2019年考研万能作文
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考研英语小作文万能模板
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辞职信
模板1: Dear ,I am writing to inform you about the decision to resign from my current position.There are a few factors involved.First and foremost,.Secondly,.Last but not last,.I would like to tcke this opportunity to express my gratitude for the rewarding experience that I have enjoyed during my employment.I sincerely wish you could approve of my resignation, and I apologize in advance for any inconvenience thus caused.Sincerely yours,Li Ming 模板2 Dear ,I am sure it will come as no surprise that I wish to resign my position as
.Though I have enjoyed working with you and other colleagues in the company / organization, there are a few reasons that force me to give up my current work.For one thing,.For another,.Moreover / Besides / In addition,.I appreciate the plenty of help and encouragement from you constantly, and I am very sorry for any inconvenience thus caused.I promise that I will stay through the next month to help you find a replacement for my position.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
请求信
模板1: Dear,I am
.I’d like to ask if you have
/ can provide me with the information of.The reasons for my urgent need of
are as follows: 1);2);3).Therefore, I will be much obliged if you can help me.Please feel free to call me at for further questions.Thank you for your time and patience, and I look forward to your prompt reply.Yours,Li Ming 模板2:
Dear,My name is , and I am
.I have made up my mind to write to you in the hope that you can furnish me with the information regarding.At the present I am preparing / doing , and am in lack of
that is crucial for the work / project / program.Therefore, it would be of great help if I can have your help for
.Please get back to me at your earliest convenience as I have to
soon.I am praying for your reply with full appreciation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
建议信
模板1: Dear,I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about
in order to.From my point of view,.Also, to you, I highly recommend that.On the one hand,.On the other hand,.Besides, it is unnecessary for you to.Consequently, I believe that.I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear,I am writing to express my views concerning
.In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us.Meanwhile, I also want to make some advice to better.Firstly, we have found that.Secondly, we want to.Finally, we hope that.I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals.Thanks in advance for that.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
求职信
模板1:
To Whom It May Concern,I have learnt from yesterday’s newspaper that you are employing
.I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position, and beg to state my qualifications as follows:
I am
years old, a
major student of
University / College.During my academic years, I“have shown excellent performance and have been awarded first-class scholarship each year.In addition to my educational background, I have the rich work experience in the fields of
.Therefore, I believe I can be of value to your company.Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be glad to call at your office if you desire an interview.Thank you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear,I learned from my university BBS that there is a vacancy for , a position which I am very interested in.I am a senior student from University, majoring in
.Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I develop a special interest in
.Moreover, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field due to my internship at.It seems to me that all these have prepared me ideally for the role of
in such a company as yours.For further information please refer to my attached resume.I should be please to attend for an interview at your convenience.Yours sincgrely,Li Ming
道歉信
模板1:过去没有完成的事情 Dear,I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to.The reason is that
.I am sorry that I cannot finish
in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by ? If so, I will put everything else aside to.I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2:将来不能做的事情 Dear,Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to.It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by
which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your
.Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your
.I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? I hope to see you soon.I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
感谢信
模板1: Dear,I should like this message to be taken as an expression of heartfelt gratitude to you and.If it had not been for your assistance in giving me aid and , I fear that.During the , you have given me generous help and continuous guidance by.Thus, I really appreciate , and I hope that I may repay your kindness by.Finally, I feel most obliged to thank you once more.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear,On behalf of , I would like to extend our most sincere gratitude for.We appreciate greatly your aid in not only , but also.It is said that your
that we could enjoy such a wonderful trip / arrive at such splendid achievements, and we will never forget your painstaking labor and full cooperation / warm hospitality.With this letter we would also like to formally invite you to , so that
.WE look forwards to hosting you
.With personal regards.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
申请信
模板1:
To Whom It May Concern,I would like to apply for the master’s program in
department of your university, an opportunity that I have dreamed since.To briefly introduce myself, I am a senior student majoring in
from
University.During my undergraduate study I have demonstrated excellent academic ability, which is reflected in my grades and accomplishment.I have attached to this letter my resume, a complete transcript, and three recommendation letters.I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly consider my application.If you require more information, please feel free to contact me at.Looking forwards to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear Prof.:
I am a senior student in the Department of , University of
.My major interests are , and I understand your university has a good program in those fields.Therefore, I would like to apply for a place at your graduate school.It would be great if you can mail me copies of the required application forms.Meanwhile, K also would like to apply for a scholarship, so could you please send me this application form as well?
Your assistance will be highly appreciated.I am looking forwards to hearing from you.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
投诉信
模板1:
Dear Manager,Last week I bought
at your store and when I got it home it did not work at all.When I tried to return it to the store, I was told that I could not get refunded.The sign in your store says that money is returned within 7 days of purchase if any problem exists, and I did that within the said time.Thus I insist that I should have my money back by return the to you store。If I do not receive any satisfying response, I will further complain to the Consumer Protection Association.Yours,Li Ming 模板2:
To Whom It May Concern,I am writing to complain about the poor service of your
I received when.The reasons for my dissatisfaction lie upon three points as follows: 1);2);3).Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to.I am sure that you are able to thoroughly understand my discontent, which you are bound to replace with a satisfactory solution.I would be grateful if you could
as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
询问信
模板1: Dear,I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide some information regarding.Currently, I am doing
/ planning
/ organizing , and am in urgent need of the following things.First of all,.Secondly,.Thirdly,.I would also like to inquire if.If so, could you please.Your prompt attention would be highly appreciated, and thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear,I am , and I would like to have some information about.At the present, I am doing
and I intend to
.Therefore, I should be very obliged if you would kindly furnish me with details concerning
.Other than that, I also need.I am expecting your reply with heartfelt appreciation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 邀请信 模板1: Dear,I will be holding
at
on
in order to
.As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to join us in
and share our joy.The occasion will start at , and activities include , and
.In addition, there will be
.I am sure you will enjoy a good time.My family would feel honored by your presence.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear ,On behalf of , I would like to invite you to visit our university / my hometown for.It would give us great pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the topic of
during the visit, because
.I am sure that it would be immensely beneficial to
if.During your stay in , we would like to offer you with , , which is free of charge, and.We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
祝贺信
模板1: Dear,Congratulations on your
.I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to.What’s more, I also believe that.May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2: Dear,Good news travels fast!It was delightful for me to hear that.Please accept my sincere congratulations to your.I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in.Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded
in every respect.Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future
.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
英语小作文模板
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英语小作文模板(自写)
一、建议信 Dear Sir or Madam I am a and I am writing to make some suggestions as to.I would like to suggest first that with the help of we can Besides if you we would be able to.And finally I think that.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration,and your prompt attention to my suggestionswould be highly appreciated.Sincerely yours Li Ming
二、求职信(1)Dear Sir or Madam I’m writing this letter to apply for the position as advertised inof.My qualifications I believe just amply meet your requirements.In the first place my majorensures that my educational background is right in line with this job.In the second placemy previous experience as a职位has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here please refer to my attached resume for more details.I would appreciation it very much if you could schedule an interview.If you want to know more about me please feel free to contact me at.Thank you for considering my application.Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours Li Ming 求职信(2)Dear Sir or Madam I’m writing this letter to apply for the position ofadvertised in.In时间I will graduate fromwith adegree inand I would like to be considered for the post.I believe I can do satisfactory work for your company/firm because my education and work experience have been in line with the requirements you outlined in your ad.As indicated in my attached resume my main degree courses are concerned with----.And I have also taken other courses(such as----).The fact that I’m qualified for the job is confirmed not only by my achievement in study but also by the experience I gained when I worked part time for a××× company those years.As for my English ability.I have already passed CET-6.If you also feel that I am up to the post I would be available for an interview any time at your convenience.I would greatny appreciate any word you might send me regarding my application.Sincerely yours
Li Ming
三、投诉、批评、抱怨信Dear Sir or Madam My name is I am a I write this letter to place a complaint against.The reasons of the complaint are as follows.First.Second.Finally.As a result.I honestly hope that you would look into this matter and take steps toso that.Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely yours Li Ming 附:I really appreciate it if you would and could do something about my complaint.I’m looking forward to an improvement.四、致歉信Dear Sir or Madam I’m writing this letter to apologize to you.I am excessively sorry that(I do know that it is very impolite of me to do that and must have caused you much trouble.)I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile.However I wish you not to misunderstand me.The reason for my delay/absence was that.I had no way out because.Therefore it’s not in my power to 导致的结果.I do hope that you would be kind enough to I am looking forward to hearing from your generous forgiveness.Sincerely yours Li Ming 附:Anyway I feel so sorry for what had happened I will make compensation for your loss as best as I can.五、感谢信Dear Sir or Madam I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks for.I’d like you to know how much your
meant to me.You have a positive genius for 对收信人某一方面赞美.I not only enjoyed but also.I shall ever remember this gift/the time we got together as one of the most precious things/valuable moments in my life.I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.I repeat my thanks again for your.Sincerely yours Li Ming 附:结尾段
1.You have been more than kind and I won’t ever forget it.My love and deepest gratitude now and always!2.Would you kindly let me know what time you are at convenience? I will feel very pleased if you have time to make me a lall.How nice it would be to see you again and I am looking forward to seeing you next time!
六、求学信Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study intoward Master/Doctor degree in your university.My name isan undergraduate/a postgraduate student of the Department of University.I will graduate and get mydegree.I plan to continue my study in this field under the instructions of first-class professors and in dynamic atmosphere I closebecause you have plenty of famous professors and sophisticated research facilities I believe I can benefit a lot by pursuing my studies
in such universit{.And my academic background will meet your requirements for the intensive study I would be very grateful if you would send me the necessary forms and other relevant information.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours Li Ming
七、邀请信Dear Sir or Madam On behalf of I would be very pleased to invite you to infrom to.You are a Your participation /lecture/help will be.We sincerely hope that you could accept our invitation.As you know this is the and we plan to make it a truly success.I/We would appreciate it if you would give me a reply at your earliest convenience so that the necessary arraggements can be made without delay.We are looking forward to your acceptance.Sincerely yours Li Ming
八、祝贺信Dear Sir or Madam I have learned with delight that you.I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on.You must be very proud of your.And I feel very happy for you.成绩is quite exciting news!You are really.I know this is surely owing to 努力.It is a reward you richly deserve for your优点.With your 优秀品质,I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you will be a success in whatever you undertake.My best wishes for your further success.Sincerely yours Li Ming
九、推荐信Dear Sir or Madam It is my great honor to recommend to you.A worthy candidat/student for of your college.I have known him/her for he/she has过去的学习或工作sine时间起点.showed.He/She is very interested inand does a good job in it.I am impressed by his/her.He/She dispnays a.He/She is enthusiastic cooperative and cheerful.With this good character he/she will be able to.I strongly feel thatis fully qualified to.Your favourable consideration of his/her application will be highly appreciated.I look forward to your reply early.Sincerely yours Li Ming 英语大作文模板(自写)
一、有用句型: 1.大作文开始段:
It is depicted/shown/described in the picture that......The about two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other the first one show us that-But the other depicted that.The two picture show us that.The cartoon is fairly enlightening and thought-provoking which intends to convey to us this message:.We can easily identify/recognize the significance of diligence in term of achieving success.On the one hand.On the other.Without.It is advisable that we highly valueand apply it in our study life and work.Examples to prove the view are too numerous to mention.2.大作文结尾段:(问题型)If nothing is done to check this problem its effects will soon”be shown.Which will inevitable hinder the steady development of a harmonious society.Therefore drastic measures must be taken to arouse public’s attention to this issue.As you as I am concerned the proper attitude towardsis that.In the first place government of all levels should launch campaigns to educate the public how grave the situation will be if------Take a rational attitude towards.Enhance one’s awareness in environmental protection be aware of.Relevant laws and regulations must be set up to severely punish those who/stop.A long-term and nation-wide campaign must be launched to popularize the importance ofamong the general public.(意义型)
Concrete plans should be made so as to combine The Long March Spirit with every detail of our life work and study.It is universally accepted/acknowledged thatis a traditional virtue/positive phenomenon which should be accepted respected appreciated and advocated.3.例证大作文很有用的例证:
Libai’s story in filling an iron stick into a needle is a case in point.(奋斗篇)
We know that at Einstein’s time Newton’s theory about the universe is well established.According to Newton time and space are absolute and never changing.Unlike many scientists who accepted Newton’s theory easily Einstein tracked a new way and proved the relativity of time and space and set up the epoch-setting theory of relativity.(创新篇)
Dengjiaxian who succeeded in making the atom bomb and H-bomb under very harsh conditions and it is the faith that works.*信念篇)
Edison In searching for the right material for electronic bulb he tested thousands of materials and failed again and again.But after each failure he always said that he had found another material not to be used for bulb instead of.Due to his outstanding perseverance he found the right material for electronic bulb at last and brought a revolution to the whole world.(毅力,勤奋篇)
Marie Curies the finder of the element radium.In searching for the element she worked hard without considering her own comfort.In the end she makes such splendid progress in her career and is respected by the whole world.(奉献篇)
Isaac Newton as we know that he laid the foundation for modern physics but when being praised for his achievement Newton said he had done nothing but standing on the shoulder of the former scholars。(谦虚篇)
二、作文模板:
现状+原因+评论篇 From the picture we can see clearly that(As we can see clearly from the picture).It is safe to draw the conclusion that主题.There are many reasons to explain the effect/phenomenon/case/instance and the following are the typical ones.The first reason is that.The second reason is that.The third reason is that.In order to improve the situation/confronted with such an issue/.We are supposed to find several
measures.On the one hand.On the other hand.Only in this way can.描述+举例+评论篇 It is shown /depicted /described in the picture that描述.As is symbdicaly revealed in the pictures 生活中的意义.we can safely come to a conclusion that对寓意引申归纳.There are many examples found to prove that 主题句.Take _________as atypical example__________/The first example is that__________.Opposite case in point is that/The second example is that________.Therefore/Only _____ can段落总结主题句.In order to improve the situation To sum up the above argument/Confronted with such an issue We should find several solutions to is/need to tale some positive measures.On the one hand.On the other hand.Only in this way can 段落总结句.原因分析型
What"a vivid picture!From it we can see clearly that.Obviously the drawer of this picture intends to convey to us this message: To the best of my knowledge several reason cam be identified and the following are the typical ones.The first reason is that.The second reason is that.Last but not least.Considering all the points discussed above it is sensible that we take effective and adequate measures to solve this problem.In the first place _______In the second place __________.Only by enforcing these measures can we effectively and eventually resolve the problem therefore a more harmonious society built up.附: And only in this way can we crack the hard nut and make our society develop in a dynamic/ vibrantharmonious and prosperous direction/way.In the first place government of all levels should launch campaigns to educate the public how grave the situation will be if……
例文 With the fast are pale of modern life more and more people.Some people are afraid of pres
2009年考研英语作文模板
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2009年考研英语作文模板
大作文
模板一:图画作文
This illustration depicts_________(图画中的人物)Ving, with______________(补充说明).Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释)
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明).He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节).In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述).This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在).One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一).It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明).On the other hand, ________________(建议二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).模板二:图表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题).The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点).This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一).After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化).The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二).(数据位置,如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)./ It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)
模板三:利弊型作文
Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_________.For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一).For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二).But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点).For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明).In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)
When asked to __________, I tend to ____________.This is because I _______________(原因一).Furthermore, _______________________(原因二).Finally, ______________(原因三).模板四:展望未来型
With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象).However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题).As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响).The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First , __________________(影响一).More importantly, ________________(影响二).Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)
There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more(比较级).In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)
小作文
1:投诉信
Dear_______,I am.(自我介绍)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍).In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面).In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
2:询问信
Dear ______,I am _________________________(自我介绍).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)
First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一个问题)Secondly, when
will________________________________?(第二个问题)Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段).Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
3:请求信
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
4:道歉信
Dear ___________,I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因)Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
6:建议信
Dear ___________,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建议的内容)
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
7.求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间).Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称).In the one hand,_______________________________(第一个原因).On the other hand, __________________________________(另一个原因).Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(电话号码)
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
8:邀请信
Dear________,There will a ________________(内容)at/in________________(地点)on___________(时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间).This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排).At around______(时间),____________________________(另一个安排)
I really hope you can make it.RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
【题目要求】
51. Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【题目类型】
2007年小作文延续了2005和2006年的考试要求,继续考查事务信函。由于其他应用文模式太过灵活,不便统一命题或评分,书信始终是各类考试考官最偏爱的题型。在考查过辞职信和申请信后,本次改换成了信函主题的另一种类型:建议信。建议信的写法往往和大作文的第三段——建议措施段类似,即向某个特定单位提出业务或服务改进的建议。但给考生一定灵活度,可以自由发挥建议的内容。
【审题构思】
本题要求设定的收信对象为图书馆,因此明确为事务信函,按照惯例需要文字较正式。题目中暗示信息很少,只有三个线索:图书馆、提建议、提高服务质量。实际上信息越少,限制控制越少,考生灵活发挥的空间就越大,可以从多方面提出不同的建议,只要合理就能满足题目要求。
信函仍然可以通过三部分展开,在第一段中,直接点明主题,开门见山说出意图,可以笼统地提出图书馆服务质量不尽如人意,有待改善提高。第二段则要发挥想象力,从2~3个方面点出可以改进的地方。当然,简单的思路可以立即展开,问题可以多种多样,如没有保安、办证繁琐、不提供开水、工作人员态度冷漠、空调失灵、卫生条件差、取书速度慢、卡片编号混乱等,针对这些问题提出建议即可。当然,也可以稍微具体和深入一点,联想到流通中心缺乏咨询台,学生借不到最新的外文期刊,某些读者在阅览室吸烟和聊天,没有人维持秩序等。当然,大多数考生会围绕着最容易想到的工作人员服务态度差展开论述,考官难免会感到“审美疲劳”,我们不妨找具体一些的建议展开。最后一段应当以套用经典句型来结束,由于提出建议的目的是让对方高度重视和解决,不能批评过度或语气太生硬,我们往往用感谢、希望和期待来结束。
【推荐范文】
Dear sir or madam, (To whom it may concern,)
I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for improving the service of our university library. Although our library functions effectively in providing academic materials and enriching our campus life, its service goes far from being desired. In my eyes the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.
Firstly, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? With the help of a professional librarian, students can find information more efficiently. In addition, students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines. It’sinadequate to provide merely back issues in the periodical room. Lastly, you’d better maintain strict order in the reading room. I frequently find myself disturbed by certain students chatting and smoking there.
I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration,and I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◆ 译 文:
尊敬的先生/女士:
我写此信的目的是为了提几个建议,提高我校图书馆的服务质量。尽管我校图书馆在提供学习资料和丰富校园生活方面发挥了有效的作用,但服务却远不尽如人意。在我看来,需要尽快采取以下几个措施:
首先,为什么不在借阅大厅安排一个咨询台呢?如果有专业图书管理员的指导,学生们可以更加高效地查找信息。此外,学生们应当能够借阅最新外文期刊。在期刊阅览室中只提供过刊是不够的。最后一点,您最好严格维持阅览室的秩序,本人就有数次在那里受到聊天和吸烟的学生干扰。
我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议, 并且期望尽快收到您的回信。
李明
【语言分析】
从本次考试的命题来看,考研对信函格式的要求很低,专门提示不用写具体姓名和地址,而信函格式最讲究的就是地址的写法。其实,我们只要把握最基本的开头和结束语就可以了。由于收信人姓名不详,开头可以参照常用写法:Dear sir or madam/To whom it may concern,而结束语可以用Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely等等。
范文中构架清晰,框架语言包括开头的I am writing this letter for the purpose of,以及建议措施段中的firstly,in addition和lastly。信函在项目排序上讲究语言简洁明了,让收信人直接看到要点,因此不用考虑太复杂的词组。结尾的语言“I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration,and I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.”属于黄金表达,用起来专业、自然。此外,本文在另外两个语域中进行尝试,一为图书馆术语,包括inquiry desk、circulation hall、professional librarian、latest issues、back issues、periodical room、reading room;第二个层面是议论文词组,包括for the purpose of、go far from being desired、in my eyes、take measures、have access to、maintain strict order、take into consideration、look forward to;句型表达上,“I frequently find myself disturbed by certain students chatting and smoking”一句中同时设置过去分词和现在分词,在语法上增加了难度和特色。
Part B 大作文部分
【题目要求】
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) support your view with an example/examples.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
【题目类型】
不出所料,2007年大作文继续考查难度颇大的图画作文,通过一个足球赛的关键场面来说明自信的重要性。考前我在网站上发表的一篇“考研写作命题的五大浅规则”中,论述了“和谐社会”命题公式中的三个层次,其中第一个层次是个人和谐发展,推荐的五个参考题目中第一个就是“自信的重要性”,那么这次的考题“不幸”被我推理言中了。只不过没想到命题专家居然在2005和2006年后第三次利用了与足球有关的画面,前两年考过了养老和偶像崇拜,这次通过球赛来说明自信的重要。
【审题构思】
命题中提供的信息比往年有所减少,比如题目(title)的缺失,对题目说明的文字也没有提供,而图画下面的说明语也没有。除了一个简单提纲框架就只剩下图画了,因此考生的现场推理能力和对命题惯性思路的把握能力非常重要。
图画作文往往有两种表现形式,讽刺漫画需要给出解决措施和建议,而歌颂性漫画需要说明一个道理,让考生推理并举例论证。这次命题似乎在把两种模式相融合。漫画中表现出球员缺乏自信的问题,反面说明了树立自信在生存和竞争中的重要性。那么就不需要提出建议了,直接举例说明自信极为重要就可以。
根据提纲要点,作文可分为三段。首段仍然是描述图画信息,先说明是场足球赛,之后进入射门球员和守门员的细节描述。射门球员在关键时刻把对手想象得过于高大,以至于自己很难把球射进;而守门员把自己想象得太渺小,球门到处都是漏洞,似乎自己守门成功无望。显然,两个人都因紧张而失去了自信。第二段可以从足球赛引申到我们的生活,生活节奏加快、竞争激烈、考试残酷而就业艰难,种种挑战都需要我们树立自信心,如果总是高估问题和对手而看轻自己的实力,我们就无法成功。按照提纲要求,第三段举一个和多个例子都可以。在自信方面刘翔是中国人都知道的例子,他因自信而百战百胜,创造了世界记录。考生也能自然想到自己的奋斗,没有自信考研无法成功。也可以举反面的例子,某某如何缺乏自信而导致失败,当然作文的惯例是在结尾走向正面总结,强调自信确实非常重要。
【推荐范文】
This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a football game with the two rivals facing each other. The striker on one team is preparing to make a decisive shoot while the goal-keeper on the opposite team is posing for defence. However, under overwhelming pressure both of them are losing their confidence. The striker magnifies the goal-keeper in his mind so that chances of shooting the ball by him are slim. Likewise, the goal-keeper minimizes his own image as if he couldn’t defend the goal successfully.
◆ 译 文:
这幅漫画幽默地呈现了足球赛的一个场面,两个对手正在面对面较量。其中一个队的射门球员正准备做出决定性的射门动作,而对手球队守门员也摆出了防御的姿势。然而,在巨大的压力之下,两个人的信心都在丧失。射门球员头脑中放大了守门员的形象,以至于射进的可能性几乎不存在。同样,守门员把自己想得很小,似乎他无法成功地守住球门。
Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of self-confidence in our daily life. On account of the quickening pace of life, competition becomes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. The past few years have witnessed a dramatic increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment. We must maintain self-confidence and optimism in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed. Suppose we are inclined to overestimate our rivals or problems and neglect our ability, we will become hesitating and doubtful of ourselves, unable to fulfill even a simple task. Therefore, it is necessary to embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable.
◆ 译 文:
图画的目的明显是要强调自信在日常生活中的重要性。由于生活节奏加快,各行各业的竞争变得日益激烈,给所有人都造成了强大的压力。过去几年中,考试和就业的难度都在急剧增加。我们面对挑战,必须怀有强大的自信和乐观才能求得生存和成功。假如我们习惯于高估竞争对手和问题,并且忽视自己的能力,我们就会变得犹豫不决、怀疑自己, 甚至简单的事情也办不成。因此,我们有必要坚信自己能够百折不挠。
A case in point is the star hurdler, Liu Xiang. He invariably imagines that he can win every hurdle race, never shrinking in front of other experienced players. That’swhy he works wonders again and again. As for me, I am participating in the graduate school admission examination with thousands of competitors. Having prepared sufficiently for one year, I have powerful self-assurance that I can cruise to my dream university. As the saying goes, our only enemy is ourselves. Only by building strong self-confidence can we demonstrate grace under pressure and turn our dreams into reality.
◆ 译 文:
一个恰当的例子是跨栏明星刘翔。他总是想象自己每场比赛都能胜出,面对其他经验丰富的选手时从不退缩,因此他一次又一次地创造了奇迹。对于我本人来说,我正在和成千上万的竞争者一起参加研究生入学考试。在充分复习了一年以后,我深信我能成功地考上梦想中的学校。正如谚语所说,我们惟一的敌人是我们自己。只有树立强大的自信,我们才能在压力之下毫无惧色并且把梦想变成现实。
【语言分析】
以上范文在内容、结构、用词和句型方面都有所设计,基本达到了高分作文所追求的效果。
从内容上看,图画描述部分步步深入,语言充实。意义阐释部分把自信的重要性通过正面和反面进行了论证,最后一段提到了刘翔和考研勇士的自信,正面强调了自信在竞争中的巨大作用。
从结构上看,第一段由表面到细节,分别描述两个球员的攻防状态和丧失自信的心理变化,描述部分进行了细节对比和语言均衡分配,达到了充分描述的目的。第二段采取了起承转合的构造法,即点明寓意——原因现状说明——反面论证——正面总结的结构,使得意义得到透彻的说明,语言饱满。第三段举了两个例子,各用两三句概括。通过他人和自己的正面体验,表达自信的重要,最后再次总结全文,烘托主题。
从用词上看,首先是描述段表现足球赛的用词,分别提到了对手(rival)、射门球员(striker)、射门(shoot)、守门员(goal-keeper)、对方球队(opposite team)、防守姿态(pose for defence)、球门(goal)、守门(defend the goal)等专门术语和表达。其次,作文中使用的特色表达如放大(magnify)、缩小(minimize)、百折不挠(indomitable)、总是(invariably)等,使语言增大了难度。用词在广度上也进行了拓展,在强调“自信”主题时,先后分别使用了self-confidence、optimism、embrace strong faith、self-assurance等表达;而巨大的压力和强大的自信,则分别使用了形容词overwhelming、tremendous、dramatic、strong、powerful;竞争者则用了rivals和 competitors。文中的几个词组各具特色, slim chances、maintain self-confidence、work wonders、cruise to在不同段落中点缀,加强了语言的亮点。
从句型上看,有三类句型别具特色。首先是结构性句型,三段的段首句有效架起了文章构架,再加上however、on account of、therefore、as for me等短语,起到了承上启下的作用。第二类是语法难句,包括虚拟句——as if he couldn’t...(第一段)和倒装句——The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase...(第二段);Only by building strong self-confidence can we...(第三段)。第三类是起到画龙点睛作用的谚语和名言。在文章结尾,首先借用了一句家喻户晓的谚语来烘托主题“As the saying goes, our only enemy is ourselves”,最后提到了著名强者作家海明威的名言“show grace under pressure”,成功总结了自信带来的巨大作用。
作者简介
以四大块为主体,每次可以从中抽出一些成分组成文章。你要是细心的话,做完10套历年真题,你就会发现这些句子是我从真题中精挑细选出来的,万能啊。引例:
Just as apparently betrayed in the picture/outline above,------.Relating this phenomenon to reality we find this issue does exist today.one case in point is------.Take------as another example.Evidence from------also supports this theme.原因:
What might account for the phenomenon ? For one thing, XXX can be seen as a response to the(economic growth / cultural diversity / fierce competition / necessity of innovation).For another , it is rooted in the development of science and society.Still another factor goes way deeper : chinas reform and opening-up policy / advancement give birth to XXX.作用:
We usually see the XXX as the key role to ones succes / ability / reputation / mature / development of society / personal growth.(1)好处That matters because------.I see betterment is triumphing over adversity.The more XXX ,the better you are going to be.(2)坏处When it comes to the reality ,we have to lose sleep meanwhile bit our nails.XX develop the mind as well as the body.XX help me to finish the work smoothly.XX makes our lives more convenient.XX can help us to meet the requirement of social development.XX enhance ones abilities of learning.XX is the necessity to help adolescents set up spiritual ideals , scientific beliefs and right outlook on life.XX stand up for ones right.XX fulfill ones obligation.以上为对个人的作用(furthermore / meanwhile / likewise)以下为对社会的作用 XX sustain our economic growth.XX increase cultural exchange with other countries.XX maintain social stability.XX protect the environment against pollution and save resource.XX is the urgent need of constructing the harmonious society and promoting the social development.XX is essential to harmonize the relationship between human and nature.XX can enhance ones competitiveness of adapting to globalization.措施:
long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.积极有利型的文章
This pictureshows_________.we can see from the cartoon that _______。The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.As is symbolically revealed in the set of
drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息)profoundly indicates that team work is momentous(重要的)and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future.As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below.To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things.Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient.On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits.On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.However, it is easier said than done.Practice is the most important factor.Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later 开头
This cartoon is silly, and yet compelling: 这幅画很可笑,但引人注目。
The first cartoon that____________,andthe other cartoonshows that__________,theaboveimages______________
那么命题者的基本套路是什么呢?
Directions:
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words in which you should
1.describe the photos briefly,2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and
3.give your point of view.首先给出一幅图画(一般是一个或是两个,很少出现三副图的时候),要求考生首先描述图画的大致情况,然后要求考生对图画进行适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析),最后要求考生给出自己的建议、观点、原因等等。针对于此,我们就可以做出一个基本的写作套路和模版。
大致如下:
第一段:描述图画
1、As is vividly showed in the picture(如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables)above, 图画的内容。The picture(如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables)tells(注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell)usthat 这个图片的大致反映的意思。
2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象,And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years.第二段:解释,说明和分析图片
1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理)should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个)factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason,I think, is that原因3。
第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。
1、In my view/point of view(或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture.First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。
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