新托福tpo28独立写作（共9篇）
Topic: parents are more involved in their children’s education than the parents in the past.It is not uncommon to see that parents are have incredible zael to participate into their children’s education in many perspectives.At contemporary society, parents always take part in some semilars that are related to students’s study and force their children to join the extra-curricula classes which can help their chldren to improve acdemic performance.Therefore, as far as I am considerd, nowadays, parents’ involvement in kids’ study is much more emphasized than ever before.Compared with the parents in the past,parents at present, have a strong will to make their children more competent in the future career.With the development of the society, the compitition in the modern society is increasingly fierce than ever before.Every parents want their children not only can survive in the compitition but also want them to be successful in the future.Hence, those parents take pains to achieve this ambitions on their own way and consequently, because they think education is the gateway to seccess, they should be involved in their children’ s study and help their children as well.On the contrary, because of the low living standre, parents in the past only think how to bring chilren up and let them survive, so there is no time for them to have such ambitions.Therefore, it is reasonable for us to think that parents nowdays are more interseted in children’s education.Additionally, it is universally acknowledged that in the modern era, parents have a extremely high expectation than in the past.Parents want their children to be versatile and prominent, which lead most part of children can not achieve this goal at all, thus, under this circumstance, parents will help children in personally that of course include preants’ participation in children’s study.By contrast, in the past, parents just make their children free and let them do what they want.Parents will not discipline children unless they make blunder.So, we can draw a conclusion that the untouchable expectation make parents involve more in the children’s study.In conclusion, because the increasingly competitive society and high expectation make parents nowdays have more zeat in children’s study and take part in it actively.But, from my perspective, parents should give enough space for children to manage their own study.
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.范文为博主根据考生习作修订而成，为博主和考生的共同原创作品，转载请务必注明出处谢谢！
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Some people claim that universities and colleges should not spend a great deal of money on sports and social activities, as their budgets should prioritize classes and libraries.However, as educational institutions, universities and colleges have an obligation to provide a wide range of knowledge to their students to help them develop academically and socially.More and more businesses require people who are not only specialists in their fields, but also skilled in social interaction.In the rapidly changing environments of science and the economy, no task can be done by a single person.Given the need for collaboration, social skills and team spirit are necessary qualities for any successful person.Clearly, sports and social activities in universities and colleges provide students with the perfect settings to practice their social skills.By playing football on a team or joining in a protest, for instance, students can develop a sense of belonging and experience team spirit, both of which may prove very important in building a career.Aside from fostering social skills and team spirit, sports and social activities can greatly improve students’ efficiency.Students need not play sports or participate in social activities at the expense of their academic study.Indeed, for some students, playing sports and joining in social activities are good stress reducers.Even the most enthusiastic people feel tired if they concentrate on one thing for too long.Frustrated and tired people can do nothing well if they do not recover from their bad situations.Students who have been frustrated in their academic work would be well-advised to play some sports or join in social activities.Academic education will always be at the heart of a university.In universities, sports and social activities should by no means take the place of a focus on academic study.What I believe is that universities and colleges should spend adequate money on academics as well as sports and social activities.For instance, in the United States, almost all famous universities have plenty of sports teams and social groups, and universities provide adequate financial support with these events.None of these universities have weakened their academic standards because of social movements or sports.For these reasons, I maintain that universities and colleges should spend enough money on academic education and social movements to prepare students for their future development.playing computer games can expand a child’s outlook.Some computer games that can be played on the Internet were devised by foreign companies.Playing these games gives children an excellent opportunity to communicate with “game friends” from all over the world, allowing them to learn about other countries and cultures.____________________________________________________________________________
附原稿（修订前）：
In the first place, the lack of exercises is the direct factor that contributes to the worsening of health condition. Under great pressure of work, I almost spend most of my time in the office and get used to work overtime. Arriving at home, I usually feel too tired to cook, let along doing exercises. The entertainment after work and during weekends seems only watching television, surfing on the Internet, or chatting with friends on the phone. The busy schedule of work squeezes my time of doing sports and contributes to the firming of my sedentary lifestyle. As a result, I become increasingly reluctant to do sports and avoid activities that need body strength. It is not surprising that both the health condition and stamina declines.
In the second place, to increase the amount of sports daily is an easy task. The simplest but most effective approach is to take a break every two hours while working. Sitting in front of the computer for long, I usually feel soar in the neck and shoulders, which must be the signal given by the body. Some of my colleagues told me that the symptoms can be alleviated by simply sparing few minutes to take a cup of coffee in the restroom and stretch arms and legs. Also from the perspective of a doctor, it takes effect in improving blood circulation. In addition, I am thinking of climbing stairs instead of taking elevators. I remember when I visited a doctor last time, he told me that every single step we climb will help us increase lifespan for seven seconds. Finally, my one year membership with the fitness club near my office will due soon, but I have not visited it for months. What a pity! It is time to spare at least half an hour per day after work to make good use of my membership. In fact, to make those changes come true does not take too much time or energy.
In the third place, personally, changing foods and releasing pressure are not good options. I am not the one who cooks in the family, so it is not me to decide the menu of the day. Moreover, there are not many choices available for lunch near my office. The one hour break only allows me to grab some fast food, such as hamburgers and pizzas. In fact, the pressure from work now is necessary for me to further improve professional skills, which are vital for promotion. As a new employee of the present company, I should work hard and strive to be a valuable member. So, stress relief is not feasible.
In a nutshell, I will spend more time on doing sports to improve health. It is not only because doing exercises is simple and effective, but also because it is the major factor causing my potential health problem.
20171202托福独立写作题目：
Out of the three things, which one would youprefer to regulate in order to improve your health?
1. The kind of food you eat
2. The amount of exercise
3. The amount of stress in your life
To begin with, the air pollution enveloping major cities has caused many diseases among the public. The level of PM2.5 in the air elevates frequently, especially during wintertime. It is inescapable for people to breath in those find particles doing harm to their respiratory system, as they walk on the street or sit in the office. The polluted air also prevents people from doing exercises outdoors, which further weakens people’s immune system. In addition, another invisible killer in the air is ozone during summertime, also called photochemical pollution. The chemical reaction of exhaust emission from automobiles catalyzed by sunlight also harms people’s respiratory system. In a word, the air pollution has become a serious threat on public health and its negative impacts may last for decades. It is high time that governments clean the air that people rely on for existence.
Secondly, the population living in seriously contaminated areas is on the rise. Guided by obsolete concepts, government officials of some regions have not realized the significance of sustainable development and purse economic growth at the expense of environment. Factories that fail to meet the standard of environment protection are still working at full strength, by emitting toxic air to the sky and dumping industry wastes to local water system. As a result, the food and water resources of people living near those factories are seriously affected. In the long run, pollutants people absorb in through breathing and daily diets will cause severe diseases, such as cancer. This is happening in too many places. Rich people are able to move to a new place without pollution, but for poor people, they have no choice but suffering from the hurts. To help those people, governments need to enact strict laws to regulate behavior of factories.
To sum up, measures should be taken to protect environment, in order to improve people’s health care. At this time, to clean the environment is definitely the issue of top priority that governments ought to address.
20171216托福独立写作题目：
The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
To start with, in consideration of the limited time in class, teachers should be aware of the necessity for students to do more practice after class. For most subjects, students take the course once or twice a week. Teachers need to make good use of the time to finish their teaching plans, like introducing a new terminology, explaining a complex concept, and demonstrating an interesting experiment. There is actually little time left for students to practice on their own which is significant for them to absorb knowledge. Therefore, teachers usually choose to assign homework. There is no exaggeration to say that a student’s academic performance to a large extend depends on his efforts made in doing homework. In a word, whether the homework a teacher assigns can encourage students to study on their own after class is of great importance.
Secondly, it is even better if a teacher is able to inspire students to do more researches and explore the field according to their interests. Normally, most schools merely require teachers to cover the content in textbooks and help students prepare standard tests, which only makes students to become mediocre. However, an outstanding teacher who aims at helping students explore potential and strive for excellence ought to encourage students to further expand their outlook and conduct in depth study. Students who are internally charged to work hard on a subject are able to acquire knowledge beyond what a teacher conveys in class. For example, a literature teacher may just have time to introduce one novel of a famous writer in detail, but his teaching will be more successful if he can inspire students to read more books of this writer or of others in the same era.
Admittedly, it is also important for teachers to help students plan their future and give a hand to students who need help. With a clear goal, students will become more motivated and more willing to make efforts. Also, it is a teacher’s duty to guarantee that all students have a successful high school life. A teacher’s failure to find those in difficulties may have little impact on his evaluation but may completely ruin those students’ study in high school. However, when a teacher is able to motivate students to even make more efforts after class, students will have satisfied or excellent academic performance which enables them to make future plans and overcome difficulties in study on their own.
To sum up, a successful teacher should possess a variety of qualities, including the ability to give students advices on future development, to find students’ special needs, to motivate students work hard after class. For all those requirements, the last one is especially important, as it helps students to become self-driven and hence capable of solving most problems in study on their own.
20171209托福独立写作题目：
Which one is the most important for high school teachers? (students aged 15 to 18)
1 the ability to give advice about planning for future
2 the ability to recognize students that need help
3 the ability to encourage students to learn on their own outside the classroom
Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? (1) No doubt, I choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. But B on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages.
The most important benefit of A is that___________________.
To achieve the same effect, B will__________________.
Another benefit of A, which B almost cannot achieve, is that___________________.
Although B also has its seemingly profound advantages, it can only be achieved conditionally because_________________________.
After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: to choose A is a wise action.
(2)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer__________ because I think A has more advantages.
There are numerous reasons why________, and I would here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that___________. It can be given a concrete example_____________.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that___________. Take the case of a thing that_______________. One very strong argument for A is that__________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_____________________.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, __________.
练习量的事情，如果备考时间是一个月，那可以每天写一篇，考前的练习要速度和质量兼顾;如果备考时时间比较长，大概有2-3个月的时间，前两个月可以一周写两道三篇，主要注重质量，包括结构，逻辑，拓展，语言，考前一个月每天练习，要提升速度。切记“三个小时一篇作文和三十分钟一篇作文不是一个概念”。
2. 备考计划细节之“字数”
在托福的独立写作中，字数很重要，官方要求的字数是300+，但是一般情况的学生都能写到400字左右，快一点的学生可以写到500-600字，整体上来说，字数多一点会有优势，但是这个优势是建立在质量的基础上的，所以先保证质量，字数多一点是好事。
3. 备考计划细节之“语法”
语法是语言多样的基础，如果语法不好，各种句子写的乱七八糟，语言的多样性也就没有意义了，提高语言的直接办法就是去研究写作常用的语法知识，当然也可以结合一些汉译英的翻译练习综合提高，语法对于写作而言很重要，一定要扎实。
托福写作：病句的改进
1. I am not good at maths, but English
改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
3.It is children who clear about their interests.
改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)
改进: I agree with the latter idea.
5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)
改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
8. No one knows all the things.
改进: No one knows everything.
9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.
改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.
改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
13. They will learn the bad habits.
改进: They will develop bad habits.
14. In this continued process, people make progress.
改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
20. I felt alone.
21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
23. What’s about nonsmokers?
改进: What about nonsmokers?
24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
托福写作过渡词分类
过渡词在托福写作中可以分成两类，分别表示时间和空间。
1、表示时间的
af first 起初
after a while 一会儿
after that 那以后
after that 那以后
after/before dark 天黑后/前
afterward 后来
as a young man 当…… 是个年轻人的时候
as early as 早……的时候
as soon as 一……就……
at last 终于
at the age of… 在……岁的时候
before, the other day 几天前
earlier, until now 直到现在
early in the morning 大清早
eventually 最终
finally 最后
immediately 立即、马上
in no time 不一会儿
in the end 最后
lately近来
later 后来
meanwhile=in the meantime=at the same time 在此期间、同时
next 接下来
one afternoon 一天下午
one day 有一天
one morning 一天早晨
recently 最近
since then 自从那时起
soon 不久
Soon/shortly after ……之后不久
suddenly=all of a sudden 突然
then 然后
to begin/start with=in the first place 首先、第一点
2、表示空间的
above 在上方
across 在……的另一边
against 靠着、抵着
around 在周围
at the back of 在后面
at the bottom of 在底部
before 在前
behind 在后
below 在下方
close to 靠近
further on 再往前
in front of 在前面
in the front of 在前面
in the middle of 在中间
near to 在……附近
next to 与……相邻
on the edge of 在……的边上
on the right/left 在右/左边
on top of 在……的顶部
opposite to 与……相对
over 垂直在上
to the right/left 朝右/左
挑选合适的托福独立写作题目类资料，小编认为大家需要具有一定的“品位”，绝不能随意找一份来历不明价值成谜的资料就开始练笔，否则很有可能是在浪费时间，优质的托福作文题目资料需要满足以下这些条件：
1. 官方权威性
托福考试是有ETS机构主办的，而作为训练资料，官方提供的资源自然更具有权威性和参考价值，特别是对于刚开始备考的新手考生来说，缺乏对托福独立写作的基本认识，大家并不清楚考试到底会出哪些题目。这种时候选择官方渠道的备考资料作文题目，显然能够帮助大家更好地了解托福独立写作的出题情况和特点，为考试打好基础。
2. 思路拓展性
优质的托福独立写作题目资料要能够启发和拓展考生的写作思路。看过一些机经类资料的同学可能会发现，如今托福写作特别是独立写作的题目涉及范围可以说是越来越“野路子”了。有些题目初看之下甚至会让准备不足的考生根本不知道应该如何选择观点和展开论述。而想要具有应对各类偏门作文题目的能力，考生的写作思路和视野就必须足够宽广才行。这也就意味着大家在选择练笔作文题目时，不能只练习那些中规中矩，一看就能想出一大堆例子素材的作文题目，否则虽然备考训练的时候会轻松一些，但到了考试中就有可能会被完全没见过也没有思路的题目偷袭而影响发挥和得分。
3. 考试关联性
In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that_____. Otherwise， the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.
To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion， the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.
As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally， the arguer must provide evidence to _____.
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.
In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument， we need more information about that____.
以上的这些内容就是托福写作中，最为常用的结尾范例，大家不妨在托福写作中多加练习使用。希望小编带来的资料能为大家的托福备考带来帮助。
托福写作8个热门话题构思
1、同意上大学好
(1)为未来工作进行准备
(2)交更多的朋友，学习他们的思维方式
(3)系统的学习知识
I think going to the college is the better policy.
First， preparing for you future career by learning the basic knowledge will increase your competitive power. The college is the best place where can supply you with the background knowledge of your future career.
Second， you can make more friends and learn the way of their thinking. You will be influenced by intellectual companions. You can also build up your social network in your college and make your friends be your resources.
Last， you can benefit from going to the college by learning the knowledge in a systematic way which is more efficient.
2、同意父母是最好的老师
(1)父母从小就和我们在一起，给我们很多的知识
(2)父母和我们最为亲密，在任何时候，都会毫无保留地给我们知识
(3)父母最了解我们，所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的
I totally agree with that parents are the best teacher.
First， they raised us up thus spending the most time with us. During the process， they teach us every tiny things in daily life.
Second， they are most intimate to us and generous to give us the knowledge and lessons whenever， whatever， wherever we need.
Last， they are the people who know us best， the suggestions and advices they give can result in the solutions we need based on the specific situation of our own.
3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯
(1)食品容易准备，节省了大量的时间，使人们可以做其他事情
(2)食品容易准备，为人们提供了更多的花样。
(3)食品容易准备，为人们的健康带来了很多好处
Easy to prepare food saves us amounts of time， (so we can do other things like studying， working or taking care of children. ) It releases people from the time-consuming cook process.
Second， the semi-prepared food also offers us with more choices. For instance， if I can only cook Chinese food， the microwave spaghetti sold in the supermarket offer me a new flavor.
Last， many people cook in an unhealthy way. We can benefit from the fast-preparing food cos they have been throng rigid quality and healthy tests before launching.
4、首先进行比较，然后说书是最重要的来源
(1)读书能够节省很多时间
(2)书是有系统性的，能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识
(3)读书相对比较便宜和容易，而在寻 找经验则比较昂贵和困难
Book is more important source.
Reading saves you a lot of time while learning certain knowledge. However， learning by experience can be time-consuming. For instance， I want to handle the Microsoft excel. Learning by the teaching material is efficient.
Second， books are arranged in a systematic way which allows you to gain the knowledge scientifically and fast.
Last， reading is relatively easy and cheap but experiencing can be tough and expensive sometime. Like you want to know America， reading a book is much more economical than going there instead
5、先说明优势和劣势，让后说同意建一个工厂
(1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业，对地方的经济有很大的贡献
(2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展，例如小商店，药店等等，这可以大大方便附近的居民
(3)建造工厂，赢利后，就可以向当地政府贡献税收，政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务
6、一个重要的改变就是改变环境，让它变的更好
(1)环境好能改善人的身体健康，很多人因为环境而生病
(2)环境好了，吸引更多的游客来旅游
(3)环境好能够促进经济发展，吸引更多的商人来投资
7、电影和电视影响人的行为
(1)电影和电视能够让人们迅速了解整个国家和世界，丰富人的知识，让人们更加乐观
(2)电影和电视让人变的懒惰，不愿意和人接触
(3)电影和电视让人变的violent
8、电影和电视没有破坏朋友和家人的交流
(1)电影和电视的很多内容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要内容。没有电影和电视，似乎聊天就缺了很多内容。
(2)我们在很多时候是和朋友和家人一起欣赏电影和电视的，这促进了交流
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