with friends, they always smile loudly and I just sit quietly in the corner. I want to change this situation, I don’t want to be a outsider, I want to be part of the group. So I watch many comic movies and start to play jokes with my friends. I become more active now, when my friends play jokes on me, I will laugh happily and play jokes on them. I take the easy mood and become part of the group.
我以前讨厌别人嘲笑我,因为我觉得他们看不起我。我的朋友说我太严肃,不能开玩笑。当我和朋友出去的时候,他们总是放声大笑,我只是默默地坐在角落里。我想改变这种情况,我不想成为一个局外人,我想是团体的一部分。我看了很多喜剧电影,开始和我的`朋友们开始玩笑。现在我变得更加活跃,当我的朋友戏弄我,我会笑得很开心,也和他们开玩笑。我放松了心情,成为团体的一部分。
I like listening to music and reading,so in my free time,I always listening to music and search the Internet for about half-hour.Its a good way to relax myself.I always do some reading before go to bed.Besides,I always go to swimming after school.Exercises help me to keep healthy and do good to my study.As the same as other students,I often watch TV in the evening,but I have to finish my homework first.
At the weekends,I will help my mother with the housework,such as clean the house,do some washing.
作为一个中学生,我没有太多的时间,但我仍然有很多事情要做。
我喜欢听音乐和读书,所以在我的空闲时间,我总是听音乐和上网大约半个小时。这是一个放松自己的好方法。上床睡觉前我总是做一些阅读。此外,放学后我经常去游泳。运动帮助我保持健康,善待我的学习。和其他学生一样,我经常在晚上看电视,但我必须先完成我的家庭作业。
The movie Spider-man is popular around the world. It describes a young boy happens to get the super power and then he wears the costume as a spider, flying around the city.
But since his uncle who raises him gets killed, the boy realizes that the more power, the more responsibility. So he starts to use his power to help people. he fights against the bad guy and saves people from all kinds of dangers. The story shows the growth of an innocent boy. He learns his responsibility and finds his own place in the world. The positive sides of spider-man inspires the children to find their value.
电影《蜘蛛侠》在世界各地都很受欢迎。它描述了一个小男孩碰巧得到超级力量, 然后他穿着像蜘蛛的服装,飞行在城市里。但是自从养育他的叔叔被杀后,男孩意识到能力越大，责任越大。所以他开始使用他的能力来帮助人们。
My hometown WuGang is a steel town, here beautiful scenery, beautiful scenery, pleasant climate. Is known as the northern small jiangnan.
My hometown is beautiful scenery. Here beside the mountain water, surrounded by green trees. There are mountain, mountain tianchi, nine head cliffs, such as mountains, all are the countless places of interest. Legend is er lang shen mountain pick to a town, still two lang absolute being like stay there. Tianchi mountain waterfalls, plunges three thousand feet, very spectacular. The wind falls, smoke, such as fog, such as dust. Nine heads cliff, past closely linked castle peak, a total of nine mountain, the mountain there is a trickle, beautiful natural scenery make people linger.
My hometown is not only there are mountains, there is a pool pool.
Especially the stone floodplains reservoir at the foot of the mountain, and west lake. Early in the morning, the sunshine reflected in the water, the water sparkling, as silk on the appearance of fine lines, smooth and pale green. The white clouds in the sky and on either side of the castle peak clearly reflected in the water. The blue sky, green hill, the lake together, really beautiful.
我的家乡舞钢是一座钢城，这里风景秀丽，山清水秀，气候宜人。被誉为北国小江南。
我的.家乡风景优美。这里依山旁水，绿树环绕。有二郎山、天池山、九头崖等名山，个个都有数不尽的风景名胜。二郎山传说是二郎神挑来的一座仙山，至今还有二郎神像留在那里。天池山里的瀑布，飞流直下三千尺，非常壮观。风吹瀑布，如烟，如雾，如尘。九头崖里面，一座座青山紧紧相连，一共九座山头，山间还有涓涓细流，优美的自然风光让人流连忘返。
我的家乡不仅有一座座山，还有一潭潭水。
When I was very small, I was so envious about the adults, because they could do whatever they wanted and did not have to depend on their parents. For me, I did not have money and my parents limited my pocket money, so I couldn’t spend the money to buy whatever I wanted. It seems to me that being an adult is my only wish. Some day, I learned from the movie that being an adult was not that as perfect as I thought. In the movie, the man struggled to earn money to pay his bills, what’s more, he had to stay away from his family. Loneliness was always around him. To be independent means we can live our own way and make our own decision. We have more freedom. But at the same time, it also means more annoyance. So why just we enjoy this moment.
翻译
在我很小的时候,我很羡慕成年人,因为他们可以做任何他们想做的,不必依赖他们的父母。对我来说,我没有钱,我的父母限制我的零花钱,所以我无法花钱去买所有我想要的。似乎成为一个成年人是我唯一的愿望。有一天,我从这部电影中了解到，作为一个成年人也没有我想象中的那么完美。在电影中,那个人努力挣钱来支付他的账单,更重要的是,他不得不远离他的家人。寂寞总是是围绕着他。独立意味着我们可以有自己的方式生活,做自己的决定。我们有的自由。但与此同时,这也意味着的烦恼。所以为什么不享受这一刻呢。
The issu about Diaoyu Island is very popular recently. That is the thing between Chinese and Japanese. In China, there are many people do something extremly in order to show their love for the country. For example, some people distroy the Japanese car, whose owner is Chinese. Even some people beat the Japanese, who is in China. I could’t make my mind to agree those behaviers, though I love my country. In my opinion, those people or things pruducted by Japan are innocent. They didn’t do anything wrong. We should defend our country in a suitable way. Otherwise, we would be looked down upon by Japanese.
最近关于钓鱼岛的事件越来越流行。那是中国人与日本人之间的事情。在中国，有些人为了表达他们的爱国精神，他们做了一些极端的事情。例如，有些人砸了中国人买的日本车。有些人甚至在中国打日本人。虽然我也很爱国但是我无法赞成那样子的行为。我觉得那些日本人或者日产的产品都是无辜的。他们什么都没有做错。我们应该用适当的方式来捍卫我们的国家。否则，我们会被日本人看低的。
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