英语作文高二范文带翻译(精选11篇)
I hope you didn’t make any plane for this weekend. You know I am moving into the new house, and I sincerely invite you to come to my new house. I will hold a celebration party on Saturday night. The scenery here is fantastic that I am sure you will like it. On Saturday, you can walk around my house after you get here. The party will begin at 7:00. You can live in my house that night. On Sunday, we can go fishing or play table tennis. So please do some preparation for them. You can drive here and you will see a board “Kelly’s Home” near the road. It only takes you one hour to get here. I hope there will be nothing stopping you to come.
Yours affectionately,
Kelly
亲爱的贝蒂:
希望你这个周末没有什么安排!你知道我就要搬到新房了,我真诚的邀请你来我的新房。星期六晚上我会举行一个庆祝晚会。那里的景色漂亮迷人,我相信你一定会喜欢的。星期六到这里后你可以在我家到处看看。晚会将在7点开始,到时候你可以住在我家。你可以开车过来,然后你会看见路边的一块板上写着“凯丽家”。你到这里只需一个小时,我希望你不会有什么事情而不能来。
关键词:高中英语写作训练,书面表达,范文翻译,小组合作
过去, 老师对英语书面表达有所关注, 但指导方法不佳, 时间投入带来的并不是学生高质量的书面表达。相反, 就连基础比较好的学生要写一篇内容较充实、结构较完整、可读性较强的书面表达都存在一定困难。究竟是学生不敢爱书面表达, 还是书面表达爱不起。只要解决这一问题, 就能提高学生的英语书面表达能力。在新课程背景下, 现今的英语教师已都认识到英语书面表达在英语教学中的重要性。在日常英语教学中, 他们对书面表达教学越来越重视。英语书面表达的教学新法不断涌现。我结合日常书面表达教学实践和研究, 旨在探究书面表达教学的有效途径。
一、当前高中书面表达教学简析
1. 当前高中书面表达教学存在的问题
(1) 书面表达布置无的放矢
在日常英语教学过程中, 许多老师虽明白写作的重要性, 但在给学生布置书面表达任务时存在随意性和盲目性———往往拿到什么练习卷就布置什么书面表达, 缺乏系统性, 无的放矢, 事倍功半。
(2) 学生存在消极训练心理
听说读写译各项技能中, 写是高中学生最头疼的一项。所以, 一谈到书面表达, 学生总是表现出排斥和畏惧的心理, 但是为了完成老师布置的任务, 他们又不得不一次次消极地进行训练。反复训练的结果可想而知, 一些学生反而越写越糟。
(3) 书面表达批改后反馈不佳
书面表达批改任务繁重, 许多老师辛辛苦苦地将书面表达批改完, 可是分发下去, 学生只是简单地看看分数和评语, 对于错误不做任何修改就扔到一边。其实, 更多时候学生是不知道怎么修改, 更不用说知道自己到底哪些地方、哪些句子写得好。
(4) 错误“输入强化”
以上教学中存在的所有问题, 在一次次的作文训练中, 会形成错误的强化现象, 与Sharwood Smith提出的“输入强化理论” (1991) 相悖。
“输入强化理论” (Input Enhancement) 的核心是交际活动与改错活动的有机结合。Sharwood Smith指出, 通过“输入强化”, 学习者既可注意在交际过程中忽略的语言现象, 又可使交际过程中的错误输入得到纠正, 提高语言的准确性。然而, 在现实教学中, 许多学生不仅没有改正错误, 习得正确的表达法, 实现“输入强化”, 还使错误在一次又一次训练中强化, 最终出现负面的“输入强化”现象, 错误得到巩固。教师会抱怨学生老是犯同样的错误, 更别指望学生写出优美句子。
2. 当前高中书面表达常见有效的训练法
不同省份的英语书面表达字数要求在120至150个字不等, 似乎仅由十来个句子组成, 而要把这十来个句子写好, 却很有学问。冰冻三尺, 非一日之寒。日常的积累在英语书面表达训练方面有至关重要的作用。写作能力的培养不可能一蹴而就, 我们需要由浅入深、由易到难、由简到繁地进行训练。在英语教师的大家庭里, 所有成员为了学生, 都在积极探索高中书面表达训练的“秘籍”, 渴望我们的弟子能够在师傅这本“武功宝典”指引下练就一身绝世的英语书面表达功夫, 来日闯荡各种英语测试这一“江湖”。
首先, 教材是学生首先接触到的最主要的课程资源, 为学生提供了大量鲜活的语言。课文题材广泛, 体裁多样, 难易程度适中, 适合学生做缩写、仿写、改写、续写及写评论、读后感等练习。这些练习既能使学生巩固已学的课本知识, 加深学生对课文的理解, 又有助于提高学生用英语进行思维和表达的能力。
其次, 美文背诵、句型操练、翻译等方法得到了运用, 发挥了作用。运用这些方法培养出了一大批技艺超群的英语书面表达高手。
3. 范文翻译法出现的背景
根据课标要求, 学生在高中阶段要不断地提高听说读写四项基本技能。整合当前有效的训练方法, 我对书面表达的训练进行了可控制性设计, 目的是让学生在一定的教学目标的指引下进行有效训练。
二、范文翻译法简介
1. 范文的选择
在收集了近十年各省高考书面表达题目及其范文之后, 写出相应的中文版本范文, 按记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文进行分类。针对文体的不同, 将高中英语写作常见的近百个句型分别用在4种文体的35篇范文中进行训练。当然, 选择的范文话题根据课标要求的话题进行整合。
2. 范文翻译实例介绍
某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”, 现对外征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份, 根据提示用英语写一篇短文 (2009年福建高考) 。 (1) 根据思路图适当展开, 使行文连贯; (2) 词数:120左右。
中文范文:
我要微笑
微笑优点很多, 既可以愉悦自己又可以愉悦他人。如果对生活微笑, 生活也会对我们微笑。不论何时何地, 我们要对所有人微笑。
首先, 对父母微笑, 因为他们生我并含辛茹苦把我养大。他们几乎为我安排好了一切。在他们的帮助下, 我取得了巨大的进步。我想微笑地对他们说声“谢谢!”。然后, 我要对自己微笑, 因为只有通过这种方式我才能够笑走麻烦, 过更好的生活。
总之, 让我们笑迎每一天。明天又是崭新的一天。
(1) 翻译前
翻译之前, 我先介绍范文翻译当中会用到的句型供学生使用, 目的在于让学生在翻译中强化句型, 方便今后写作时信手拈来。如下:
句型1:not only...but also...
句型2:only+状语+倒装。
句型3:if等从属连词引导句子的省略。
句型4:would like to do sth.
句型5:without/with+宾语作为条件的句子。
但是并不是简单将句型告之学生。对于每个句型的使用, 利用课堂时间进行事先操练, 提高使用的准确率。
(2) 翻译时
在上交作业之前, 要求小组成员之间用蓝色笔先互改。主要是修改句型、标点和单词拼写的错误。要求批改者签名。互改完后进行二次修改, 然后组长收起上交等待老师批改。
(3) 教师批改
为了解决教师包办而效率低的问题, 对于翻译进行“双改”制。一改老师将学生错误的地方用各种规范的作文批改符号标出。评分并写好评语分给学生进行二改。学生二改要找到互改的那位学生一同修改。之后, 老师利用课后时间进行二改。 (根据不同的学生, 有的进行面批, 有的用录音的方式减少对学生的干扰。) 第二次修改后, 老师与小组成员一起讨论, 进一步修改, 最终形成小组翻译成果。
(4) 成果展示
选出5篇优秀的翻译作品张贴到学习园地。
(5) 后翻译阶段
翻译结束后, 要求小组将成果收集汇总形成“专著”。在积累中成长, 在共同提高中体验学习的快乐。
3. 范文翻译法的辅助提高措施
单一的翻译可能会让学生烦, 特别是基础不好的学生。所以范文翻译还可以采用单句成段法、借用缩写、仿写、改写、续写及写评论、读后感、同声传译法等变换操练。
4. 范文翻译的优缺点
范文翻译法, 能够扎实基础, 稳步提高学生的书面表达能力, 效率高。但是, 由于工作量大、课时要求高, 要求授课教师做好充分的规划并充分调动学生的积极性。
四、结语
范文翻译法还处于研究探索阶段, 但从教学实践的效果来看, 是相当有效的。怎样使该方法成熟并推广, 还有待进一步研究。所谓有心人天不负, 相信在不断深入的过程中能够不断完善该方法。所谓条条大路通罗马, 对于书面表达的教学也没有定法, 关键是一种方法运用好了, 可以让多人受益。
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The English corner, established in Renmin Park three years ago, is in charge of College English Association, which is held regularly on every Friday night from seven to nine. It has a fixed theme each week for people discussing, most of which are related to people’s life or the English speaking countries. Until now, it has become a popular activity in this city, which attracts not only students attend but also many foreigners. In here, people practice their English, make new friends and share their experience of English learning. Many English learners think it’s helpful to take part in this activity and regard it as a supplement to school learning.
英语角三年前成立于人民公园,由大学英语社团管理,每周星期五7点到9点举行。每周都有一个固定的主题给大家讨论,大部分是与人们的生活或者说英语的国家有关。到现在,它已经成为这座城市受欢迎的一项活动,不仅吸引了学生还吸引了很多外国人来参加。在这里,人们可以练习他们的英语,结交新朋友以及分享英语学习经验。很多英语学习者认为参加这项活动很有用,并且把它看做是学校学习的一种补充。
【篇一】英语介绍信范文带翻译
20** Singapore Road,Oct.10,1999
Dear Mr.Lee,As I am leaving for New York immediately to pursue higher education,I shall be very grateful for a letter of introduction to your brother The-Sheng who,I u nderstand,is now studying at Columbia University.I like very much to make the acquaintance of him who,I understand,has sojourned in the United States for qu ite a number of years and knows that country very well.I am sure I shall benefi t immensely by his advice and guidance when I arrive at that American city,whic h is entirely strange to me.I plan to study at Columbia University during the f irst year of my stay in the United States and hope to approach your brother for detailed information regarding the entrance requirements of that institution if I can have the pleasure of meeting him.With kind regards,Yours sincerely,Y.Chow
译文
20**年新加坡的道路,20**年10月10日,亲爱的李先生,在我即将前往纽约接受高等教育的时候,我将非常感激一封介绍信给你的兄弟,我现在正在哥伦比亚大学学习。我非常喜欢与他相识,我了解,他已经在美国逗留了很多年,对这个国家非常了解。我相信,当我到达那个美国城市时,他的建议和指导会给我带来极大的好处。我计划在美国停留期间在哥伦比亚大学学习,希望能与你的兄弟联系,了解有关该机构入学要求的详细信息,如果我能有幸见到他的话。
此致敬礼,你的真诚,Y.Chow
【篇二】英语介绍信范文带翻译
Dear sir or madame,it is with great pleasure that i write to recommend courtney alexander to you.i have known courtney for the pst two years and have had the pleasure of having her in my united states history class during her junior.in the class she ws one of the most outstanding students.at the semester final she earned high grade of 91,which should be “a” according to our grading system.i also found her good at other studies.after classes,she had personal talks with me many times.she indicated a great interest in teching.during tht time i found her to be a bright,diligent,friendly youn woman.besides,courtney is not afraid of hard work,and is a team plyer.her ability to work with her clssmates is a special quality that will benefit her as she moves on to the next level.throughout the year,she worked cooperatively with those seated around her in reviewing notes,going over possible examination materials,and working through some of the more difficult concepts.through her contributions to my class,the promissing young girl helped not only herself,but also others around her who were not progressing and improving as quickly as she could.courtney alexander is undoubtedly a student with the potential for great success at the next level.in my opinion,courtney alexander was born a teacher,which can be further developed and she is sure to give all of you a big surprise in the years to come.so i enthusistically recommend her for admission to your university.if you have any questions or concerns in regards to courtney,plese feel free to contact me at **********.thank you for your time.sincerly,亲爱的先生/女士,我怀着极大的荣幸写这封信向你们推荐我的学生坎特雷 亚历山大。我认识坎特雷有两年了。在她读高中二年级时,能在我开设的美国历史课中成为我的学生真的是我难得的荣幸。在我的这个班上,她是最突出的学生之一。在学期末的考试中,她得到了91分的高分,按照我们的评分制度,应该定会为“a”级。除此以外,我还发现她在其它的学习中也有不俗的表现。她与我子课外有过多次的私下交谈。她曾表示出她对教育这个职业有极浓厚的兴趣。在与我相处的一年中,我发现她是一位聪明、勤奋、对人友善的女青年。而且,坎特雷并不害怕艰苦。她也是一位具有团队精神的人。她与她的同学相互合作的能力是她特殊的个人素质,这个素质使她在以后的学习期间获益不少。在这整整一年中,她一直都没有忽视与坐在她周围的那些人共同合作,复习笔记,复习考试可能要考察的资料,以及一齐攻克非常难已解决的难题。通过她对班上的贡献,这位很有前途的年轻姑娘不仅帮助了他自己,而且也帮助了她周围的那些本来没有她一样快的取得进步的同学。毫无疑问,坎特雷 亚历山大是一位很有潜力在以后的学习中取得巨大成功的好学生。就我个人看来,坎特雷 亚历山大是一位天生就适合做教师的人。她的这一能力很容易得到进一步开发。在以后的年月里,她一定会给大家带来惊喜的。所以,在此,我热情地把她推荐给你们学校录取。
如果你们有什么问题或者与坎特雷有关的事情,请随时通过如下电话与我联系。电话:***********。谢谢。
【篇三】英语介绍信范文带翻译
Dear Mr.Johnson,I take great pleasure in introducing Mary Brown one of my classmates and best friends to you.She is going to pursue her education as a postgraduate in your university after her graduation here.She and I had lived and studied together for four years.No friend deserves so much love and respect as she does.Now that we have finished our study here we had to part with each other.Will you please give her some guidance in regard to the entrance examination? Any information you can provide,as well as your introduction for him to meet the future tutor shall be appreciated very much.Yours truly,**
译文
亲爱的约翰逊先生:
很高兴地向您介绍我的同学也是我的好朋友,xxx。她毕业后想继续到你们学校读研究生介绍信范文英语作文介绍信范文英语作文。我们在一起生活和学习了四年。没有一个比她更好的朋友,可是马上要毕业了,我们也不得不面对分离。
你可以给她提供一些有关入学考试的信息吗?你如果能给她提供一些信息,能帮她安排和导师见面的话,我将非常感谢。
您真挚的:
I want to give you some advice. Would you mind giving us more PE classes? So we can have a goood time everyday. And can we have less homework everyday?It is too much to finish on time. Third, could you let us to leave school eraly? It is too late when we get home.
If you can think about my advice, I would be very glad.
Yours,
David.
亲爱的学校;
我想要给你提一些建议。你介意给我们更多的体育课吗?这样我们每天就会玩得很快乐了。我们每天能少一点作业吗?现在太多了,很难按时完成。第三,你能让我们放学早点吗?当我们回到家时,太晚了。
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将非常高兴。
People kill pigs and sheep. They are busy preparing for the Spring Festival.
When the Spring Festival arrived, the children got up early, came to their parents room, and began the traditional New Years ceremony. The children said some auspicious words to their parents, and their parents took out new years money to make the children happy. We all hope that this year will be auspicious and auspicious.
Some relatives and friends gathered together, tasted good wine and food, and talked about some happy things. And the happiest thing is that we can save a lot of money for new years Eve, and then run to the street happily to buy a lot of fun things, such as cars, four-wheel drive cars, toy guns, football, etc., while we just need to have a sweet mouth and say more blessings, then we can make a lot of money!
People play till midnight, with delicious fruits in their mouths and firecrackers in their hands Adults and children sing and dance and have a good time!
盼啊!盼啊,眼看春节就快到了,想到这,我不由得笑了起来,在春节前,人们个个喜气洋洋,个个精神饱满。逛街的人络绎不绝,有的在买年画,有的在买年货,有的坐着火箱围着火炉看电视,还有的人在打麻将打扑克,等等不一而足。
人们杀猪宰羊,忙碌地准备着春节大吃大喝一番。
春节到了,小朋友们便早早起床,来到爸爸妈妈的房间,开始了传统的拜年仪式了。小朋友们对父母说着一些吉祥话儿,爸妈就拿出压岁钱,让小孩子们高高兴兴。大家都希望今年能够吉祥如意,招财进宝。
一些亲朋好友欢聚一堂,品尝着美酒佳肴,谈着一些开心的话儿。而最高兴的则是我们,可以大把大把地攒取压岁钱,然后就欢天喜地跑到街上去买很多好玩的东西,如小汽车、四驱车、玩具枪、足球等,而我们只要嘴巴甜一点,多说些祝福的话儿,那可就大赚一笔了!
考试前怎么样复习? How to Review Before Examination?
The result of examination is important for students. The score of exam is not only related to the students’ usual effort, but also has business of the review before taking the exam. How to review before exam? According to my own experience, I have three suggestions. First, control your emotion well. Do not too nervous or too confident, just keep a normal mind. Secondly, try you best to review the exercise you have done before, but do not do new exercise, especially the difficult part. Third, read the knowledge in the book, because all the exams are from books. This is my suggestion.
考试的结果对于学生来说是很重要的。分数不仅与学生平时的努力有关,也和考前复习有关系。考前如何复习?根据我自己的经验,我有三点建议。第一,控制好你的情绪。不要太紧张也不要过于自信,只要保持平常心就可以了。其次,尽你最大的努力去复习你以前做过的练习,但是不要做新的练习了,特别是比较难的那部分。第三,看书上的知识,因为所有的考试都是来自书中的。这就是我的建议。
Time flies like an arrow. Half a semester has passed in a twinkling of an eye. Grandpa winter took Miss Qiu. Grandpa winter dressed the earth as a world wrapped in silver. The long-awaited spring is coming soon. When I think of spring, I cant help smiling.
盼星星,盼月亮,终于春节就要到了。
Looking forward to the stars, looking forward to the moon, and finally the Spring Festival is coming.
离春节还有30天,我就开始盼春节。真恨不得今天就是春节盼春节作文300字盼春节作文300字。我盼春节的理由很简单可以穿新裤子和新衣服;可以那到大把大把的压岁钱。还可以享受美食……
With 30 days left for the Spring Festival, I began to look forward to it. I wish today is the Spring Festival. I wish I could write 300 words for the Spring Festival. The reason why I am looking forward to the Spring Festival is simple: I can wear new pants and clothes; I can spend a lot of money on New Years Eve. You can also enjoy delicious food
春节,可以舒舒服服在家里睡懒觉,每天早上睡到9点。平时为了读书都必须6点半起床。热乎乎的被窝已成了“我的梦想地盘”。
During the Spring Festival, you can sleep in at home, and sleep until 9 oclock every morning. Usually in order to read, we have to get up at 6:30. The warm quilt has become my dream place.
春节,见了老亲戚,他们都会说:“哎呀,穿得挺漂亮的,又长高了一截。”每年春节 ,我总是能拿到许多压岁钱。每晚我都会躲在被窝里数钱。奶奶给了200元,三姑妈给了100元 ,大姑妈给了100元 ……去年拿了1000元 ,不知道今年能拿多少元 ,希望比去年拿的更多。虽说离春节还有一个月,我早就开始分配这些钱了。200元给爸爸和妈妈买个小礼物,其它归我私人所有,买些书、小饰品。
During the Spring Festival, when I met with my old relatives, they would all say, “Oh, Im very well dressed, and Ive grown taller.” Every Spring Festival, I always get a lot of lucky money. Every night I hide under the covers and count the money. Grandma gave 200 yuan, aunt gave 100 yuan, aunt gave 100 yuan Last year I got 1000 yuan. I dont know how much I can get this year. I hope I can get more than last year. Although its a month before the Spring Festival, Ive already begun to distribute the money. 200 yuan for father and mother to buy a small gift, the rest belongs to me, buy some books, trinkets.
春节你快点来临吧,我想死你了。
The girl is also helping other people to finish their task. She is like an angel and everybody likes her. In my eye, a real princess should look like this. The good characters makes a person stand out, we see the beautiful soul.
在父母的眼里,他们的女儿是公主,所以每个女孩子都有成为公主的梦想。但是大部分女孩受到父母的溺爱,变得无礼和懒惰。“公主”这个词看起来不是形容女孩 的好词。我在真人秀中看到了一个真正的公主,她天真无邪,虽然她的爸爸帮助她实现公主的梦想,但是她从来不傲慢。
当我们身处国外 When We Are In Foreign Countries
Recently, I saw a video, it was about how the foreigners thought about Chinese tourists. As Chinese economy develops fast, the life standard has improved greatly, a lot of people have money to travel abroad. The foreign media reported the crazy situation that Chinese tourists created. They bought a lot of things and promoted the economy. In the foreigners’ eyes, Chinese tourists are rich, but at the same time, they were annoyed by the acts from Chinese tourists. Some of them would like to write some words in the tourist sites and some people would spit anytime and anywhere. They felt bad about it. When we are in the foreign countries, what we do somehow presents the image of our motherland, so it is important to act politely. We need to change the bad habits and become the gentlemen and ladies.
最近,我看到一个视频,是关于外国人如何看待中国游客。随着中国经济的快速发展,生活标准大大提高了,很多人有钱出国旅行。外国媒体报道由中国游客引起的疯狂情况。他们买了很多东西,带动了经济的发展。在外国人眼中,中国的游客都很有钱,但与此同时,他们对中国游客的行为感到烦恼。他们中的一些人会在旅游景刻字,并且有些人会随时随地吐痰。当我们在国外时,我们代表着祖国的形象,所以礼貌的行为是很重要的。我们需要改变坏习惯,成为绅士和淑女。
When I was very small, I was so envious about the adults, because they could do whatever they wanted and did not have to depend on their parents. For me, I did not have money and my parents limited my pocket money, so I couldn’t spend the money to buy whatever I wanted. It seems to me that being an adult is my only wish. Some day, I learned from the movie that being an adult was not that as perfect as I thought. In the movie, the man struggled to earn money to pay his bills, what’s more, he had to stay away from his family. Loneliness was always around him. To be independent means we can live our own way and make our own decision. We have more freedom. But at the same time, it also means more annoyance. So why just we enjoy this moment.
翻译
在我很小的时候,我很羡慕成年人,因为他们可以做任何他们想做的,不必依赖他们的父母。对我来说,我没有钱,我的父母限制我的零花钱,所以我无法花钱去买所有我想要的。似乎成为一个成年人是我唯一的愿望。有一天,我从这部电影中了解到,作为一个成年人也没有我想象中的那么完美。在电影中,那个人努力挣钱来支付他的账单,更重要的是,他不得不远离他的家人。寂寞总是是围绕着他。独立意味着我们可以有自己的方式生活,做自己的决定。我们有的自由。但与此同时,这也意味着的烦恼。所以为什么不享受这一刻呢。
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