2024新东方英语四级作文

2024新东方英语四级作文（精选4篇）

2024新东方英语四级作文 篇1

四级作文万能模板

[1]议论文

Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention, one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is worthwhile X there is a long-running debate.关于是否值得X的问题，一直以来争论不休.Just as the saying goes: “so many people so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说，“"。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

Those who criticize X argue that X They believe that X But people who favor X on the other hand argue that.X

1.To begin /start with

2.furthermore/besides/in addition

3.last but not least.批判X的人认为X。他们相信X，不过，另一方面，赞同X的人则认为X。

After a thorough consideration for my part I am in favor of the latter view thatX

经过深思熟虑，我较支持后一种看法，亦即X。

[2]说明文

Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention one of which is that X

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是X。

Why have there been so many X maybe the reasons can be listed as follows

1.To begin /start with

2.furthermore/besides/in addition

3.last but not least.为什么有这么多X，理由如下

Obviously it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem

For one thingFor another

很明显，我们现在必须采取一些措施

一方面另一方面

I think all the measures above can make present situation better.Let us all start to do so by ourselves.我认为上述措施能使现状变好。让我们都从自身做起！

[3]图表作文

As is shown by the percentage in the picture X has been on rise/ decrease, X dramatically decreasing from X in X toX inX.From the sharp decline in the chart, it goes without saying that X.There are at least two good reasons accounting for X.In one hand, X.In the other hand,Xis due to the fact thatX.In addition,X is responsible forX.Maybe there are some other reasons to showX.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view thatX.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.[4]话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and moreX inX.It is estimated thatX.Why have there been so manyX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one isX.Besides, XThe third one isX.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to X.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing X.For another thing,X.All these measures will certainly reduce the number ofX.最后冲刺，相信自己一定能行！

[5]对比观点作文

X is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides ofopinions of it.Some people say X is their favorite.They hold their viewfor the reason of X.What is more, X。Moreover,_X.While others think that _X is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_X.Secondly,_X_.Thirdly,_X_.From my point of view, I think _X_.The reason is that _X_.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.As to whether it is a blessing or a curse however people take different attitudes.然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)

As society develops people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展，人们开始关注.....People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

In the process of modern urban development we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern some people are in alarm that....最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。

......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world there comes a question is it a blessing or a curse?”

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是：“我们该如何抉择?”

Now we are entering a new era full of opportunities and challenges

现在我们正在进入一个布满机会和挑战的新时代。

People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked...some people think.....while some prefer...说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。

To this issue different people come up with various attitudes.对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。

There is a good side and a bad side to everything it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。

When it comes to...most people believe that...but other people regard...as....提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.When faced with....quite a few people claim that....but other people think as...提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。

Some people are of the opinion that..有些人认为_____________。

Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)

有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。

Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.觉得_____的人认为，______ 城市的经济发展。

Some people advocate that....有些人在坚持认为_________。

They hold that...他们认为_________。

People who advocate that...have their sound reasons(grounds)

坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。

Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。

Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。

Many people would claim that...有人会认为___________。

People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因：________。

But others hold the view that...但是，另外一些人则认为_______。

观点的用词：Attitude opinion 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take have come up with，set forth put forward等。

But on the other hand there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that...不过，另一方面，也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。

But people who are...on the other hand maintain that...不过，另一方面，________的人认为__________。

However there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。

问题用词：Issue phenomenon，后接介词 on over等。

However some others argue that...然而，另一些人则认为_________。

However there are also some others who contend that...然而，也有人认为__________。

But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.不过，对于此，另一些人则持完全不同的观点。

Some people examine this issue from another angle.有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。

On the other hand there are also many opponents who strongly...另一方面，也有很多反对的人，他们认为_____________。

According to my personality and fondness I would prefer...rather than...根据我的个性以及爱好，我选择_______而不会选择__________。

Personally I side with the latter(former)opinion...就我个人而言，我支持后者(前者)___________。

Personally I am in favor of the former point of view.就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。

To my point of view 我认为

To my mind the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages shortcomings)

我认为，长处赛过缺点。

For my part I stand on side of the latter opinion that..就我而言，我较赞同后一种观点________________.As far as I am concerned I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。

If asked to make a decision I would prefer...假如真的需要作出选择，我宁愿____________。

展现问题篇

问题的常用词：question problem issue

Recently the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in

the public.近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。

At present some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因：________。

But others hold the view that...但是，另外一些人则认为_______。

观点的用词：Attitude opinion 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take have come up with，set forth put forward等。

But on the other hand there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that...不过，另一方面，也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。

But people who are...on the other hand maintain that...不过，另一方面，________的人认为__________。

However there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。

问题用词：Issue phenomenon，后接介词 on over等。

However some others argue that...然而，另一些人则认为_________。

However there are also some others who contend that...然而，也有人认为__________。

But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.不过，对于此，另一些人则持完全不同的观点。

Some people examine this issue from another angle.有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。

On the other hand there are also many opponents who strongly...另一方面，也有很多反对的人，他们认为_____________。

According to my personality and fondness I would prefer...rather than...根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择_______而不会选择__________。

Personally I side with the latter(former)opinion...就我个人而言，我支持后者(前者)___________。

Personally I am in favor of the former point of view.就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。

To my point of view 我认为

To my mind the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages shortcomings)

我认为，优点胜过缺点。

For my part I stand on side of the latter opinion that..就我而言，我较赞同后一种观点________________。

As far as I am concerned I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。

After a thorough consideration for my part I am in favor of the latter view that...经过深思熟虑，我较支持后一种看法，亦即________________________。

If asked to make a decision I would prefer...如果真的需要作出选择，我宁愿____________。

附：万能模板范文（必看！）

下面模板的中文大意是：在某种场合，发生某种现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现象的三个原因，并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。总的来说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，您只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。

Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合].It is estimated that [相关数据].Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of

[某种现象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解决办法一].On the other hand, [解决办法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].为便于读者理解，我特意用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。

Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China“s examinations / 中国的考场].It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers” ignorance / 雇主无知].Besides, [hirers“ indolence / 雇主懒惰].The third one is

[hirers” obtusity / 雇主迟钝].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to

[hirers" low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,[flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].一、预算会计的特点：

1、预算会计是以预算管理为中心的一门专业会计。

2、预算会计是一种宏观管理信息系统和管理活动。

3、预算会计主要适用于政府财政总预算以及行政事业单位预算的执行。

4、预算会计联同企业会计一起，构成我国会计的两大分支。

二、预算会计体系是如何组成的？其中哪种会计居主导地位？

1、财政总预算会计（主导）

2、预算外资金会计

3、行政单位会计

4、事业单位会计

5、参与预算执行的国库会计、收入征解会计和基本建设拨款会计等

三、中央财政与地方财政共享收入

1、增值税

2、营业税

3、企业所得税

4、个人所得税

5、资源税

6、城市维护建设税

7、印花税

四、专用基金收入与基金预算收入在管理上的相同与不同？

1、相同：它们都需要专款专用，不能随意改变用途，而且它们也都需要做到先收后支，量入为出。

2、不同：基金预算收入是财政部门按规定收取的纳入预算管理的资金收入，而专用基金收入是财政部门按规定设置或取得的在基金预算收入之外单独管理的资金收入。

五、财政总预算会计在管理财政性存款的过程中，应当遵循如下管理要求？

1、集中支付，统一调度。

2、严格控制存款开户。

3、根据预算和季度分月用款计划拨付资金。

4、办理转账结算，不提现。

5、在存款余额内支付，不得透支

六、固定资产的分类？

1、房屋和建筑物

2、办公设备

3、专用设备

4、交通工具

5、文物和陈列品

6、图书

7、其他固定资产

七、资产核算的特点?

1、有零余额账户用款和财政应返还额度。

2、对外投资部分长短期，调“事业基金”明细

3、债权不计提坏账准备

4、固定资产不计提折旧

新东方考研最新英语作文预测 篇2

纵观往年考研小作文（应用文）命题，个人认为规律性非常明显。大纲规定的应用文类型，也就那么几种，几乎是一年考一种。我们来看看真题：

2004年大纲第一次增加小作文，所考的第一篇作文来自于2005年1月的辞职信。当年这篇作文令很多业界所谓的预测大师们感到非常意外，因为按照常理，大学生写的第一封职业类邮件应该是求职信，考研学子大多数都是应届生，还没学会写求职信就先写辞职信，总感觉不大厚道。结果，不厚道的事情就是发生了，随之而来的就是网上所罗列的大量预测模板彻底失效，甚至当年有人叫嚣绝对不可能考辞职信；

紧接着2006年，考了咨询信，如何向希望工程捐款，此封信考的很常规，只需在考前做过适当准备即可；

2007年，考查的是主动建议信，再次把考生放在了非常主动的地位上，没人问你意见，你自己跳出来对母校的大学图书馆管理提建议。这封邮件再次使网络上以及很多培训机构的预测失效，因为他们为同学们准备的范文多半是类似于你有一个同学，要去美国读书，写信问你到底是读历史还是计算机。实质上，这属于回复建议信，它的文章开头多半是In respond to your question about whether to „ , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主动建议信的开头却截然不同，因为是主动，所以收信人多半会感觉比较突然，因此需要写信人在开头稍作自我介绍，并不是介绍自己的姓名，而是稍微说明下自己主动提建议的初衷是为对方好，首先取得对方的理解，这才是一封主动建议信所必须具备的，基于此，开头往往会设计为，As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人，I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to as follows.因此，如果不能准确使用，则后果会很严重，从第一句话就会暴露你根本没有审题，得分也就可想而知；

2008年考察的非常巧妙，杂交了两种类型的邮件：道歉加失物归还。出国旅行，把国外朋友借给你听的CD机一不小心带回国了。这封邮件再次使很多死板的失物招领信或寻物启事信模板无用武之地；

2009年，倡议信，倡议大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋，这封信比较常规；

到了最近一次2010年，很多同学都在惊讶于怎么考了一篇招聘通知，难道邮件时代就此终结？我认为，实则不然。首先，通知和邮件的格式并无实质差别，考研小作文的注意力从来就不应该是放在格式上；其次，2009年上课我反复给大家讲过求职信怎么写，尤其是得分的关键---第二段，你必须说明自己适合这份工作，因此我给大家设计了三大自证理由，英文（证书）水准，著名企业实习经验，适合团队协作的性格等，而学习主动性稍微强一些的同学只要动点脑筋，就会发现其实只要把这三点反过来，变成招聘要求，这篇通知就会迎刃而解。这就是为什么当年考完试当天就有很多同学自信的跟我说考得不错的原因，因为他们愿意思考，临门一脚还得靠大家自己！

好了，分析了这么多，也就是为了预测未来。综上所述，小作文考察的特点主要有：第一，希望把学生放在一个主动的地位上，比如辞职，主动建议等，都把大家放在了主动方，而这恰恰与很多同学平时训练应用文时喜欢把自己放在被动方的思维相悖，也是大家为什么感觉总押不到题的根源。第二，考研的考察方向依旧是以邮件为主，换句话说，只要把邮件写好了，即使考别的应用文类型，那也不怕！因此，经过对2012年考研新大纲的考量，本人有七成把握今年考研会考订购信（或出售信，一正一反，都要会写）和投诉信（或回复投诉信）。

（二）2012年考研英语大作文命题方向前瞻

考研英语大作文的命题范围虽每年千奇百变，但基于中国国情的基本事实和命题规律却从来没有改变过，因此命题的方向把握相对就不是太难的事，具体来说，从宏观角度符合以下两点：

（1）高举和谐社会大旗（Harmonious Society）

从1998年考研英语大作文命题至今，考题基本锁定和谐社会的大旗，反复变换切入点，而命题方式，除了1999年的图表题之外，已经基本锁定在图画题，这个规律已经延续11年未变，具体来看，1998年的诚信（credit）话题，1999年以及2000年连续两年的人与自然和谐共处的话题（nature），2001年爱心话题（love），2002年的世界文化融合话题（culture）,2003年的个人、企业独立成长话题（self-independence）,2004年的人生奋斗无止境话题（it ends today but starts tomorrow）,2005年的抚养老人话题（to respect elders）,2006年的偶像崇拜话题（idol worship），2007年的自信话题（confidence），2008年的残疾人合作奋斗自强不息话题（never give up）,2009年的网络对于人类交流亲疏远近之影响（interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era）以及2010年再次重现的中西文化大融合话题。从这些历年真题中无不察觉出命题者的良苦用心，即完善人格，关注生活，关心他人，最终实现人与人的和谐，个人自身的和谐以及人与自然的和谐。一旦把握此命题思路，在平时的训练时就能真正做到有的放矢，例如，一些阴暗的，过于政治化的话题，就不会成为应试范围，而尚未考察过的一些和谐话题，例如社会责任（responsibility），乐观心态（optimism）亦或平心做人、脚踏实地（to try to grasp your aspiration step by step）等，就应该在平时适当进行练习，这样在走进考场那一刻才能真正实现胸有成足，写作时的素材才会有信手拈来的感觉。

（2）影射当年热点话题（hot spot）

2008年1月19日下午，正值08年考研第一天，我的手机从当天的研究生入学英语考试结束之时起就一直响到当天晚上21时许，大多数是来自学员和同事的祝贺以及感谢，说我押中了08年的考研大作文题。其实，对于押题这个字眼，我内心从来都是不太感冒的，因为一个好的考研者，英文复习的重心绝对不应该放在押题中，一个好的师者，也不应给学员传达押题这样的信息，而是应该帮助学员实实在在找到方向，真正提高写作水平。但押终归押到了，虽有些许惊诧，但也很欣慰的发现，自己一直以来对于考研命题的思路探析没有出错，起码与命题组的专家们算是有些契合了！其实用心观察的人都会发现，近些年尤其是近5年来考研的命题，除了把握和谐社会这个大方向不变之外，影射当年热点就是另一个最直接有效切中命题的捷径。让我们来看看吧，2003年1月考研，正值中国加入WTO第一年，实为2002年经济界的一个热点话题，因此图画选择了“温室里的花朵经不起风雨”，影射中国企业成长继而引申到个人成长都需要自主独立；2005年1月考研，“养老足球赛”，大家查阅2004年全年BBC评选的中国大事记，把当年命名为中国的“司法聚焦年”，因此赡养父母这个小的切入点影射的实为中国当年的人际全局面貌；2006年1月考研，“偶像崇拜话题”，更是明显不过，2005年全年的超级女声几乎撼动了整个中国娱乐界；2007年1月的“自信话题”，漫画中一个守门员，一个射手，正在面临点球大战前的心理波动，回应的的正是2006年沸腾全球的德国世界杯；再到2008年1月，充分显示了命题者的智慧，中国正式进入奥运年，奥运所体现的一切精神就是永不放弃，自强不息，但如果直接选择一幅漫画就是关于奥运，又太过明显，因此，我当时在2007年5月17号的一次考研讲座现场就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望，即奥运这个热点过于强大，所以不可能避开，那怎么隐藏？？所以只能选择打“擦边球”，通过残奥，影射残疾人不屈不挠奋斗之话题，因为每一个观看过哪怕任何一场残疾人运动会的人都会为这个特殊群体的精神所震撼，果不其然，最终的结果如我所料！因此，我们可以大胆的推测，即将到来的11年考研，这个大规律依旧有很大的可能得到延续。

（三）2012年考研英语预测

以下六大话题搜集，是在充分研究2012年全年大事记的前提下，严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测，具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布，请大家引起足够重视！

1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。

2.漫画“相互推卸责任”---影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。

3.漫画“股市大跌”---影射投机心态不可有，脚踏实地才是出路。

4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”---影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难，此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。

5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”---影射整容现象以及山寨现象

最后，衷心祝愿所有参加2012年的考研的学子都能经过自己的努力获得成功，其实，准备考研的过程所懂得的诸多宝贵品质，本身就是一笔巨大的财富。

朱伟博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/jerrymusic

朱伟简介：朱伟，英文名Jerry，新东方教育科技集团09优秀教师，南昌新东方学校考试部名师，国内考试项目主管，主授课程：词汇8000，词汇5500，四六级阅读，考研写作，雅思词汇，BEC高级写作，大学预科阅读、词汇、考研及四、六级阅读、写作、词汇专家。民商法学硕士研究生，研究生入学考试政治，英语，各专业课以及总分均为当年第一名。大学生缤纷艺术节歌唱比赛冠军，百事新星大赛南区亚军，“江南之星”十强,在大学毕业时成功举办个人演唱会。大学期间获各类歌唱比赛及英文竞赛大奖,并曾在同一首歌及周华健演唱会担任嘉宾歌手,被考生誉为”全能天才偶像教师”。授课内容丰富全面，对历年考试命题规律的研究深入透彻，是新东方集团新一代青年教师的优秀代表。

附件一：2012年考研英语大作文权威预测一

范文演示：Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二：2012年考研英语大作文权威预测二

重点推荐: the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三：2012年考研英语大作文权威预测三

背景介绍：山寨现象

“山寨”一词源于广东话，是“小型、小规模”甚至有点“地下工厂”的意思，其主要特点为仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，网络上各种各样的东西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鸟巢”，山寨版的《红楼梦》甚至火过新版《红楼梦》。

从2003年开始出现山寨手机到各种山寨产品，“山寨”一词从经济行为逐渐演变为一种社会文化现象。如今“山寨相机”、“山寨电影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等诸多带有模仿性质的“山寨现象”层出不穷，形成了独有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

特别提醒：2012年必背小作文三篇

订购及销售信

销售：

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Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信：

你参加了一个公司的面试，结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无，根本不顾及你的感受，请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。

1，说明来信目的

2，具体阐述投诉理由

3，期待的解决方式

点评：这是一封典型的combination（合体式）作文，它既涉及找工作面试用语，又涉及投诉信，代表了考研应用文命题的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

2024新东方英语四级作文 篇3

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on College Student’s cohabitation.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）现在社会上的未婚同居现象相当普遍，大学生中也存在这种现象

2）分析大学生同居的利与弊

3）你怎样看待大学生同居现象？为什么？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象的利与弊，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生中的未婚同居现象，引出对其的争议；对比分析大学生同居的利与弊；表明“我”对大学生未婚同居现象的立场并说明理由。

【参考范文】

My View on College Students’ Cohabitation

Nowadays, premarital cohabitation is common and popular and this phenomenon has extended to the campus.More and more college student lovers choose to live together off campus.This phenomenon has aroused great public concern and there are much discussion on its advantages and disadvantages.Admittedly, college students’ cohabitation has its advantages.One of them is that the lovers can know each other better by living together.They can decide whether their romantic relationship should go on.Secondly, cohabitation matures college students and improves their sense of responsibility.However, there are also many problems resulting from the cohabitation on campus.A good example to illustrate this point is that some girls might be hurt by their irresponsible boyfriends.Besides, living together will involve many trivial things, which of course will influence their study.From my point of view, it is unwise for college student lovers to live together during their education.After all, premarital cohabitation is not an easy thing, which is too early for college students who are not mature enough.Therefore, I suggest that the college students should take love seriously and do not choose to live together before graduation.热点作文16

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1）近年来出现大学生就业难的现象

2）产生这一现象的原因

3）如何解决这一问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一

问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。

【参考范文】

College Students’ Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation.Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy.Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future.热点作文14

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1）目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜

2）这种现象造成的危害

3）我们应该怎么做

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一种不良社会现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象造成的危害，提纲第3点则要求提供解决方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述假文凭的猖獗程度；说明假文凭对雇主及应聘者造成的危害；从预防与惩治的角度提出解决问题的举措。

【参考范文】

How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas?

Nowadays the flooding of fake diplomas is becoming more and more of a problem in our society.It is reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job market.In addition, there are a variety of fake diplomas or certificates.It is very clearly seen that fake diplomas are bringing great damage in many aspects.Above all, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a ce

rtain post, causing a great loss to their companies.Furthermore, it’s unfair that one fails to get his job just because his rival has a fake diploma or certificate.Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading.First of all, companies and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks.Moreover, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by laws and totally exposed through media.Besides, companies should keep detailed information of the diploma holders and the diplomas should be issued with fake-proof mark.Only through these ways can this problem be tackled.热点作文13

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光，他们被称作“月光族”

2）有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念，但很多人反对这样消费

3）我对此的看法是„„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述“月光族”现象，引出对这一现象的不同看法；对比阐述两种看法各自的理由；表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。

【参考范文】

The Moonlight Clan Nowadays, more and more people, especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”.These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings.Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while other people object to this kind of consumption style.Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that “the moonlight clan” knows how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.However, other people criticize “the moonlight clan”.They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful.In addition, no savings will place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position in case of unexpected expenses.Weighing these two arguments, I prefer the latter one.In my eyes, though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, in the long term, it is unfavorable to their family and career.Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.热点作文11

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Popularity of Blog.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outlin

e(given in Chinese)below:

1）近年来“博客”越来越流行，许多人利用“博客”来表达心声、交流想法

2）博客流行的原因

3）目前的博客中可能存在的问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求说明导致该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求分析该现象中可能存在的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单介绍什么是“博客”，描述博客的流行情况；说明博客流行的原因；指出目前博客中可能存在的问题。

【参考范文】

The Popularity of Blog

In recent years, blog has become very popular.More and more people have created their own blogs and often visit others’ blogs.They use blog to reveal their inner voice, or collect and share thoughts and things they find interesting.In brief, blog is an online dairy or a frequently updated personal page.Why does blog become so popular in such a short time? Firstly, it is the widespread of Internet that provides a platform for the appearance and popularity of blog.Secondly, anyone can create his own blog as he wishes.Blog has no fixed rules and needn’t professional knowledge and skills, which enables millions of people to have a voice and connect with others.Thirdly, blog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums, from individual thoughts to world events.Among millions of blogs, you can always find something you are interested in.However, blog has some problems.For one thing, plagiarism in blog is not unusual.The protection of blog copyright cannot be guaranteed.For another, many blog contents are in a mess, and some even include unhealthy things.Therefore, blog still has a long way to go before it becomes mature.热点作文10

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Choices after Graduation.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）根据下图描述某高校近两年毕业生去向分布情况

2）分析这样分布的原因

3）你的看法

毕业去向 就业 考研 出国留学 其它

所占比例 50% 30% 17% 3%

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式图表命题。提纲第1点要求根据所给图表描述一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：根据图表中的数据，描述近两年某高校毕业生去向分布情况；分析导致这样分布的原因；阐述

“我”对毕业生去向的看法。

【参考范文】

Choices after Graduation

From the above table, we can see that the students of this university have three main choices after graduation.Of these choices, the students who have found a job only take up 50%.In contrast, students who pursue further study by taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad have increased greatly than before, with the total percentage of 47%.Indeed, this phenomenon is also quite common in other universities.The following factors can account for the choices of graduates.Above all, with the enrollment extension of universities, college graduates are facing the severe employment situation, which forces them to find another way out.Moreover, in information age, knowledge is updated very rapidly.Many college students find their knowledge is not enough for their future career.Besides, some college students would not like to enter into the complicated society and want to escape from the reality temporarily by going to further study.From my point of view, one’s choice after graduation should be based on his individual condition.Though taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad for further study is a good choice, it is not necessarily true of everyone, because it might involve many factors, such as your future career direction, your economic condition.Therefore, we should take a full account before we make our decisions

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）现在有不少大学生毕业后开始自主创业，政府鼓励这种行为，而且还给大学生创业提供了许多优惠和便利措施

2）产生这一现象的原因 3）你的看法

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前许多大学生自主创业的现象；分析大学生选择自主创业的原因；阐述“我”对大学生自主创业的看法。

【参考范文】

College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings

Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation.The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students.This phenomenon has aroused great concern from the whole society.However, why do so many college students ta

ke the way of starting their own undertakings? Firstly, college students are facing severe employment situations.Many college graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses.Moreover, some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others.They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own businesses.Besides, the government’s encouragement and the media’s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students’ enthusiasm to take this way.As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings.However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, ability to endure hardship and a feasible project.Therefore, think it over and make full preparation before you decide to start your own business.热点作文8

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Universities lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）近年来很多名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生，一些人强烈反对这样做

2）但也有不少人认为这很正常

3）你对此的看法是„„，为什么？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一些人对于某种现象的看法，提纲第2点指出对该现象的另外一种看法，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近年来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生这一现象；对比阐述关于该现象的两种不同的看法和各自的理由；表明“我”更倾向于哪种看法并说明理由。

【参考范文】

Should Universities lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities?

In recent years, many famous universities lower admission requirements for celebrities.More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination.This phenomenon has become a subject of widespread controversy.Some people object strongly that universities lower admission requirements for celebrities.They hold that this admission pattern will damage the basic fairness rule of education.In addition, they say that if a person who has not enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it would be an insult on college education.However, still other people think it acceptable.They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field.Besides, in their opinions, these celebrities to some extent set a good model for other young people.Weighing these

two arguments, I prefer the latter one.For one thing, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning.For another, if they accept advanced education, they could serve the society better.Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities’ efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy.热点作文7

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡

2）分析产生该现象的原因

3）针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状；分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因；针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。

【参考范文】

Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students.With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them.The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus.Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination.Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money.Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost.Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards.As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards.However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students.Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt.Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly.Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.热点作文6

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Selfhelp Traveling of College Students.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1）

大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”

2）分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因

3）你的看法

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热衷于“自助游”的现象；分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因；阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。

【参考范文】

Self-help Traveling of College Students

So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader.Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students.According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group.Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space.College students don’t like being restricted.They want to arrange their travel as they wish.Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability.Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves.It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal.As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it.For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not.For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better.热点作文5

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Secondhand Goods.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）目前购买二手货的人越来越多

2）分析产生这一现象的原因

3）二手货交易可能带来的问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈该现象可能带来的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前二手货的交易现状；说明二手货交易增加的原因；分析二手货交易可能带来的问题。

【参考范文】

Secondhand Goods In recent years, second-hand tra

nsactions have become quite common.Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on.Why do so many people like to buy secondhand goods?

The following reasons can account for this phenomenon.Above all, secondhand goods are cheaper than new ones.This enables those people who have poor financial abilities to buy the things they want.Moreover, secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands.Besides, Internet provides a more convenient and quicker transaction platform for secondhand goods.However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions.For one thing, the quality of secondhand goods can not be promised and you can not enjoy the good after-sale service.For another, secondhand goods market lacks enough supervision and management, and there exist many dishonest business activities.In a word, I think secondhand goods transaction is a good trading way, but it needs further perfection of the rules.热点作文4

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for National Civil Servants.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮

2）分析产生这一现象的原因

3）你对此的看法是„„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出近几年社会上出现的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近几年来报考国家公务员的热潮；分析产生这一热潮的主要原因；谈谈“我”对报考公务员的看法。

【参考范文】

Test for National Civil Servants

In recent years, there are more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants.Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation.And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage.The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.The following reasons can account for this kind of craze.Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure.Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice.Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people.Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in th

e civil servant test.In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years.However, from the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation.If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources.Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.热点作文3

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cyber Crimes.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前

2）应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题

3）作为大学生，你应该怎么做？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

【参考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes.热点作文2

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability? You should write at lea

st 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）现在很多漂亮的女孩子尽管没有很强的能力仍能找到很好的工作，因此一些人得出结论说外貌比能力更重要

2）你是否同意？给出你的理由

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种有争议的看法，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的态度，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前很多漂亮的女孩子找工作更容易的现象，由此引出争议的观点：外貌比能力重要；表明“我”是否同意该观点并说明理由；针对外貌和能力提出“我”的建议。

【参考范文】

Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability?

Old people often tell the young, “Don’t judge a person by his appearance”, meaning capability is more important than appearance.However, nowadays, with more interviewers putting emphasis on looks and the appearance of the applicants, a lot of people come to the conclusion that appearance is more important than capability.As for me, I can’t agree with this argument.Good appearance is pleasant, but capability is more important, because it demonstrates one’s self-cultivation and practical values.It shows the efforts and the glory of acquiring something through one’s hard work whereas good looks bespeak no struggle of the individual.Besides, maybe sometimes a beautiful face can help a girl acquire a good position, but in the long run it is her talent not her look that really works in her career development.Therefore, those without good appearance needn’t feel depressed because one’s success depends on his capability;those with good appearance have to work hard since good appearance cannot bring a person fina

l success

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1）目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票

2）分析产生这种现象的原因

3）提出你的建议

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩票的现象；分析导致人们购买彩票的原因；针对购买彩票提出一至两点“我”的建议。

【参考范文】

Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries?

Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth.Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets.But why do so many people like buying them?

新东方 大学英语四级辅导写作3 篇4

3大家好，欢迎来到大学英语四级考试辅导，我是王江涛，我们的写作老师，今天是我们四级写作的第三次课，第二次课我们讲了词汇的写作，今天我们重点去讲应用文，今天我们的讲解包括三个内容，一个是称呼，一个是正文，一个是落款。应用文的格式有很多种，当然我们重点讲书信作文，从2001年6月份到2005年12月份，一共有11次四级考试，这11次四级考试当中，有7次都是应用文，可见其重要性，因为2004年大学英语考试委员会有一个声明，以后的国内考试不管是四六级还是考研，侧重于考察考生的实际运用能力，所以像四级改革以后，听力比重上升了，阅读比重下降了，应用文成为一种重点的题型，希望大家重点准备。

当然应用文四级考有两种，一种是书信作文，一种是口头作文，曾经考过两次口头作文，像2004年6月份，让你写一个导游词，假设你是一个导游，领着一群人旅游，写一个导游词，2005年1月份，写竞选演讲，假设你要竞选学生会主席，写一个竞选演讲，这都属于口头作文，本来应该是口头说的一段话，让你写下来，还有五次考到书信作文，这五次书信作文，有三次是严格的书信作文，有两次是书信作文的变体，书信作文的变体出现在2003年6月份，当时考了一个目击见证书，很多同学一看就崩溃了，什么叫目击见证书，他不知道怎么写，其实就是一种书信作文的变体，不需要写称呼，也不需要写落款，直接写正文就可以了，假设你发生了一场车祸，或者看到一场车祸，写一个这样的见证书，这道题目怎么来的？来自于2000年高考，国内考试是有规律的，很多考题翻来覆去的重考，2000年高考，有没有同学参加过？是这样一道题，假设你是李华，国内考试是有规律的，四六级考试一般叫李明，高考一般叫李华，而且十多年没有变过，当然还有很多更加弱智的规律，所以造成了新东方这种弱智学校的成功。你在美国目击一场车祸，然后写一个见证书，过了三年之后，放在四级里面，还是写见证书，但是变成了李明，一个见证书。

变成了greatthree，大三应该叫做junior，下面说，our university has ten campus，我们的大学有十个食堂，食堂这个词题目当中有，叫canteen，但是这个同学不幸的是没有看到，或者即使看到也抄错了，所以变成了我们的大学有十个校园，像北大清华也没有十个校园，but the same food in ten campus.但是十个校园里面吃的都一样，the food same,the price no same.吃的都一样，价格不一样，很多同学写这样的句子没有谓语，这属于严重的语法错误，一个句子里面，主语和谓语是必须要有的，然后是The prices are too black.这个是一个北京的同学，把北京的土话都写上了，价格太黑了，you please tell me why the price different，五个感叹号，你告诉我，为什么价格不一样？你这个校长是怎么当的？有一个词叫菜单，他写了这样一句话，The word in the menu is too small to clear.菜单上的字太小了，看不清楚，太小看不清怎么说，这位同学想清楚是clear，所以太小看不清，就写成了toosmalltoclear，其实应该怎么说？应该是太小了不能读，读叫read，叫做toosmalltoread，太小了不能读。然后是We have to ask the cooker what to eat,厨师应该怎么说，cooker，所以这句话变成了我们不得不问煤气灶应该吃什么，It waste us too many time.这个简单的句子有两个严重的语法错误，第一个是it，单数第三人称，我们讲过，主谓一致，单数第三人称动词后面应该加一个’s，第二个是time是不可数名词，不能用toomany来修饰，应该用toomuch，这样的错误你不知道吗？肯定知道，但是这个同学写的时候不小心就写错了，而没有检查，这种弱智错误太多，你想及格是很难的，然后这个同学写了这样一句话，他说，I want to let you know,Ilove my university，我想让你知道，我爱我的大学，and I love you too，我也爱你，有同性恋的嫌疑，下面这个同学直接写Your friend Li Ming goodbye，直接就和校长再见了，这篇文章辛辛苦苦写了半天，满分15分，大家猜一下他的得分是几分？也就是两分，属于滔滔不绝一时流，下笔前言离题万里，整个在讲故事是不行的，书面作文应该怎么写？当然书信有很多种格式，英文的书信是要求三种故事，第一种就是称呼，称呼怎么写？分成两种情况，第一种情况写给机构，如果你给机构写信应该怎么写？机构再分成两种情况，第一种情况就是不认识负责人，假设你给一个机构写信，而且不认识机构的负责人，比如2006年考研作文考的什么题目，写给希望工程，希望工程是一个机构，负责人不认识，怎么写？我们看一下称呼，应该是DearSirorMadam，尊敬的先生或者女士，我们知道，最初是使用dearsir指代所有的人，后来由于上个世纪女权主义运动，后来加一个madam，后面使用逗号还是冒号，标点写错了，上了考场也是要扣分的，英国英语是用逗号，美国英语是用冒号，而判卷老师希望看到英国英语还是美国英语，这一点需要了解一下，他希望看到英国英语，因为判卷老师一般是国内大学英语系的教师，我们国内大学英语系一般讲什么，讲英国英语，英国英语是正统英语，是贵族的英语，美国英语是贫民英语，现在很多同学喜欢学美英，因为美国比较强大，但是美国的上层以讲英英为荣耀，大家如果可以讲一口地道的伦敦音在世界各地都会受人敬仰，而在写作当中，如果四级写作作文称呼后面使用冒号是要扣分的，一定要使用逗号，尊敬的先生，或者女士，注意大小写，你不知道对方是男是女，或者如果这个称呼，这封书信比较正式，你可以写，towhomitmayconcern，致有关人士，像今年考研作文，给希望工程办公室写信，给政府机构写信，显然比较正式，就可以使用后面这种称呼，所以不认识字的人应该知道怎么写。

写给机构的第二种情况，就是认识负责人，那么怎么写？我们看一下这种称呼，应该是dearmr.或者ms.，后边这个点千万不要省略，标点写错了也是要扣分的，大学校长这个词在2002年1月份当中出现过，这个词叫做president，这个词什么意思？有同学想到第一个意思，总统的意思，这个词有六个意思，希望大家掌握，是应用文必考的一个词汇，或者必须要掌握的一个词汇，第一个意思，总统，第二个，董事长，第三个，总裁，第四个，大学校长，第五个，会长，第六个，主席，都需要掌握一下，或者说写给老师怎么写，说你给蔡老师写信，不能写teacherCai，应该写MR，或者MRS，或者是一个教授，用什么？professor，教授的话，如果经理叫什么？叫做Manager，或者编辑叫什么，叫Editor，这是你知道这个人的性别，以及他的职务可以这样写，尊敬的校长先生，或者尊敬的编辑女士，这是称呼的第一种情况，写给机构。

称呼的第二种情况，写给个人，再分两种情况，第一种情况，关系不亲密，关系不亲密是写给谁？假设大学校长，这种人就是跟你关系不是很亲密，所以写给个人的第一种情况，就等于写给机构的第二种情况，写法是完全一样的，写给一个机构，这个机构的负责人你认识，但是关系不熟，如果写给个人，这个个人跟你关系不是很亲密，都是一种人，校长，经理这样的人，所以写法都是一样的。

我们前面讲的三种，都属于公务书信，写给个人的最后一种叫做私人书信，就是写给朋友，或者同学，写给朋友、同学怎么去写，直呼其名，比如你给我写信，就是dearMike，就可以了，不要写全名，也不要只写姓，这是称呼，分成两种情况，写给机构和写给个人，今天上半节课我们讲的是书信作文的写作格式，我们分析了一篇范文，讲了一些大家存在的问题，讲了一下称呼，休息时间到了，我们休息一会儿，马上回来，下半节课，我们会讲解正文和落款。

好，休息完毕，欢迎回来，上半节课，我们讲的书信的称呼，下半节课我们讲一下正文和落款，首先我们看一下正文怎么去写。四级作文其实很简单，上节课我们说过，就是120个字到150个字，这120到150个字，也就是10句话，针对书信作文，也要写三段，最后我们大家真正写书信的时候，可能写一段，但是四级考试一定要写三段，第一段三句，第二段四句，第三段三句，三四三，就这么机械，这个结构是固定的，关键是从语言上下功夫，而书信作文第一段写三句话，而且在书信作文当中，以及在议论文当中，四级作文要求有两个小点，请大家注意一下，就是一定要写三到五个关联词，要写三到五个从句，因为太少或者太多都是要扣分的，第一段写三句话，第一句话写什么？改写提纲一，每句话我都告诉你，如果你再不知道怎么写，及不了格可别来找我，因为四级作文一般会有三点提纲，提纲是中文的还是英文的，一般是中文的，因为英文怕你照抄，比如第一点提纲针对2004年1月份这封最新的书信，我们来看一下，就是有一个朋友考大学，给他提一点建议，第一点，建议报考的专业和理由，用中文提纲翻译过来不就可以了吗？放在第一段作为主题句，你说我建议你报考英语专业，因为它好找工作，一句话搞定，这是第一段第一句话，是主题句。然后第一段第二句话写什么？自我介绍，一定要做一个自我介绍，书信我们讲过了，分成私人书信和公务书信，你写私人书信还需要做自我介绍吗？当然就不需要做了，你给朋友写信，同学写信，大家都认识，你还介绍啥自己，那不吃饱了撑吗？如果你写公务书信，一定要写一下自我介绍，比方说，02年1月份四级作文，考到给校长写信，校长不认识你，你需要介绍一下，我是大几的，来自哪个系的学生，自我介绍，你做一下，这是第一段第二句话。

第三段第三句话写什么，写作目的，写英文这种写作，讲究开门见山，中心思想放在第一段，段落大意在每段第一句话，像05年考研，考到辞职信，按照中文书信的写法，会不会上来第一句话就是我要辞职，肯定不会，一般中文比较委婉，上来很多同学去年考研就这样去写，说老板，你人长得很英俊，学历很高，人品也很好，我们公司待遇很好，我们同事都喜欢你，老板一看这孩子懂事，最后一句话，我要辞职，老板当时撞墙，按照英文的写作规律，应该上来第一段就是我要辞职，开门见山，或者建议信，像04年1月份，上来就是我建议你要考哪个专业，或者大学，所以第一段就是这样的，三句话，第一句话，改写提纲一，第二句话，自我介绍，第三句话，写作目的，当然有的时候，写作目的和自我介绍，顺序可以颠倒一下，你可以先写写作目的，再写自我介绍也可以，或者假设第一点提纲就是写作目的，但是写作目的就不用想了。像04年第一点提纲就是建议报考的专业和理由，就是一个写作目的，这句话就省掉了，第一段写三句话，第二段写四句话，这四句话写什么？第一句话，改写提纲二，第一段是改写提纲一，第二句话改写提纲二，像04年1月份这篇文章，第二个提纲，报考该专业需要的基本条件，一上来第一句话，报考该专业需要下面的条件，一句话搞定，主题句。下面，第二句话写什么？第二段分成三个部分，第一个部分，改写提纲二，第二部分，写两点原因，或者两点情况，任何问题一般来讲，都是写两点原因，或者两点情况，像刚才这道题目，建议报考的专业，英语专业，需要什么条件？写两点条件，第一点，假设口语好，第二点，假设词汇大，搞定了，两句话。

第二段的第三句话写什么？或者第二段的第三部分写什么？就是来一个小结，这个小结和主题句意思差不多，但是不能照抄，要改写一下，总分总的结构，其实中间是两句话，把这两点原因写成两个词组不就可以了吗？由于需要口语好，词汇量大，所以你需要这样的条件，这样准备，所以第二段就是一个总分总的结构，主题句加两点原因，加一个小结，但是小结可以不写，就变成了总分结构，这是第二段，因为第二段很难有什么万能句型。

我们再看一下第三段，第三段再写三句话，第一句话写什么，应该知道了吧，叫做改写提纲三，像04年1月份，第三点提纲就是应当如何备考，下面写一句话，你应该这样备考，比如扩大词汇量，扩大口语，一句话搞定，第二句话表示感谢，因为英文这种文化比较虚伪，礼多人不怪，一定要对对方表示感谢，如果你没有表示感谢是不好的，只有一种情形不需要表示感谢，就是建议性，四级考过两次，01年6月份和02年，和04年1月份，这两次书信都属于建议信，朋友让你给他提建议，你给他提建议需要谁感谢谁？当然需要他感谢你，你不要提半天建议感谢他，除了建议信，所有的书信都需要对对方表示感谢，比如投诉信，四级也考过，02年1月份，投诉食堂，但是食堂是不是全是校长的责任？不一定，校长可能不了解情况，所以投诉信也需要对对方表示感谢，投诉信并不是骂娘，而是解决问题。表示感谢的句型写什么？有同学上场就写，thankyou，或者thankyouveryveryverymuch，太滥了，我们在这儿推荐三个句型，大家至少应该掌握一个，你也不用去找了，这种句型都是固定的，有同学觉得比较古怪，因为英文有一些习惯的句型，像中文的此致敬礼，你跟洋鬼子去解释，他们能搞清楚吗？搞不清楚。我们看一下第一句话，表示感谢应该怎么说，就是my thanks to you for your generous help are beyond the words.都是一些非常恶心的句子，很肉麻，把它背会，第一句话，我对你慷慨帮助的感谢无法用言语来表达。首先是我的感谢，什么样的感谢，对你的感谢，toyou，是一个介词短语做定语，修饰前面那个感谢。for your generous help，又是一个介词短语做定语，对你慷慨帮助的感谢，无法用言语来表达，这句话的结构是什么结构？是一个主系表结构，主语是我的感谢，系动词是are，系动词后面加表语，大量的使用主系表，来替代主谓宾，中文习惯使用主谓宾结构，但是英文习惯使用主系表结构，比较书面化，容易帮你取得高分。

我们再看第二个句子，表示感谢还可以怎么说？可以写这样一个句型，Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.当我想努力表达我对你真诚感谢的时候，言语无法表达，也是非常恶心的句子。没法表达，不是donot，是fail，多么精采的一个词汇，when引导一个时间状语从句，当我想努力表达我真诚的感谢的时候，真诚不是truly，是sincere，言语无法表达，这是第二句话。

我们再看第三句话，是一个更长的句子，你针对自己的情况，觉得能背下哪句，看哪句比较顺眼就背下来，就是，我借此机会表达我衷心的感谢，衷心的这个词怎么说？叫做heartfelt，内心里感觉到的，也就是衷心的，对什么的感谢？对你给我帮助的感谢，最后yourenderme，这是一个定语从句，这个定语从句省略了引导词that，render什么意思？提供、给予，这个字比那个give得分高吧，帮助大家想到第一个词就是help，太弱智了，assistance，assistance是名词，动词帮助怎么说？叫做assist，名词助手怎么说？assistance，至少可以学三个词，这是表示感谢，三个句型，至少应该掌握一个。

第三段的第三句话是期待回信，比方说大学校长，工作很忙，如果没有期待对方回信，一看这封信无所谓，两个月之后再说吧，那你就白写了，一定要期待对方回信，期待大家想到第一个词是什么，有同学可能会说，look，expect，hope，都是错误的，有一个词组，以look打头，叫做look forward to，我们看第一个句子，I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.我期待着尽快得到您的消息，to在这儿是一个介词，所以后面应该是动名词，hearing。第二个句子，我们再来看一下，就是I look forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.favorable reply，favorable 好心好意的，reply，答复，atyour earliest convenience这是一个英文的术语，表示尽早，希望尽快得到您好意的答复。

我们再看第三个句子，是更难的一个句子，prompt这个词什么意思？迅速的、敏捷的，比quick得分要高吧？Your promtp attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.您的迅速的关注对我的询问，我们大家想到问第一个词就是ask，太滥了，这儿写的什么？inquiry，tomyinquiry，这是一个介词短语做定语，来修饰前面的attention，您对我询问的迅速关注，将被高度感谢，所以在英文当中，要不叫委婉，即使给同学写信也不要太随便，大量的使用would，could，please这样的词，我们五节课讲的东西消化掉，分数可能上去了，就怕你听完之后就忘了。将被高度感谢，感谢用的不是thank，是appreciate，比thank高级，而且是一个被动语态，中文多主动，英文多被动，因为英文讲究客观性，讲究以礼服人，要大量使用被动语态，但是也不要每句话都被动，我将高度感谢您对我询问的迅速关注，所以第三段就是这样的三句话。

当然，最后两句话顺序可以打乱，你可以先写期待回信，再写表示感谢，也是可以的。或者假设他的第三点提纲就是表示感谢，或者就是期待回信，当然最后两句话可以少写一句话，所以整篇文章就是这样三四三的结构，第一段三句，第二段四句，第三段三句，而且考到书面作文属于送分的，第三段两句话，自我介绍，写作目的，废话，第三段两句话表示感谢，期待回信，任何书信都可以写上，至少50个词了，真正需要写的就是那么六七十个词，所以其实很简单，而且每段的第一句话都是主题句，提纲已经给你了，你把它翻译一下，就作为每段的主题句。下面再写两点原因，或者两点情况就可以了，真正需要写的就是第二段的最后三句话，书信作文其实很简单，正文。当然基础比较好的同学，可以根据自己的情况进行调整，少写一些废话，像自我介绍，写作目的，感谢期待回信，根本不想，每段都是一个总分结构，每段第一句话都是改写提纲，下面写两点原因，最后来一个小结。

像04年这道题目，如果你基础比较好，第一段第一句话改写提纲一，就是我建议你报考英语专业，下面再写两点原因，第一点，好找工作，第二点，比较实用。第二段第一句话，改写提纲二，我建议你报考该专业需要这样的条件，下面再写两句话，第一点，需要口语好，第二点，需要词汇量大，最后来一句小结，第三段第一句话，改写提纲三，你说，应当这样备考，下面再写两点，第一点就是扩大词汇量，第二点，提高口语，这是正文，最后落款很简单，我们简单说一下，就是Yourssincerely，LiMing，Yourssincerely这种落款是万能的，任何书信都可以去写，而且后面来一个逗号，后面是LiMing，因为四级明确规定叫李明，每次上了考场都有一个同学，时间一紧把自己的真实名字写上，是可能会扣分的，因为四级判卷很严格，假设判卷老师跟你认识，判卷老师是你小舅子，你跟他约好，说我把自己的真实名字写上，你看谁落款是东方不败，那就是我，给我打高分，那是不行的。从现在开始，你就牢记，你叫做李明了，每天睡觉前默记一遍，我叫李明，上了考场不要写错，这是称呼、正文和落款。