中考英语作文选择职业（通用9篇）
选择职业
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Choosing an Occupation.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。
2.需要花时间去选择职业。
3.选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。
Choosing an Occupation
One of the most important problems a young person faces is
deciding what to do.There are some people, of course, who from the time they are six years old “know” that they want to be doctors or pilots or fire fighters, but the majority of us do not get around to making a decision about an occupation or career until somebody or something forces us to face the problem.Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about as you try to decide what you would like to do.You may find that you will have to take special courses to
qualify for a particular kind of work, or you may find out that you will need to get actual work experience to gain enough knowledge to qualify for a particular job.hxen.com
一、试题同时考查几个语言点,彼此无关联,不利于真实评估学生的困难所在。
1.Neither my father nor my mother______rock music.Theythink that it’s too______.(2011铜仁)
A.like;noise B.likes;noise C.like;noisy D.likes;noisy
2.—Hi,Susan!You look______today.
—Well,I got______A in the English test.(2009铜仁)
A.happy;an B.happy;a C.happily;an D.happily;a
3.—Mike,is this your eraser?
—No,it's not______.Maybe it's______.(2009铜仁)
A.my;Lily’s B.me;Lily C.mine;Lilys’D.mine;Lily’s
一般情况下,中考命题,特别是单项选择题命题,一个小题只能考查一个语言点,但上面三个小题都同时考查了两个语言点。它们的缺陷在于:如果学生知道某一个语言点用法而不知道另外一个语言点用法,那么考试的结果很难准确反映学生的实际情况。此外,从测试结果分析的角度看,如果很多学生没能答对这些题目,就很难判断学生的困难所在。
二、机械考查学生语法知识,缺乏语境。
1.The bus driver always says to us,“Don't get off______thebus stops.”(2012铜仁)
A.when B.while C.until D.if
2.The story is______,and all of usare______in it (2011铜仁)
A.interest;interestingB.interesting;interest
C.interested;interesting D.interesting;interested
C.moved;moved D.moved;moving
3.Everybody there was______by the______story.(2009铜仁)
A.moving;moving B.moving;moved
4.______good job she does!She is really a clever girl.(2009铜仁)
A.What B.How C.What a D.How a
5.1 don't think you are right,______?(2008铜仁)
A.do I B.aren’tyou C.are you D.don't I
从以上几个小题不难看出,考生只需要死记硬背英语语法知识就可以答对。试题缺乏语境,不能充分检测出学生的语言运用能力和水平。误导师生死记硬背语法知识。
三、个别选项存在语法错误,试题缺乏一定的科学性。
1.About______of the students in Grade Nine this year were bom in the______.(2012铜仁)
A.three five;1996 B.three fifths;1990s
C.third fifth;1997 D.third fifths;1990s
2.Great changes______in Tongren in the past five years.(2011铜仁)
A.have happened B.have taken place
C.have been happened D.have been taken place
3.Bamboo can______paper.(2011铜仁)
A.used to make B.be used make
C.be used to make D.be used to making
4.—Look!That 2-year-old girl can sing English songs.—______clever girl!
A.What B.What a C.How D.How a
一般说来,中考试题干扰项不可以有语法错误,也不应该让学生辨别语法错误。第12题考查的是英语中分数和年代的表达方式,由于A,C,D选项本身存在语法错误,考试只要机械记忆语法规则,无须理解句意即可答题,试题的效度可想而知。Have been happened,have been taken place,be used make,how a这些答案选项本身就是错误的,因此选项设计缺乏科学性,降低了干扰性。考生甚至连试题的题干都无须看就可以排除这些选项,更不用说考虑上下文逻辑关系了。
四、试题题干或选项出现中国式英语和知识性错误。
1.—Tongren Daily Paper!Today’s Tongren Daily Paper!(2012铜仁)
“Students'nutrition (营养)meal will be done research (调研)for in Tongren City.”
—______exciting news!
A.What a B.What an C.What D.How
2.—Could you please tell me______?(2010铜仁)
—Walk along the road until to the end and you'll see it on your left.
A.how is the Shi Chang Square
B.how the Shi Chang Square is
C.where is the Shi Chang Square
D.where the Shi Chang Square is
“Students'nutrition (营养)mealwillbe doneresearch(调研)for inTongrenCity.”是一句典型的中国式英语,是极其错误的,而且题干过长,转弯抹角,影响考生情绪。Shi Chang Square应该是Shichang Square。作为一场大型的考试,上面的错误应该尽量避免。
总之,作为语言知识运用题,单项选择题具有重情境、重交际、重运用、重能力四大特征。试题需借助一定的语言环境,考查考生对所学语法、词汇、短语、日常交际用语、习惯用语及常见表达法等方面的掌握程度。题干的命题原则如下:1.尽量不要在题干的句首设空;2.题干设计应力求简洁,意思清楚;3.题干中语言要贴近社会和学生生活实际,体现人文精神,具有真实感;4.题干应具有一定的情境。
—_____is good for me. I don’t mind.
A. NeitherB. EitherC. BothD. All
2. —My brother has been to Beijing.
—_____ .
A. So has hisB. So his hasC. So is hersD. So hers is
3. —My father works very hard.
—_____ . You have a good father.
A. So does mineB. So is mine
C. So mine isD. So your father does
4. —You are a thief!
—I’m not a thief. I took your pen by_____.
A. mistakeB. handC. heartD. idea
5. We should plant more trees to_____ our vegetables from the wind.
A. provideB. protectC. produceD. keep
6. —_____is your favorite?
—Orange, because it brings me good luck.
A. What colorB. WhyC. WhichD. What
7. Thanks_____ your help, I passed the exam. Thanks_____ helping me!
A. for, forB. for, toC. to, toD. to, for
8. —Isn’t he a clever boy?
—_____ . I like him very much.
A. Yes, he isB. No, he isn’t
C. Yes, he isn’tD. No, he is.
9. —You are not a new student of our school, are you?
—_____ . I came here only yesterday.
A. Yes, I amB. No, I am not
C. Yes, I am notD. No, I am
10. Don’t worry; you can_____ the telephone number in this book.
A. look atB. look upC. look overD. look for
11. —Well, it’s Saturday again. A nice weekend.
—_____ .
A. That’s all rightB .The same to you
C. Me tooD. Yes, I’ll be free then
12. If a fire breaks out, please call 119_____ mobile phone.
A. inB. onC. byD. with
13. The pen that I bought yesterday_____ well. I really don’t like it.
A. isn’t writtenB. isn’t writingC. doesn’t writeD. didn’t write
14. —Betty_____ in all kinds of T-shirts in Summer.
—But I like to_____ shirts.
A. wears, wearB. is dressed, wear
C. wears, put onD. puts on, wear
15. It snowed heavily yesterday afternoon but_____ of us were away from school.
A. allB. neitherC. bothD. none
16. —My parents have_____ Beijing.
—Really? I have never_____ there before.
A. been to, gone toB. gone to, been to
C. gone to, beenD. gone, been to
17. When I got to the cinema, the film_____ already_____.
A. ×, beganB. has, begun
C. had, begunD. was, beginning
18. —You had nothing for lunch,_____ you?
—_____ . I had some rice an hour ago.
A. had， YesB. had， NoC. did， YesD. did， No
19. —Is he at home now?
—He_____ be at home, but I’m not sure.
A. mustB. may notC. can’tD. mustn’t
20. Look, there is_____ bridge over this river.
A. a 110-meter-longB. an 110-meters-long
C. a 110-meters-longD. an 110-meter-long
21. The weather here is warmer than_____ in Beijing.
A. oneB. itC. ×D. that
22. I didn’t know why_____ to pass the exam at that time.
A. does he failB. did he fail
C. he had failedD. he has failed
23. He first stayed in Beijing for some time. It was not long_____ he returned home.
A. whenB. afterC. untilD. before
24. —Would you like to drink a cup of tea or a glass of milk?
—_____ , thank you . I would like to have a glass of water.
A. EitherB. NeitherC. NothingD. None
25. You are reading an English book. I_____ you_____ interested in English.
A. don’t know, areB. didn’t know, were
C. didn’t know, areD. don’t know, were
26. —He wanted to go shopping yesterday afternoon.
—_____and he bought many things.
A. So he didB. So did he
C. He so didD. But he didn’t
27. When the students saw the teacher_____ they stopped_____.
A. coming, talkingB. come, talking
C. come, to talkD. coming, to talk
28. He had to take_____ of these books, because he didn’t know which one was better at that time.
A. allB. noneC. eachD. both
29. You play football_____, if not better than, Mary.
A. as wellB. as well asC. so wellD. so well as
30. —What’s wrong with your schoolbag?
—Just now when I entered the room, my father_____ on it.
A. is sittingB. had satC. sitsD. was sitting
Key: 1-5 BADAB6-10 ADAAB11-15 BBCBD16-20 CCCBA
[阅读判断]Now， there are about 24 million microcomputers in use in the United States ―― one for every 10 citizens. It is estimated that by ， 61 percent of American managers will be using some sort of electronic work station.
Q： At present about 10% of American citizens possess a microcomputer.
A.True
B.False
C.Not Given
正确答案：A
答案解析：答案选A。本段一开头就说到目前在美国大约有二千四百万台微型电子计算机在使用中，平均每十人就拥有一台。因此本题的表述是正确的。
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单选题
[阅读判断]The people of Kiribati are afraid that one day in the not-too-distant future， their country will disappear from the face of the earth - literally. Several times this year， the Pacific island nation has been flooded by a sudden high tide.
Q： The people of Kiribati worry that one day their country will be taken away by a sudden high tide.
A.True
B.False
C.Not Given
正确答案：A
中考英语单项选择题专项训练（001）
()1.He made some mistakes in the test.He was not ________.A.enough carefulB.enough carelessC.careful enoughD.careless enough()2.Tom, you should ________ more attention to your pronunciation.A.payB.makeC.sendD.take()3.If it ________ today, I’ll go swimming.A.isn’t rainB.won’t rainC.doesn’t rainD.didn’t rain
()4.—What do you think of the song?—It ________ very beautiful.I like it very much.A.smellsB.likesC.feelsD.sounds
()5.—Must I go there at once?—No, you ________.A.mustn’tB.needn’tC.can’tD.shouldn’t()6.Do you like ________ interesting story he told you?A.aB.anC.theD.不填
()7.—What’s your father like?—He ________.A.is tall and thinB.likes swimmingC.likes eating applesD.is 40 years old()8.Something is wrong with my ________, so I can’t walk fast today.A.handsB.kneesC.teethD.mouth()9.If it ________ tomorrow, we’ll go skating with you.A.isn’t snowB.won’t snowC.doesn’t snowD.isn’t snowing()10.Look!There are a lot of boys ________ football over there.A.are playingB.playingC.playD.to play
()11.A talk on Chinese history ________ in the school hall next week.A.is givenB.has been givenC.will be givenD.gives
()12.I can’t send e-mail on the Internet.Would you like to teach me ________ it?A.when to doB.how to doC.what to doD.where to do
()13.—My little sister ________ a bad cold since last week.—I’m sorry to hear that.A.hasB.hadC.is havingD.has had()14.—Where’s Mom?—She ________ in the hall.A.is shoppingB.goes shoppingC.was shopping D.went shopping()15.—How soon will he be back from America?—________ a week.A.AtB.ForC.OnD.In
()16.My father wonders when personal computers ________.A.are inventedB.were inventedC.inventedD.have invented()17.We’ll have the football match tomorrow ________ it doesn’t rain.A.untilB.whileC.ifD.because()18.—I have a lot of housework to do.—You ________ do it now.Let’s do it together after dinner.A.mustn’tB.needn’tC.canD.should
()19.They like musicians ________ play different kinds of music.A.whoB.whomC.whoseD.which
()20.—Where is Xiao Wang? I haven’t seen him for two days.—He ________ to London on business.A.has beenB.is goingC.has goneD.Went
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中考英语单项选择题专项训练（001）
()1.He made some mistakes in the test.He was not ________.A.enough carefulB.enough carelessC.careful enoughD.careless enough()2.Tom, you should ________ more attention to your pronunciation.A.payB.makeC.sendD.take()3.If it ________ today, I’ll go swimming.A.isn’t rainB.won’t rainC.doesn’t rainD.didn’t rain
()4.—What do you think of the song?—It ________ very beautiful.I like it very much.A.smellsB.likesC.feelsD.sounds
()5.—Must I go there at once?—No, you ________.A.mustn’tB.needn’tC.can’tD.shouldn’t()6.Do you like ________ interesting story he told you?A.aB.anC.theD.不填
()7.—What’s your father like?—He ________.A.is tall and thinB.likes swimmingC.likes eating applesD.is 40 years old()8.Something is wrong with my ________, so I can’t walk fast today.A.handsB.kneesC.teethD.mouth()9.If it ________ tomorrow, we’ll go skating with you.A.isn’t snowB.won’t snowC.doesn’t snowD.isn’t snowing()10.Look!There are a lot of boys ________ football over there.A.are playingB.playingC.playD.to play
()11.A talk on Chinese history ________ in the school hall next week.A.is givenB.has been givenC.will be givenD.gives
()12.I can’t send e-mail on the Internet.Would you like to teach me ________ it?A.when to doB.how to doC.what to doD.where to do
()13.—My little sister ________ a bad cold since last week.—I’m sorry to hear that.A.hasB.hadC.is havingD.has had()14.—Where’s Mom?—She ________ in the hall.A.is shoppingB.goes shoppingC.was shopping D.went shopping()15.—How soon will he be back from America?—________ a week.A.AtB.ForC.OnD.In
()16.My father wonders when personal computers ________.A.are inventedB.were inventedC.inventedD.have invented()17.We’ll have the football match tomorrow ________ it doesn’t rain.A.untilB.whileC.ifD.because()18.—I have a lot of housework to do.—You ________ do it now.Let’s do it together after dinner.A.mustn’tB.needn’tC.canD.should
()19.They like musicians ________ play different kinds of music.A.whoB.whomC.whoseD.which
()20.—Where is Xiao Wang? I haven’t seen him for two days.—He ________ to London on business.A.has beenB.is goingC.has goneD.Went
--- Why not call them instead?
A. writing B. to write C. written D. write
( )22. The little boy woke up his father, _______ “Happy Birthday!”
A. call B. to call C. called D. calling
( )23. The car _______ in Germany in the 1960s looks old now.
A. produced B. producing
C. to produce D. which produced
( )24. --- What are on show in the museum?
--- Some pictures _______ by the Africans.
A. drawing B. drawn C. drew D. were drawn
( )25. The sick man stayed in bed, _______ very terrible.
A. felt B. feeling
C. is feeling D. was feeling
( )26. --- The boy was seen _______ his bike a moment ago.
--- I am sorry to hear that.
A. fell off B. to fall off
C. fall off D. to fall down
( )27. There’re so many beautiful presents in the shop that I don’t know _______.
A. to choose which one B. what choose
C. which one to choose D. to choose what
( )28. --- How bad! They still have no ideas how _______ the problem.
--- Let’s go to help them.
A. solving B. solved C. to solve D. solves
( )29. What is the best way do you think ______ the wild animals?
A. protecting B. to protecting
C. protected D. to protect
( )30. --- You’d better have your sports jacket _____. It’s too dirty.
--- Thanks. I will.
A. to wash B. washed C. washing D. wash
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一、机械考查学生语法知识, 缺乏语境。
1. —Are you afraid of dogs?
—________ . (2013)
A. Yes, I am. B. Yes, I do.
C. No, I don’t D. Yes, I did
2. The bus driver always says to us, “Don’t getoff ________ the bus stops.” (2012)
3. The story is ________ , and all of us are________ in it. (2011)
B. interesting; interest
C. interested; interesting
4. ________ good job she does! She is really a clever girl. (2009)
A. What B. How
C. What a D. How a
从以上几个小题不难看出, 考生只需要死记硬背英语语法知识就可以正确解答。试题缺乏语境, 不能充分检测出学生的语言运用能力和水平, 会误导师生去死记硬背语法知识。
二、试题同时考查几个语言点, 彼此无关联, 不利于真实评估学生的困难所在。
1. Neither my father nor my mother ________ rock music. They think that it’s too ________ . (2011)
A. like; noise B. likes; noise
C. like; noisy D. likes; noisy
2. —Hi, Susan! You look ________ today.
—Well, I got ________ A in the English test. (2009)
A. happy; an B. happy; a
C. happily; an D. happily; a
3. —Mike, is this your eraser?
—No, it’snot________.Maybeit’s ________ . (2009)
A. my; Lily’s B. me; Lily
C. mine; Lilys’ D. mine; Lily’s
一般情况下, 中考命题, 特别是单项选择题命题, 一个小题只能考查一个语言点。但上面三个小题都同时考查了两个语言点。它们的缺陷在于:如果学生知道某一个语言点用法而不知道另外一个语言点用法, 那么考试的结果就很难准确反映学生的实际情况。此外, 从测试结果分析的角度看, 如果很多学生没能答对这些题目, 就很难判断学生的困难所在。
三、个别选项存在语法错误, 试题缺乏一定的科学性。
1. About ________ of the students in Grade Nine his year were born in the ________ . (2012)
C. third fifth; 1997. D. third fifths; 1990s
2. Great changes ________ in Tongren in the past five years. (2011)
A. have happened
3. Bamboo can ________ paper. (2011)
A. used to make B. be used make
4. —Look! That 2-year-old girl can sing English songs.
—________ clever girl!
一般说来, 中考试题干扰项不可以有语法错误, 也不应该让学生来辨别语法错误。第1题考查的是英语中分数和年代的表达方式, 由于A、C、D选项本身存在语法错误, 考生只要机械记忆语法规则无须理解句意即可答题, 试题的效度可想而知。have been happened、have been taken place、be used make、How a这些答案选项本身就是错误的, 因此选项设计欠乏科学性, 降低了干扰性。考生甚至连试题的题干都无须看就可以排除这些选项, 更不用说考虑上下文逻辑关系了。
四、试题题干或选项出现中式英语和知识性错误。
1. —Tongren Daily Paper! Today’s Tongren Dai-ly Paper! Students’nutrition (营养) meal will be done research (调研) for in Tongren City.
—________ exciting news! (2012)
A. what a B. what an
C. what D. how
—Walk along the road until to the end and you’ll see it on your left. (2010)
B. how the Shi Chang Square is
C. where is the Shi Chang Square
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开始写作文前，必须选择作文的人称。“我”是第一人称，“你”是第二人称，“他”是第三人称。一般说来，写自己熟悉的或亲身经历的事，就用第一人称来写。读者读起来，会产生故事的现场感，能够引发共鸣。相比之下，第三人称“他”在作文中的感情色彩较弱，引发读者心动的感染力也不够强。第二人称“你”用在作文中，必须是一种情感的倾诉和交流，否则难以写通畅。它是难度最大的作文。语文课本中，很少有第二人称写的课文。
纵观这些年的中考，师生们不难达成共识，初中生在考场上写的作文，绝大多数是记叙文，其中第一人称的作文，占很大一部分。以山东省2011年中考作文为例，18个市的作文考题中，有10个市的作文标题中出现了“我”。其他作文考题，也多是要求考生抒写自身的记忆和见解。笔者在网络上搜索到全国160多个省市的中考作文考题中，除了北京《日积月累》、天津《如星子滑过夜空》、广东清远《顺流逆流》之类的“坑爹”作文外，有8成上下的作文不同程度地存在着希望学生写记叙文的倾向。中考作文一旦写成记叙文，以“我”的人称写，则是第一选择。这提醒我们：备战中考作文，首先要注意把第一人称运用好。
一、备战中考作文，要启迪学生从自身生活的细节，提炼璀璨的光华
在各地的中考作文中，不论是命题的，还是半命题的，“我”字成为题目或提示语中的高频字。除了有些标题直接说出“我”字以外，还有多处出现跟其同义的“自己”字样。而有些题中即便说的是“你”字，或没有直接指出人称，而实际上指的都是考生自己。河北省最近两年的中考作文《来了》、《陪伴》，都是倾向于考生写记叙文，而写起记叙文，第一人称是最好的选择。尤其是《陪伴》，要求考生表达的，就是日常生活中最真切的感受。再如，湖北省武汉市中考作文考题中称：“以上材料引起你哪些回忆？引发了你哪些思考？”；海南省中考作文考题中称：“写小时候有趣的事情”；广西贵港则中考作文考题要求学生写 “心中的明灯”。面对类似题目，如果考生没有自己的感受和经
历，怎么能把作文写生动呢？可见，中考作文考题，多是要求考生写出丰富的内心世界和思考。
毋庸臵疑，未来的中考作文考题，依然将偏重于记叙文和第一人称的运用。对语文教师而言，引导学生去感受生活中的温暖，学会感恩，学会思考，学会体味生活瞬间的精彩，进而提炼出生活、命运、亲情等题材的感悟和哲理，这是初中生作文训练中的首选。初中学生沉浸于忙碌的学业，很多人的作文在立意上容易失去个性，倾向于无病呻吟。教师则要注意引导学生写中学生最熟悉的生活，从中提炼最真的哲理、最深的思考。学生们平时要细心观察生活，针对中考作文的要求，进行充足的训练。
二、第一人称的作文，在写作中必须要注意叙事的典型性和独特性
记叙文中，既然讲故事的是“我”，那么，所讲故事必须有足够的真实性。当然，学生在考场上写作文，为了拿到高分，会有很强的功利性。作文讲述的故事，也可以虚构，甚至采取“拿来主义”，即使如此，题材也应该真实而独特。如果写假了，写虚了，逃不出阅卷老师的法眼，作文的分数就会大打折扣。考场作文是“一锤子买卖”，因为阅卷的仓促，对某些师生的“备料作文”、“套改作文”留下可趁之机，但是，无论怎么“准备”，作文本身的真实性和感染力必须是独特的。笔者上小学时，很多学生一写作文，就写放学回家的路上，学雷锋叔叔做好事；遇到坏人坏事，就是地主富农分子在偷生产队的庄稼。这种千篇一律的情节，不仅虚假，而且是写作文的禁区，考场作文绝对不能这样写。
前几年，有专家指出，考场作文一旦出现叙述自己身世的情节，爹死娘病的故事特别多。显然，考生无事可写，就想起来曾经读过的一些感人作文，硬按在自己身上，勉强凑成一篇作文。这种虚假的叙事题材是考场之大忌，一旦被阅卷老师识破，就会影响分数。可见，中考作文要写真、写实、写独特，即使有针对性地对作文有所“准备”，也必须呈现出考生的个性，绝不可以像多年前“放学路上做好事”那样的雷同和相似。可见，考生日常的题材积累、生活阅历和思考，是写好考场作文的先决条件。
三、第一人称作文的写作中，必须用足描写，使作文更加生动活泼
建筑一座楼房，即使布局合理，框架紧凑，外观雄伟，都不足以使其发挥作用，因为，建筑物内部的装修非常关键。写作文时，整个篇章结构像楼房的框架，而用足描写，则是楼
房的内部装修。一般说来，写第一人称的作文，极为有利于学生在作文中用足描写，使作文在细节处产生感染力。
描写方法是用生动形象的语言把人物或景物具体描绘出来的一种手法，主要分为人物描写和景物描写两种。也有人干脆分为六大描写：肖像描写、语言描写、行动描写、心理描写、细节描写、景物描写。无论描写怎么分类，中学生用第一人称写记叙文，都必须重视描写。在上述的描写分类中，细节描写和心理描写是最关键的。在描写时，必须不能脱离“我”的感受。心理描写，也必须是“我”的心理。把“我”的心理写到位了，既扣题又生动，作文就容易得高分。而细节描写，更是从“我”的视野出发，把人物和事物写细致。较之用其他人称，“我”运用描写的时候，要方便得多。
当然，就作文而言，五种表达方式叙述、描写、说明、抒情、议论等，都很重要。三个人称中，第一人称依然最能有效地运用上述表达方式。
四、第一人称的作文写作，结尾段要紧扣主题，抒发故事蕴含的哲理
尽管在各类的作文辅导资料中，初中生写作文的开头结尾方法很多，但是，我们要记住的是，一般来说，写记叙文通常是“总分总”结构，结尾段用来抒情的。如果作文采用“分总”结构，结尾段的抒情则更加关键。用第一人称写记叙文，非常有利于考生在结尾段对整篇作文的叙事进行抒情。考生应该在结尾段抓住文章主题和考题中的关键词，进行归纳总结。我们常说“凤头猪肚豹尾”，对中考作文而言，第一人称的记叙文，其“豹尾”就是要求考生在作文结尾段，进行合理的抒情，扣住作文的主题立意，使读者产生共鸣。
如今年河北省中考作文题目《陪伴》，写这篇作文，如果采用第一人称，考生都应该在结尾段有充沛的抒情和到位的扣题。考生要表达出：是什么陪伴着“我”，使“我”的人生得到了什么感悟，产生了什么体味。
--题记
仍记得，那一夜恰似我的愁绪般绵绵不绝。我心中不禁在问，来到这个边远的小城是对，抑或是错。那晚，是我来到这里第一次无法入眠。
这小城地处偏僻的新疆，名字早已忘了。来这里，也只是为了看看多年的好友，只为了看看令她引以为傲的远近闻名的白桦林，除此之外，便什么也没有了。很早前，便听说过这地方的远，出乎意料的远。坐飞机到了乌鲁木齐后，又坐了几天几夜的汽车。下车拿行李时，还发现自己的一个包不翼而飞。我顿时被吓坏了。脑海中一个声音反复地问，来到这个地方，当初莽撞下的决定，真的正确吗?
我不知道答案。
几天后，朋友带我去看令她骄傲的白桦林。从出发，至到达，我们走了很久很久。我们一边聊着，一边走，时间的概念在一片谈笑中被模糊了。
“看!就是这了!”我抬起头，一下被震住了。多么美的林子啊!白桦树散落在广阔的土地上，天空在这些树的映衬下显得更加湛蓝，更加无边无际。白桦林一眼望不到尽头，不断向天边伸展，好像在与寥廓的天比赛，在与天较量，在说着“天能有多远，我便能有多远”的豪言壮语。
鸟叫声传来，原来寂寥的林子多了一份生机。我和朋友在这林间玩耍，笑声在空中荡漾，久久不绝于耳。静下来后，我呆呆地望着那些白桦树，望着这白桦林，静谧，安详，一种神圣感不禁油然而生，想要向它们跪拜。
你知道那种被大自然深深震撼的感觉吗?
我惊叹于大自然的奇妙，惊叹于大自然的创造力，惊叹于大自然无尽的活力。在这白桦林前，心中突然感觉到人类在这些生灵前所显示出的渺小和微不足道。我们曾向天空大喊:“我们要改变世界!人类将成为世界的统治者!”我们做到了，但我们真的做到了吗?
“天晚了，我们回家吧。”朋友的声音将我从思绪中拉回现实。我不舍地离开那片白桦林，人走了，心却依旧在那，一步三回头。
现在，我知道了那个答案，当我踏进白桦林的那一刻起，心中便有了那个答案。
离开新疆时，我写了一张纸条，轻轻放在朋友的桌子上。我不知道她看到没有，但我希望她能看见。纸上的字不多，只写着:
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